American Comics: Hacker Spider-Man

I have caught up with the latest chapter now Why is this book not doing so well, and there are even no people in the comment section at the end? First of all, there are many typos. The author also talked about the input method in his words, but it has not been greatly improved so far. Moreover, the fundamental problem is that the author does not check errors carefully. Secondly, the rhythm in the later period was messed up. I was able to read it purely because I liked the author's writing style. Judging from the current situation, this book may not even have a million words, unless a lot of water is added later. Again, the combat power of this game is actually unbalanced. Fundamentally speaking, the method for the protagonist to increase his combat power relies entirely on golden fingers, and there is almost no growth (there is only one increase, which is to increase the starting combat power to Heavenly Father-level combat power). What's more, things in Xiao Po Biao's world view are quite unbalanced. Finally, the author's updates are not very fast. This is your third book. As we all know, many authors become gods in their third book. You had this opportunity to become a minor god, but you didn't cherish it at all. As above, typos were not checked, and the combat power was unbalanced. From a book with the qualifications of a minor god, it turned into a useless fast food article. To sum up, the author Mouse Tail Juice.

I have read nearly 300 chapters. The first exciting point was that Bant turned into an alien hero and shocked the people on earth and the universe, turned the tide, and formed his own power. However, as the plot develops, this exciting point gradually disappears, or I get used to it, but it is also a common problem in most cool stories. People are no longer surprised by Bant's abilities or their surprised words and deeds are the same as before. In addition, Bant's invincible ability in this novel and his general understanding of the Marvel worldview make the plot basically free of ups and downs, and everything seems to be under control. However, these do not affect this to be a good fan novel, of course only in the early and middle stages of the plot.

Now that I have seen Chapter 332, I feel that the first two copies are well set up. Advantages: The protagonist does not procrastinate in doing things, and his style is relatively stable. The author is also good at expressing the characters' various thoughts, and has ideas for new plots. He does not stay stuck in the framework of the original movie or comic, and combines the characters of the two works very well. Disadvantages: It is a bit delayed after the last chapter. The villains such as Morjas, Hela, and Dark Elves are not as well written as before. Summary: I would give it 9 out of 10 points. It is a masterpiece among American comic novels. The protagonist's abilities are reasonably upgraded, and the author's writing is good. If it matches the radio wave, it should be considered a masterpiece.

I haven't read more than 140 chapters. The male protagonist has the unique arrogance of a time traveler. He believes that everything in this world belongs to him. As long as he discovers and knows the plot, he can get an element that Tony's father has researched. He can create it by waiting for Tony himself, but the male protagonist says that it was his creation. It's really disgusting. I haven't seen such a disgusting male protagonist for a long time Little Broken Biao Noah's Ark is a cosmic communicator, but you use it to kill people If Azmis finds out, you are not qualified to take Little Broken Watch at all It's so disgusting:

After all, it's not cost-effective for me, a superhero, to bear the guilt of murder and negative publicity. The criminals have been caught, but the public opinion does not kill these super criminals, and even the US government is greedy for profits, then the entire society deserves more people to die. Super criminals don't change until they die until no one can stand them anymore. What qualifications does a New York policeman have to mess with his life for a few hundred bucks a month, and a superhero who sacrifices his life to save people and catch bad guys? If the public doesn't want to dirty their hands and doesn't want to parade and execute criminals, then the public deserves more deaths.

Why do hackers need to add Spider-Man? It's a small broken watch, not powerful.

Will Xiao Po Biao repair the genetic problem of the host?

Please write less about the villains in Hackers or something like that, it makes people look confused. I'm here to see Marvel and Spider-Man, but you're trying to make someone else's business.

Actually come across this book a few times, but I am not very interested in it. First of all, I haven't read much about Marvel, and even less about Spider-Man. There is only "The Amazing Spider-Man", but this does not affect reading this book. Secondly, if it weren't for this book, I wouldn't have been able to remember "The Young Hackers", because when I read it, I always watched one episode here and there, and then I didn't know when to watch another episode. The combination of the two gives me the feeling that it is very novel, and the plot design is pretty good. But my personal little problem: First, it's obviously called Hacker Spider-Man, but what? In the whole text, Spider-Man's identity or symbolic objects (for example, spider silk, armor) are almost rare (I mean there are very few plots where the protagonist uses this aspect) Secondly, Spider-Man's growth process is a bit less. Although it is okay to always write around the protagonist, if you later build the heavenly union in the work, you must have people. It is impossible for the protagonist to do everything by himself, so I think it is still necessary to write about supporting characters occasionally. (Just a suggestion, don't affect the original plan) These are my thoughts for now Finally, attach a picture to express my feelings.

Speed ​​Bump is a DNA sample taken by Omnitrix from a Hedgehog on an unknown planet called "Sonic's World" in the Sonic the Hedgehog Universe. His abilities include greatly enhanced speed, agility, senses and agility, electricity control, afterimages and spin blasts. Painkiller (originally meaning painkiller) is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from a Czarnian on the planet Czarnia in the DC Multiverse. His powers include enhanced physiology, immortality, invulnerability, and self-disintegration. Atlas is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from a Titanian Eternal from Titan in the Marvel Multiverse. His abilities include enhanced physiology, enhanced intelligence, immortality, telepathy and material manipulation Cosmigod is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from an Asgardian in Asgard in the Marvel Multiverse. He possesses all the abilities of a regular Asgardian, including flight and cosmic energy manipulation Solarstorm is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from a Kryptonian on Krypton in the DC Multiverse. He has all the abilities of a regular Superman. Quastar is a DNA sample of a Spatialsapien taken from Black Hole 0 by Omnitrix. His abilities include immortality, space manipulation, gravity manipulation, space survivability, temperature immunity, flight, field distortion, celestial body generation and control Dystopia is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from a Shade in the Shadow Realm. His abilities include void walking, void summoning, thorn bone spurs and weapon generation Void is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from an unknown species on an unknown planet. His ability is to create black holes Hellbent (originally meaning Last Stand) is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from a Spirit of Vengeance in the Extra-Dimensional Realm of Hell in the Marvel Multiverse. His powers include enhanced physiology, accelerated healing, emotion reading, sin consulting, sin deprivation, manipulation of hellfire, mind reading, soul consumption, mystical chain projection, and the penitent gaze. ThunderColt is a DNA sample taken by the Omnitrix from an Alicorn in the My Little Pony Universe. His abilities include enhanced physiology, a magical body, sharp horns and winged flight.

It was very good at the beginning and the writing was good, either Thanos was cleansed or killed, and that Mojas, well, the two of them went back and forth. At first, Dr. Dong Wu said to kill him, but now it goes back and forth. Why, with Superman X, he doesn't care about anything, well, I'm convinced.

The author's description of Nick makes this character not like a high-ranking spy chief but a clown in the circus. Even though what Nick does in the MCU is indeed a clown, this character's character is upright, and his words and deeds are tense, not The author's comic, who is like a street gangster and makes jokes with others, deliberately turns the issue of profit distribution into a farce... If you don't know how to write this kind of character, you don't have to write it. Let Coulson contact the protagonist in the early stage, and then find an opportunity to kill Nick. Why destroy the character...

The Dutch brother plays the small class, and now he is really a hacker Spider-Man 😄

I really don't think Spider-Man has any popularity in online novels. They're all written badly.

There are too few alien heroes in the middle and late stages. Almost all the writing about the protagonist is spent on building forces. There are very few scenes where the alien hero actually fights. In such a big scene as the Battle of Manhattan, the protagonist is as if he has not participated in the war. All the writing is given to Loki. Your writing about Loki is good, but it makes the protagonist more slutty.

Nowadays, Qidian's recommendations are basically arranged based on follow-up reading, and the requirements for follow-up reading of light novel fan songs are very high. So I'm here to ask for some follow-up reading🥺 The new book issue is basically two updates, the quantity is relatively small, and I understand everyone's idea of ​​​​keeping books. But I still hope you can help me click on the latest chapter and stay there for thirty seconds (you can help me hang it up when I'm busy). The young author is very grateful 🥺 I have always wanted to write a fanfic about a young hacker, but after looking around, I found that most of them are eunuchs. Perhaps the audience for teenage hackers is relatively small? But no matter what other people think, I still want to write my own stuff more, and I won't cut off my books just because my grades are too bad. Please don't worry.

Kronosha's time bomb is a level 19.5 Technology, and its power can destroy the multiverse Xiaobiao is a level 20 technology, but the children's toys in the 25th dimension are also level 20 technology The Tianwaitian Protoss (X Superman) is much higher than the life in the 25th dimension The destruction of the Yuan Universe cannot harm the Heavenly Gods, and the Heavenly Gods can destroy the multiverse just by thinking But a single Heavenly God will also die due to the destruction of the Omniverse A plurality of Heavenly Gods thinking together can prevent the destruction of the Omniverse.

It's really long-winded, explaining over and over again in one sentence.

I feel that the Flame Man is really one of the most practical aliens. He has high physical strength, can fly, has various fire abilities, can also absorb fire, and has a high fire limit.

Thanos or whatever, let him die cleanly. The unbeatable and persistent villain affects the reading experience

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Not much else to say, food and grass, but you damn thing, I just ordered everything and it's free in the afternoon?

The male protagonist traveled to the world view of the X-Men and obtained a small broken watch But he did not, and was recognized by the small broken watch It happened that the time period he traveled through was Magneto, and when he planned to transform all humans into mutants, he was also affected by the machine, and finally mutated into a mutant As a result, due to the lack of genes, his body was about to collapse and die At this time, the small broken watch was activated, bound the male protagonist, and repaired the male protagonist's genes Stop.

It was pretty good in the first and middle stages, but it became increasingly weak later on. The protagonist's presence was lower than that of the supporting characters, and it wasn't that exciting. I had no desire to watch it.

So are there any books about small broken watches?

The update time is getting longer and longer, are you running out of time? Just run, at least fill out the blood and error forms for your fellow fans to have fun before leaving 😢

I saw the audio novel of this book on Bilibili, so I came here because of it (mainly because of ben10). I find it quite interesting so far. Good luck to the author! (Show off your watch and badge by the way)

It's going to be over so soon👿Why don't you write more?

So this is a multi-female story? Does the heroine have Gwen? ?