She Has Become a Goddess Husband, Who Needs the Superstar System?

Hi hi! The belated trial reading was finally in place, and I vaguely remembered that I had already sent it. Unexpectedly, when I turned over the records one day, I found that it was still lying in my memo (a little embarrassing)... But! I have to lament that the author has so many and broad avenues. He does not write about dads or e-sports, but he writes about entertainment dog food. It has a different flavor. The sense of substitution (is it inappropriate for an ordinary protagonist to marry a goddess wife?), The feeling of refreshment (piapia slaps in the face), and the feeling of satiety (love dog food) are all online. Readable, fast reading! Book title: "You have become a goddess husband, who needs a superstar system" Author: Hanmen Work status: Serialization (current word count is 8.7W, at the time of writing the post) Plot summary: Note that this man is called Xiaoshuai. Yes, he is really just a handsome guy, but his wife is the national goddess and beautiful. After marrying his wife Bai Fumei, he was suddenly shot in the head by the system. Ah, this is okay! Then let's have a good harvest in love and career~ [Feeling of immersion] The setting of the ordinary male protagonist gives people a sense of immersion. Xiaoshuai, hello, handsome guy is embarrassed to call himself, Xiaoshuai would be overly modest and arrogant if he denies it. The difficulties of celebrities' hidden marriage partners add to the sense of reality. The mother-in-law is always unhappy with the male protagonist and is quite difficult. The family is not going well, the career is frustrated, and the relationship is concealed for the sake of the wife's career. After reading so much celebrity gossip recently, I feel that despite the halo, being a partner with a celebrity also has many difficulties. The heroine is of the same age as the prototype fairy sister, which enhances the sense of reality. There are more stories on the market that fall in love during the period of Little Dragon Girl, but at the age when the story is set, it seems real, but also seems to be isolated from reality. The heroine participating in the work is privately designed by the author. In a sense, the fairy sister is just a prototype. Speaking of the unpleasant things about the mother-in-law, in fact, in my opinion, this unpleasant mother-in-law is more like an arrogant and coquettish little BOSS. When the protagonist reaches a higher level, he slaps her in the face, and all the problems will be solved. Feeling good Although the golden finger of the protagonist is a system, the "soft rice" of the goddess wife is not a golden thigh. In addition, the friends of the protagonist's "League of Losers" have no reason to believe that the hand speed of the novel's code wording is increased, and the golden fingers and golden thighs almost turn the protagonist into a golden man. The choice of the movie "The Silent Truth" is also in line with the needs and development of the plot. As for the metaphor of pushing people down the mountain, I would shudder if I were the mother-in-law. The progress of the wife's career serves as a supplement to the main plot, which heats up the emotional drama and makes more efficient use of the superstar system's golden finger. The tentacle monster incident in the Wukai novel provided funds for the action, which progressed step by step and blossomed everywhere. Maybe there will be a great game that reveals the vest in the future. Feeling Full and Stomach Compared with other young people's novels from Qidian. Com, this one actually has a bit of a "noon red" flavor. The prototype of the heroine is the fairy sister, but looking at the novel as a whole, it is more like creating a character based on the fairy sister's template. The other characters are also privately designed. They may have echoes of reality, but the correspondence is not as obvious as the fairy sister. From the reader's perspective, the protagonist is in love with a fairy sister from a parallel world. The character of the heroine is also in line with the audience's imagination of her. She is as pale as a chrysanthemum, pure and pure. Looking at the harmonious expression of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and the tacit understanding and trust conveyed by small details and small actions, I thought that the author's family must be very happy and harmonious to create such a loving character. Rhythm: ★★★★☆ Writing: ★★★★☆ Setting: ★★★★ Overall Comment: It is an entertaining piece of writing that has a relatively broad and wild approach, but has a good sense of rhythm and excitement. Suitable reader types: Readers of entertainment articles, readers of slap-in-the-face articles, readers of son-in-law articles, readers of dog food articles, and old readers from poor families {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"Topic Id":"847869428930183168","TopicName":"New book test poison"}{"TopicId":"581882633764667392","TopicName":"New book"}

Too short, too short, too short...

I have read more than 70 chapters, the pace is so slow, 😥 I can't stand it anymore

The book is actually a good book, but it was spoiled by the author in the early stages. The secret dragging and crazy interpretation at the end immediately put off most readers. After more than 100 chapters, the pace picked up and they were basically readable.

Dad's Literary Life and Yang Xiaoluo's Cheap Dad are very well written, and the author was very high-spirited at the time. The last two books were almost finished, and they were not too good, so I just finished the book. As a result, the results of the next few books were not so good. The setting of this book is not bad now. Come on, I hope the author can return to the top.

She's already over thirty, and like the fairy sister, her body has passed its peak state. When a woman's body begins to deform rapidly, no matter how well you protect her, there is a big difference between someone in her thirties and someone in her twenties. Wouldn't the author write her age a little younger? , Twenty-seven or eight is fine,,,

Another suggestion: I suggest you adjust the way the mother-in-law is written. Today's young readers are basically less able to be wronged, and they don't want to be oppressed. If it were me, it would be difficult for me to endure my mother-in-law being so mean and mean for a long time. I guess it's hard for young people to tolerate it too. Therefore, it is recommended to reduce the mother-in-law's satire on the protagonist. During this period of time, she wants to accompany the heroine to experience life. Then let the nanny secretly observe and the mother-in-law stand still. After the male protagonist gets the remuneration from the literary website, he can take the initiative to communicate with the mother-in-law, which can relieve some of the mother-in-law's emotions. Wait until the TV series is released and becomes a hit, then communicate to get rid of the remaining emotions. Prejudices formed over a long period of time cannot be reversed in one communication, but require continuous communication in the middle. You can't expect to wait for great success before communicating to eliminate bias. It is possible that even before success, prejudices and contradictions have accumulated to the point where they are irreconcilable.

1. The heroine's age setting of 35 already shows that this book is not very long. 2. The male protagonist is equivalent to a bride-in-law, and is ridiculed by the mother-in-law. 3. There are no children after marriage. I don't know when the author plans to write about pregnancy and childbirth. The heroine's age will increase by one when she is pregnant in October. There are fewer and fewer roles to play. How many resources can be used to buff the heroine. 4. For the male protagonist to have a system, it must be the director and director, and he must be strong enough to lead the female protagonist to deal with the mother-in-law's routine, which is a perfect template for the Dragon King with a crooked mouth. To sum up, the character settings in this book are too much, and the crooked-mouthed Dragon King routine is too much.

A little suggestion, please speed up. How many chapters have you written for a 12-episode drama? Make it more concise and write only that much for the filming plot. Is it important for the plot of the young actors behind you? It's too procrastinating to write these all the time. 😅 Will it take so long to write a drama later? People who read your book either want to read entertainment stories, which are too slow, or want to read love stories, and they keep writing about filming plots, which makes people not so happy.

It's too inky, and the pace is super slow. I've finished filming about 100 of the first TV pictures given by the system. This is not filling in water, it's like filling in some words into the sea from time to time. I can't read it, a lot of boring and useless descriptions. There are also various useless branch lines that interrupt the rhythm, and the proportion of branch lines is too heavy. Also, it's too licky and disgusting. The advantage is that the setting is good, and the first TV I chose has a good connection with my actual situation, but the writing is not that exciting. Just licking my mother-in-law hard, and a little bit of Stockholm, suppressing me for half my life. The words "be careful not to be deceived" actually made the protagonist burst into tears. Is he sick?

1. The first drama was not completed until Chapter 109. 2. There are a lot of descriptions of shooting details, which are very large and boring. 3. There are a lot of plots in TV dramas that make readers want to watch the TV series again in the book. To summarize the above three points for new book friends, please weigh whether you can tolerate it before deciding whether to continue reading.

What the hell, is this a superstar system? This is clearly a dog-licking system. It's too poisonous. You should go to a female channel.

Does anyone know if Qidian has a function to block authors? I didn't finish the first one and was forced to quit.

The hero and heroine went to Dali for location scouting and were photographed by paparazzi holding hands intimately. The relationship between the couple was exposed. If we go by what I said before and interpret it as location scouting for new dramas, there is a problem. After all, their relationship as husband and wife is real, and it will be announced eventually. The current explanation will be considered deception when it is announced in the future. In fact, the paparazzi were able to discover their relationship because both the hero and heroine no longer wanted to keep it a secret. In this case, why not make it official? This is also more in line with the character settings of the male and female protagonists.

Hanmen, have you sold your account? I was poisoned by my mother-in-law in the first chapter, and she kept scolding the male protagonist later on. How could such a mother teach the female protagonist, and still have the nerve to talk about a loving couple? How good is the writing by my dad? Why are you so lazy now?

Starting from Chapter 137, the chapters where the male protagonist's father appears are a bit broken. It is not a good choice for the heroine to call her father without telling the hero. The husband and wife should communicate with each other and have a heart-to-heart talk. They should not rely on their feelings to think that the husband wants to repair the relationship with his father-in-law, and then make his own decision to call the father-in-law. Instead, he should discuss it with the husband. If the husband does not agree, and the wife feels that the husband is saying things that are against her will, she should give more comfort and do some ideological work to understand her husband. From the previous article, it can be seen that the male protagonist is not that stubborn. He handles his partners, colleagues, and his mother-in-law who are vicious to him. He handles them very well and has a high emotional intelligence. Why did he complain so much to his father just because he was working outside to make money and had no time to contact him? While saying that he has never been short of money since he was a child, he thinks that his father doesn't care about him because he doesn't care. After more than 10 years of being an unknown actor, the male protagonist should have seen the ups and downs of society. How can he even complain about such father's care? If the female protagonist is willing to communicate with the male protagonist, express her desire to help her husband reconcile with her parents, and give the legitimate reason that a daughter-in-law always has to meet her parents-in-law, and the relationship with the elders must be repaired for the sake of their future, I believe the male protagonist will agree. Even after the heroine saw through the male protagonist's verbal disapproval of his integrity, even asking the male protagonist to invite the father-in-law in a coquettish way was better than the current self-initiated operation.

The role of this mother-in-law is very poorly portrayed. Originally, the script, acting and development of the protagonist were good, but this mother-in-law comes out every chapter and calls the protagonist a waste, and then emphasizes the love between husband and wife. The husband and wife are really loving. How can a wife watch her mother-in-law scold her man every day? The key is very dramatic. Does the author want to write about the development path of the protagonist, or a plot about family ethics?

The door-to-door son-in-law is boring and looked down upon by others. He has skills but doesn't develop them and is even more speechless.

This is the beginning, what kind of extra son-in-law story, the mother-in-law is also amazing, the male protagonist is also a loser, don't worry, later on the male protagonist relies on the system to support himself, and her mother kneels down and licks her again

Is the author such a loser to the protagonist in daily life? The description of the decadent man in the middle who is obviously married but seems to be living under someone else's roof and accomplishing nothing is so expressive.

Han Da's male protagonist surnamed Yang is as good as ever Yang Guoyi is determined to marry Xiao Longnu haha I haven't watched it yet. I believe Han Da can return to the top. Come on

The writing is really bad, and the writing in the later stage is good. Those people's brains are really not good. They are like this in the early stage. No matter how good it is in the later stage, what can they do? The first two chapters directly persuade them to quit. They really have no brains. They really have the skills.

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When I read Dad's Literary Life, it was very well written. Why did he change the genre and write it directly from the first thirty chapters to persuade him to quit 🤔

I want to know what kind of mentality my mother-in-law has when she writes this, and what kind of mentality I have

I have been reading books written by poor families since Yang Xiaoluo. My personal favorites are "Yang Xiaoluo's Cheap Daddy" and "I'm Really Not a Guest Daddy" (yes, my favorite novels are daddy novels now). What I admire most about Humble Family's writing style is that it has very upright views, but for young people, it may feel a little too upright. So suggested. It can be in the book. Add a character who is responsible for livening up the atmosphere, like a supporting character like the Six Immortals of Peach Valley. Secondly, in the new book, the protagonist's filming of "The Hidden Corner" will naturally remind people of his marriage, making people feel that the inspiration for the TV series comes from his inner activities. His friends' reaction after reading the script is the reaction that most people will have. Therefore, after he makes this TV series and releases it, it will not be easy to explain to his wife and mother-in-law. Because no matter how you explain it, there will always be a thorn in your heart. Therefore, it is best for the protagonist to find a typical case that exists in reality, and then draw materials from this typical case.

There is a reason for the poor performance. None of the characters are likable, even the heroine, because her behavior and personality are inconsistent with her, let alone the mother-in-law. The most disgusting thing is the setting of the male protagonist. What I see is not a man who gives up his career for love, but a weak man who is incapable of doing nothing, and then makes excuses for himself because of how high-minded he is. In addition, he is extremely stupid.

Not bad, not bad. It really didn't disappoint me. The protagonist's surname is Yang Yangyang Zhao Qian Sun Li, Zhou Wu Zheng Wang, Feng Chen Chu Wei, Jiang Chen Han There are so many. Do you dare to change?

Actually first! Gotta dry it!

The writing is too awkward, it's just a forced plot. Gone