One Piece: Twelve Talismans

The Twelve Spells are inherently slow to gather, and they are divided into stars. This is what scares me when reading Pirates stories. The Shuang stories are uncomfortable to read, and the pace is slow and dragging. If you can't attract people in the early stage, it will be a matter of time.

Studio Ai model article, but it will be updated after a hundred chapters

I just read it, and you have already written two books. I personally suggest that if this one is also written, write it under a new title.

This is the Twelve Talismans

It's not interesting, just go to pirates to play business wars or something like that

Also, twelve talismans,,,,,? ? ? ? It was over then and I shouted

It's a little out of place in One Piece, and Zoro doesn't feel like he likes famous swords that much.

Not good looking, like a simple answer. Write complex

It's amazing that this book has actually been put on the shelves.

Drawing a lottery can also draw people out, and drawing a spell can also divide stars.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

If you create a clone, you are still afraid of being scapegoated. The navy umbrella that has colluded with you to label you should be chopped off with one knife. Why keep it? They are all clones. What the hell are you afraid of?

Vaccination, can draw out characters

So here comes the question, is this one better, or [Pirates·Get Twelve Talisman at the Beginning] is better That one has already killed Im in more than 100 chapters, and now it's making me laugh a lot more

Should I write or not? I think it's bad.

Finished Spreading Flowers 😍 When will the new book be released 🤓

Although the writing is very sloppy, it is finally finished.