Just Preparing for the College Entrance Examination, What the Hell Is Going on with the Counterattack?

After seeing the plot of the game, I couldn't stand it anymore! The plot is as vulgar as it was ten years ago. Withdrawn

A punishment system that is rare these days. If you don't learn how to get electric shocks, if you don't play the guitar quickly, you will get electric shocks...

It's right to have bad grades. After it was put on the shelves, it looked ugly and its writing level plummeted. Learning to be a master of literature is not a master of literature. Urban literature is not urban literature. Entertainment literature is not entertainment literature. Don't stick to the three.

I stopped watching it. The more I watched it, the more boring it became. I was attracted by the campus life in the early stage. It was originally a campus story about ordinary students' counterattack against youth, but later on it suddenly turned into a protagonist with a rich family background. Going to college turned into an exciting story about starting a business. It became more and more boring.

In order to urge myself not to be lazy, I wrote a post as evidence. Ten thousand words updated every day! The first phase lasts for one hundred days! Start counting today!

The previous one is okay, at least the main line is clear. Later, after college, I began to immerse myself in self-release, and I couldn't distinguish the priorities. I felt that in the end the protagonist became a robot cat, able to solve everything, and at the same time, I gave the greatest benefit to others, and I only wanted to help? Business hegemony? Not like; college sweetheart? It's not like that; it's a bit different, and it looks like I'm losing my IQ!

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The writing about high school doesn't look like a school, it looks like a sect in a fantasy novel, which is too unconventional.

Around Chapter 170, the two main characters are still trying to get along with each other. I really can't stand it anymore if my three views don't change.

The high school part is classified as grain and above. Both the plot and writing are pretty good, and there are no logical flaws. It is recommended But there are some problems in the summer college part On the one hand, it is the grasp of details. The author wants to transfer the Pokémon IP, but in the arcade city chapter, he writes that there is Pikachu in the claw machine. Uh, no, when you write it yourself, do you code without thinking about what elements are repeated? On the other hand, it is a business issue. The author is trying to start a business with the top IP Bubble Mart and Genshin Impact? Zelda? Open world? Player community mall? Well, the stitching is a bit outrageous, giving me a sense of déjà vu that I want to make my own innovation but can't. The plot of the game club gives people a strong feeling that the summer copy is upgraded too fast to be grasped, and the campus script is forced to restart Here I suggest you learn how to write other rebirth stories about the dual advancement of campus careers. You are taking this step too far.

The beginning of the book is okay, but the more you read to the end, the more tired you become. From the previous relaxed and enjoyable systematic text, it suddenly turned into an old-fashioned financial business war. I can't say it's poorly written, I can only say it's not what everyone wants to see. I'll see you in the next book.

Drive high and go low, you can see some of them from the front to the shelves. I haven't figured out readers' preferences, so learn a lesson.

The next part is a commercial film. To be honest, it doesn't make much sense. It's just about calculating and scheming. I thought it was about science and technology, or about daily life, but it turns out it's more about business, and it doesn't count as a powerful novel. It's awkward no matter how you read it.

The students are getting worse and worse, which leads to the teachers who come out after graduation are getting worse and worse, and the teachers are getting worse and worse, which leads to the students getting worse and worse, and it is an endless cycle. In the past, there was a shortage of teachers, and the teachers were getting better and better, and the students' grades were getting better and better, and the students were getting better and better, and the teachers were getting better and better. I don't know who broke the positive cycle. If you are sailing against the current and do not advance, you will retreat.

It's quite good-looking, and the writing is quite fresh, but I just don't want to read it because of the two heroines! This kind of campus pure love + science and technology stream is not suitable for jumping back and forth in the relationship between men and women. The style of painting is not suitable, okay! I watched more than half of it and couldn't stand it anymore.

After seeing chapter 130, I lost the motivation to read on.

Just keep pulling? Two heroines

The more I read, the more boring I become... It was interesting in high school, but in college I don't know what to write anymore? Whether you start your own business or go to a club to create games! Neither of the two female protagonists dare to confirm their relationship, while the male protagonist transforms into a doraemon and can do whatever he wants!

How dare you take a break, please update ten chapters a day😡

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the Queen? Isn't the diva talking about the singer?

I've read it, but I can't read it anymore.

，，，       ，， This book seems to be a copycat of a book. The plot is different, but the male and female characters are similar. That book has one more heroine than you. It has three heroines. One heroine is a transfer student and a singer, one is a top student and a childhood sweetheart, and one is a senior and a novel author. You have a similar personality. I forgot the name of the author. It was still on the list last year. You can take a look at his writing method, Then there is the punishment system, which is not popular in this era. After completing the novice guide, the system can become invisible, and the remaining protagonists can play their own roles. Your system is written as if it has wisdom.

How many chapters have you repeated? Don't you know?

Directed production. . . Emmm. . . It's hard to say, just give a directional extraction and waste ten times the cost on production. It's hard to say how to upgrade the system mall. The condition is actually the remaining points. Generally, this kind of function is cumulative.

I borrowed Guibao to promote a book, "Happiness God", also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously". You can get a reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, 8,000 for winning a game, and 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... On the left, he hugs his cute and cute little apprentice, and on his right, he hugs a female Chinese medicine doctor who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. From then on, Li Qi's wonderful life has quietly arrived! [Sorry for disturbing you, please contact me to delete]