My Hong Kong Variety Show Can't Be so Simple and Honest

Andy Wah, the young and Dangerous boy, and Wei Jixiang, the 12th Young Master, are the kind of gangsters who look like they have great loyalty, but in fact they are ordinary people who are not ruthless or ambitious enough and cannot be protected by anyone. Being in the world, but not having the heart of the world

Delan

Fang Xiaoling

Apple

Agree with book friends! It's a good start, the pace is good, and the writing is also good! But the biggest shortcoming is obscurity, which is commonly known as literary youth disease! The biggest features of online novels are fast pace and excitement, but it's a pity that they are neither, it's completely the same way of writing books in the past! The protagonist grows up slowly, but at first glance he is a capable and capable guy (not to mention a level leader, at least a hall leader)! But after watching it for a long time, it turned out that he was just like the Twelve Young Masters, and anyone could step on him! There are only three types of people who can stand out in the gang, those who have their own power, those who rely on power, and those who are ruthless. None of them play the main role. Looking at the back, it makes people feel that they are strong on the outside but strong on the inside! With the current ability shown by the protagonist, if you are not good at martial arts, then you are not suitable for messing around. It is better to drive screws! (Text: Wisdom, Wu: Kung Fu) If it is a book by a great master, many people may read it, but it is easy for novices to read it!

Now the protagonist feels like a passer-by to me. He seems to be integrated into the world of Hong Kong dramas, but he is outside. There are so many ruthless protagonists in Hong Kong dramas, but it is a situation where anyone can step on them. , It is good to follow the rules when doing things, but the plot of burning incense is enough to watch once or twice. The main character who does not bury people is not good in Hong Kong. The Flower Buddha on Bolan Street makes people feel aggrieved when they look at it. It can clearly solve the problem directly, but it looks like it cherishes the feathers. In the end, didn't you use the method you least wanted to use? Of course, that part is also the most refreshing part for me. You need to be strong to make iron. It doesn't matter if you have more money and a younger brother. If Lao Wang is kidnapped, it doesn't mean he can't come back. Lao Li paid one billion to redeem his son. If he offends him, he will be beaten to death with a stick. The author should think about it, and don't try to create people from two worlds when something happens. Doesn't the protagonist, as a time traveler, have a lower status than other people? Take the younger brother's case as an example. If the protagonist goes to ask for help, it's like burning incense. If that doesn't work, he can only ask the girl's family to accompany him.

Discussion: How can a character like the protagonist, who has no face, use the fruit of face?

Ruan Lingyu

If the Hong Kong Sect doesn't move up, he can only be an ant and can be trampled to death at any time.

After reading Chapter 60, I feel that the protagonist has always been a doormat, soft and soft. After reaching 50, he became a little bit harder. There is no golden finger. He is just an ordinary time-traveler, a bit like a virgin, and not likeable.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still didn't understand what the protagonist was thinking. What to do?

There is a question. The protagonist said that if he washes his hands in a golden basin, he should wash his hands in a golden basin. He has no strength or influence. He just finds a killer and kills Lei Yaoyang. Is it really that simple? Isn't it a bit taken for granted?

I don't understand, the protagonist relies entirely on face? I already said that I have no ability or background, so it's all based on the author's imagination? Why dare you refuse to solicit?

So far, I can tell that he has an IQ, values ​​friendship, is highly capable, and is handsome. What you can't tell is: Are you good at fighting? Do you have any special abilities? How about gun shooting? How many younger brothers are there? Although he is not a gangster, he must have the ability to protect himself. I don't think everyone will mind. When the protagonist has the ability to defeat the opponent, he is willing to reason with the opponent. Note that it is reasoning and not physics.

It's quite boring. I've listened to the book for sixteen chapters, all of which are around Temple Street. The current plot is all about ordinary people. The plot progress is too slow and I have no patience. Besides, the writing is okay. If you like this kind of slow pace, you can check it out.

Liu Piaopiao

At present, the author's writing method is more like writing a fantasy than just using a Hong Kong variety show in the name. That is to say, there is no need to use the foresight of "travel" to do something, and it is not to follow the route of Shuangwen, which is ordinary. And this plot can be said to be a new drama launched by TVB 🤫.

Alian

I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 13. I've already joined this industry. The protagonist has absolutely no force. Not to mention being the strongest, at least you have to be able to fight and dare to fight. The protagonist is actually paddling and being the sixth one. After the fight, I found that the protagonist was empty-handed and only punched. This guy is watching. How can I convince the crowd in the future? I want to fall in love and engage in intrigues and go to Tokyo.

There are few reasons for pursuing reading! Golden Chapter 3 is written like a love story! Social Pressure Most people read novels for excitement and refreshment! Otherwise, spend money to find depression? ? ?

The protagonist travels through time, but after reading more than 30 chapters, it doesn't matter what he wants, no matter intelligence, strength, or background, he can always be normal... As for Lei Yaoyang, the protagonist has been buried long ago in the movie, so people can't tell that the protagonist is swiping him...

To be honest, the author has started to wander in the last few chapters, and it took him a long time to get on the right track. He turned around and returned to the world of martial arts, and even worshiped Gao Jin as his master. Isn't it appropriate to return to the world?

None of you mentioned the point. The reason why this protagonist is so unlikable is that he can pretend to be a real character. He has no ability, wants people but no one, needs force but does not have force, he is nothing. Other associations are looking for him every day, but in the end they can't touch him. (The author wouldn't budge). Just send two younger brothers and they will die.

Will the author learn from the lesson and start a new book? Write a book about a real club boss? Don't be like this one!

Why does the plot feel so familiar?

Eighty percent of book reviews are bad, but the author can still keep writing, and it's not bad after reading it and subscribing!

The author also gave himself a reward of 1,000 yuan. Can he earn it back?

Ending so soon

It can't be considered finished! All I can say is that it ended in a hurry!

Author, why don't you write about your Hong Kong comprehensive hero? When will you write a new book?