Lord of Disaster

It's pretty good. Everyone in the team should have a role. Even if it's a mascot, she should have a lucky buff. The reason why many novels are criticized about Our Lady is because those people can obviously play a role, but the author just makes them a living person.

The middle-aged loser lives an ignoble existence with the system

Dungeons are purely poisonous. There are dungeons, but in the end there is a ferryman. The ferryman can enter the dungeon of the disaster area, and the rewards of the dungeon can be given by the ferryman. So what is the disaster area? ? What is a copy? ?

This protagonist, emmm, why does he look so awkward? He raises zombies but doesn't kill them, he doesn't kill Gao Yue when he meets her, he's not decisive, he's not determined to become stronger, he knows the time limit, but he still has to delay it.

It's pretty good, but I kind of miss the doomsday novels I read before. The one I remember the most is Dark Summoner😥😥😥😥

The writing is very good, and it feels like watching a movie. It's a pity that Qidian doesn't let me watch the kind of killing fun.

After trying the poison, it looked okay from the beginning. Although it is an old routine, the writing style is good, and some details are quite novel. It is a good book.

The writing is good. I can see that the protagonist is changing little by little and still retains a bit of humanity. The other supporting characters are not too intellectual, so they continue to maintain that. At least it's much better than the apocalyptic novels where you know how to kill and kill from the beginning. Except for the protagonists and villains, those novels are all ridiculing and slapping them in the face. I wish I could show all my emotions on my face. I don't even know what a forbearing city is. It's worth reading.

The author wanted to write about the genre of weird fairy, but his writing power was obviously far from enough.

Well written, come on, author, keep up this level

Mengxin Come on!

It's really a pity. I felt really good about this book in the early days. When did it start to feel uncomfortable? After entering the dungeon, something didn't feel right. This dungeon was really poisonous. I originally thought that a disciple would become a disciple, but then a ferryman popped up, and the writing was messy. At the beginning, I thought that I could write a high-intelligence reasoning plot, but I didn't expect that the writing became worse and worse. It even felt like a weird fairy. It gave people the feeling of chaos. Including the state of the protagonist later, I really can't say. I don't know if the disciple in this is a kind of story. Hang, I originally thought there was only one protagonist, but then it didn't matter if there were several. Unexpectedly, there were more and more, which made me quite speechless. However, the character of the protagonist in the early stage was well described, including the younger brother and all aspects of logic, which were quite harmonious. Especially the character of Gao Yue was written to satisfy the desire of male readers to conquer. Unfortunately, I couldn't stand it after passing the copy. The apocalypse is not like the apocalypse, and the weird is not weird. It is a pity.

Is there a novel group? 🙂🙂🙂

This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever impress me. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe how wonderful this book is, so I just want to say this: I haven't read it yet

This is so neat and tidy, it's really confusing. Is this really a cool article?

Reading the introduction, it feels like "Doomsday Puzzle Game".

My nearly ten years of reading experience tells me that as long as you seriously maintain this quality in writing, even if you don't become a god, you will definitely become popular.

Hey, there's something wrong with the pacing of these chapters of "Going Out for Hunting". It's too bland. Kill monsters, recruit teammates, and collect resources. The sense of expectation for the following has weakened. You don't get much from upgrading. It's not very exciting to collect supplies.

This fucking copy is written like shit, I thought I was watching a weird fairy tale

My writing is okay, but I could be more decisive when encountering problems.

I feel that the author has a better balance in the aspects of fighting monsters and upgrading at the end of the world, integrating conflict of forces, and advancing the main plot. It is not easy to read and fatigue. Come on, come on.

I still can't write anymore Have you sent the outline? There are too many ideas, the settings are too complicated, and the writing power cannot be expressed. It would be strange if I don't work hard.

Brothers who come to the comment area can take a look at this. It's so cool so far, the information I've learned so far. Everyone has the opportunity to become a [disciple]. No one around the protagonist is a robot. [The supporting actors still have their roles] The sudden appearance of the black tower plunged the world into chaos. If you can keep it. The author does not have convulsions or write randomly. The only thing missing is the east wind, the most important east wind.