A Spring Encounter on the Path to Immortality

Thank you to all the fellow Taoists who were attracted by these words to read my book. Thank you! ! !

Hello author, let me give you a little suggestion. Writing a novel is not writing a paper, nor is it writing an academic book. If you want to accumulate the first batch of readers as quickly as possible (originally), you must imitate and see how others write, especially novice writing. This is not shameful. We PhDs in social science also do this when we write short papers and submit them to CSSCI. We all start with imitation and dismantling. It seems that you have a lot to express, and you seem to be trying to pour it out in one go with the temperament of running into the sea and never returning. However, it seems that you have not received very good writing training. Therefore, as an introductory book, I recommend that you read analytically such books as White's "The Elements of Style" and Stephen King's "Writing" and "Conflict and Suspense". After you have accumulated a certain amount of reading and attention, if you are not satisfied with short-term and fast industrial production, but want to gradually form your own style and create unique and unique works of art, you can continue to disassemble novels that are more in line with your taste for imitation. For example, the novels of "Zhiqiu" such as "The Dust of History", "Ten Prefectures Chronicles", and "Exotic China Road" are also very long, and the early books of "Misty Rain in Jiangnan" such as "The Fate of the Dust", and "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" by Beacon Fire Plays with the Princes, you can imitate and dismantle these. Above. I mean no harm, and I may not be right. I hope it will be useful to you. 🙏

To be honest, how many of you came here because of this⊂(ο･㉨･ο)⊃

You can tell at a glance that this is your first time writing a novel. Each paragraph is too long. It hurts your eyes to look at it without titanium alloy eyes. It is divided into paragraphs. This is a novel! Not a composition! Character dialogue and narration must be clearly separated, the whole text is blended together, and the reading experience is zero!

After reading three chapters, my personal opinions are for reference only. You don't need to take them seriously! You can delete it if you don't like it. After all, I only read three. The plot is a bit boring. Personally, I think the three golden chapters are quite important for newbies writing novels. There must be conflicts in the first three chapters, or there must be a golden finger. Of course, if the author is a great author, then that's a different story. After all, even if the great author writes poorly, a certain number of readers will like to read it after some screening, and the fan base is huge! Moreover, the fans of the great god have a certain foundation of trust and are very patient! In the first few pictures, you can highlight the protagonist's golden finger, or personality (for example, the protagonist is decisive in killing the Virgin, and the plot describes a plot in which a woman from an enemy country takes advantage of the protagonist and is directly killed by the protagonist), or the origin (for example, describing the protagonist's time-travel from the earth to enhance the affinity with readers), or create some suspense to arouse readers' expectations for what follows. Your writing is very good, come on! But personally I still feel like it's a bit of a run-down. What is a running account? My personal understanding is that it seems to be describing something very plainly, very plainly, without any fluctuations in the plot, and if the readers have no fluctuations in their hearts, they may feel bored. (For example: essays, essays, traditional literature, etc.) It would be very embarrassing if two people were expressionless and speechless. If there is a person who has high emotional intelligence, speaks interestingly, and can arouse the emotions of others, then this person must be a successful person to a certain extent. Writing novels is to use words to drive and control readers' emotions. Supernatural suspense novels will make people nervous and exciting. Science fiction and black science and technology novels will make people excited and excited! Apocalyptic fantasy novels can make people angry and so on. To achieve this goal, the first step is to write fluently and have good writing skills, commonly known as: pen power. The second is the ability to set up plots, such as the famous three golden chapters! The former is the power of words. The latter is the power of thought.

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Everyone can support this book. It is a very high-quality book about cultivating immortals and is the best choice for investment.

The writing is excellent, the plot has twists and turns, and the foreshadowing is profound. A slightly slow-burning, rare novel about cultivating immortality. Looking forward to the popularity of "Xian Road Meets Chun". By the way, I am promoting a new book, Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rebirth in the Monster Farm, Family Cultivation and Immortality Farming Wang Haihan🙏

Come on, hope you sign the contract soon. Asking for mutual visits. 😆

The companion who was abducted by the author became a god 😁