A Spring Encounter on the Path to Immortality

Thank you to all the fellow Daoists who were drawn to my book by these words! Thank you so much!

Hi author, I also have a small suggestion. Writing a novel is not like writing a thesis or an academic book. If you want to quickly accumulate your first batch of readers, you must imitate how others write, especially for beginners. There's nothing shameful about it.

Honestly, how many of you came here because of this? ⊂(ο･㉨･ο)⊃

It's obvious this is your first time writing a novel. Every paragraph is too long; it's hard on the eyes unless you have eyes of steel. Break it into more paragraphs! This is a novel, not an essay! Distinguish between dialogue and narration. The whole thing is a jumbled mess, making for a terrible reading experience!

I've read three chapters, and here are some personal thoughts for your reference only. Please don't take them too seriously! You can delete them if you don't like them, after all, I've only read three chapters. The plot is a bit boring. Personally, I think the first three chapters are quite important for novice novelists.

Keep up the good work, and try to update more often.

Everyone should support this book; it's an excellent cultivation novel and a great investment choice.

Excellent writing, intricate plot, and profound foreshadowing. A slightly slow-burning, rare find among cultivation novels. I hope "The Path to Immortality" will be a huge hit. By the way, let me promote my new book, "Family Cultivation: Reborn in a Demon Clan Breeding Farm, Cultivating Immortals and Farming in a Family." Please forgive me 🙏

Good luck, and I wish you a speedy signing. Requesting mutual visits. 😆

The companion who was tricked by the author into becoming a god 😁