When You Are a Police Officer in American Comics, Every Day Is a Holiday

I haven't read it yet, but the title attracted me and I've always wanted to watch the police in the DC world. There are seven out of ten DC fan novels in which the protagonist takes Batman as his father and has a no-kill policy, which is disgusting to read. Hey police, you have the legal right to kill. The Joker, the Penguin, and the Riddler, come and kill each one. Gotham doesn't need Batman.

It's boring. I wrote that Marvel DC's 100% combat power collapsed.

I finally found a comic that doesn't follow the plot and just loves the original characters all day long. Of the ten American comics, nine follow the original plot, and the remaining one contains original characters. It feels like the protagonists are all superfluous. I really don't know what they think that way. Do they think what they wrote is better than the original work? If not, I might as well read the original work. Only in this book can I write my own story in the world of American comics. Come on, author!

It looks good, no wonder it is classified as original fantasy, not derivative fan fiction. Just integrate the settings of the American comic world and write your own story. This is the best book of the same type that I have ever read. So far, I have only come across one Harley Quinn, and she was still young. I prefer this kind of novel to those fans who copy the original work. After all, why don't I just read the original work if I copy it? Just to see them add a protagonist who is out of place? And then add a golden finger to make it erotic?

You have gone to the United States to become a police officer, so why do you still fall in love with a Chinese woman? This is simply nonsense and a superfluous plot. Just pick up a black girl, it's so cool with a Mexican girl.

The names of the male and female protagonists are Zhao Hao and Lu Lixue. The American comic book fan wrote the name of the urban Long Aotian. It's too dramatic and I can't stand it at all.

Is the author a masochist? He likes to be scolded so much. He is called a yellow-skinned monkey in all kinds of ways, but he still doesn't show any anger at all. How can you really bear it?

This is a rubbish book. If you don't write about women, you will die. Can you write a good story? I have never seen a woman.

Constant emphasis on Asians, blacks, Asian blacks. Note that he keeps emphasizing this point. Except for women, almost everyone else refers to the protagonist with Asian names, and he keeps writing about racial discrimination. However, the author seems to have no other ideas about race for the female characters he wants to write. The protagonist was an ordinary person before, but after he got the system and killed the first person, he suddenly became as if he wanted to kill someone for fun at any time, and the villains were all brainless In fact, from the beginning of the female character, I felt that it was probably a bad novel Generally speaking, a novel without any writing skills, the plot arrangement is also full of the feeling that the first chapter is about to build a factory, and the third chapter is that the products that survive the factory are sold all over the world.

I couldn't resist the poison in Chapter 4. I became a policeman in the beautiful country and said that I was from the Dragon Kingdom. I also said that I grew up in the beautiful country. I must have an American name. What was my name?

I was successfully persuaded to quit in the first 3 chapters, but the author continues to work hard.

I gave up after seeing Chapter 72. Originally, I really wanted to support the author in reading it, after all, the ideas and story are pretty good. The main reasons for not persisting are as follows. If the author sees it, I hope it can be improved in the future. 1. There are too many fabricated things in the setting and world view. It wants to lean toward science fiction, but also toward fantasy. As a result, many things are just rhetoric and imagination, but they want to be well-founded. The result is that the world view is a mess, and the level of knowledge reserve is not even as good as that of a freshman. 2. The social background is also filled in with imagination. It feels like someone who has read some novels is describing the political structure and administrative system of the United States in a blind way. He even dares to make it up without even knowing the classification of the American police. 3. The relationship line and the love brain thing should be considered outdated, and the author probably didn't think about it carefully before writing, and he couldn't figure out if readers still want to read Stallion. It turns out that the two girls are still love brains. 4. Everyone likes to see sewing monsters, but they need to be sewn seamlessly. If they are too stiff or the style is off-kilter, they will be dismissed. Finally, I hope the author will have better development in the future, bye.

As long as you can make black people decent, we will be friends But the writing should not be too obvious, just write cotton machine one, cotton machine two, cotton machine three, so that we readers can understand

Why does that "heroine" give me such a sense of disgust? Is it the influence of the comments on me? Or shouldn't this kind of "heroine" appear in this kind of subject? Or maybe the author has revised too much, and the revisions have become a bit "broken"?

Okay, okay, it started to fool people as soon as it was released, right? Now the male protagonist will not kill the beautiful woman when he sees it, and the beautiful woman will fall in love with the male protagonist when she sees it. Now it's just a sewer novel.

Say whatever you want. First of all, the protagonist has an unpleasant personality and is not justice at all. Secondly, the narration is all the author's YY, which is completely inconsistent with the idea of a real narration. He wants to be the King of the Sea, but he is always on the show, so he doesn't dare to do it seriously. I want to write about the background of the story. Big, not powerful enough, the writing is messy, this is here and that, the background integration is not in place, the power belongs to itself. Anyone who has watched Marvel knows that his setting is that the world is different in latitude, but as long as it reaches the same world, it can be physically destroyed. If you become a demon, you will almost have invincibility written on your head. It takes a kid a long time to do it. Too messy to bear

I have only one evaluation, no matter in the book or in reality, black dogs deserve to die.

Common sense error, your tritium is only found on the moon. Have you never seen a tritium luminous tube? I suggest you check the information and then read what you wrote. The one on the moon is called helium-3.

The name and the name of the heroine are really different just like a fairy tale novel, the hero George. Dung Ball the heroine Maria. Goudan . . . . . . . .

This plot is really awesome, asking people to take revenge every day, but there is no intention to retaliate at all. I mentioned before that I wanted revenge, but then there was no movement. I was attacked every two or three days. Later, the gang even bribed people from the Counter-Terrorism Bureau to drive armed helicopters to attack the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist just complained and that was it! In order to kill the protagonist, even Reagent No. 5 Was produced. He was attacked every day, but he had no intention of revenge. He just kept picking up girls there endlessly. Occasionally, he said that he wanted to take revenge, but it was just mentioned and nothing happened.

Arrange the heroine from the beginning. I don't know how the writing is, especially the writing of emotional scenes. I don't dare to look at the back. If you want to watch, please let me know. How is the back?

It's great. The protagonist is still an Asian and a police officer in time travel. He becomes the bottom of the discrimination chain. He is discriminated against all day long. The heroines are Harley Quinn and Wanda. There is also an original character heroine. An Asian who is at the bottom of the discrimination chain is actually liked by so many women. She is indeed Zhao Yuetian, just like the Urban Dragon King novel.

The vibranium shield is a bit speechless, and the interaction with the female character is very cliched and disgusting.

Zhen Eryi. Holding a shield in one hand and a rifle in the other, who handed it to you? Your father 🥵

I've read ten chapters, and it's full of that kind of... You might as well not write about this Lu Xue. It's so embarrassing.

To be honest, there are some logical problems, but what makes me continue reading is because he wrote his own story.

Qiuzhui

It's okay to read Dang Shuangwen, but I don't kneel down and lick American comic characters. It's just that the conflicts are too deliberate. As long as a man sees the protagonist, he will say "yellow-skinned monkey", and if it's a woman, she will do everything to please the protagonist.

From the front, the protagonist's character seems to be quite bad, and it doesn't make people feel immersed in it. The author may want to portray the protagonist in the American style, but you have to think about who you are writing for. I hope that if I write a book in the future, I can change the characterization.

Well written, author. Anyway, I decided to follow it. I just hope there will be an ending. I was reading a beautiful comic with more than 500 chapters. In the end, it was gone. All the money was spent. When I was told it was gone, all I could say was, oh, what a pity, what a pity for me.