Tiga: Let You Become Light, You Become Golzan

I feel that it is not as good as Golzan's book. A system is worse than no system. This system version of Guangming Golzan has no desire to watch it at all I don't want to watch the bondage, courage, Guang Weizheng's protagonist What I want to watch is an unscrupulous, constantly getting stronger protagonist, I want to watch it for fun

He, Golzan, can't you Melba?

Just take advantage of the popularity of the song and praise it. If you have the ability, just be more popular than him.

Dragon Group, Taoist, Zhongnan, Good Chicken Awkward

The more I write, the more crooked I am, and I don't even know what I'm writing at the end.

He was poisoned, and the Kendo Hall part was poisoned. He had an inexplicable girlfriend, and he had an inexplicable dispute that couldn't be resolved even if it was explained in the end. What's more, talking about Dragon Group Taoist or something is more problematic. What's going on in your family and Ruoshui, your classmate, I don't know. , Nowadays, all classmates and gangsters know what kind of company the protagonist is from, but Ruoshui doesn't know, and there is also the fight between Kendo Dagu and the protagonist. Please, the protagonist is not an orphan, and there is Masaki Keigo as the elder brother. This younger brother does not react to such abnormal behavior? An older brother will more or less understand his younger brother's behavior. Some time ago, the diary of the second grade recorded the protagonist's deeds before the time travel. Some of the protagonist's original character should be roughly guessed. In fact, it can be written that the protagonist inherited the memory of the original person. Your behavior without memory is such a waste of your vest and relationship, right? And what era is the protagonist in? You have a mobile phone, you have a social app, you have a classmate group, but these things can't help you understand some of the original situation?

Author, you should change your thinking. Just riding on the popularity will not go far. Just like Lu Mingfei, all Dragon Clan fans are Lu Mingfei, but there are only a few good writers. Others just riding on the popularity will never be as good as the first one. People will always compare what they write later with what they wrote at the beginning. Of course it is better if it can be compared, but it will be embarrassing if it cannot be compared. After all, the pearl comes first. If the writing is neither good nor bad, it will reduce people's enthusiasm for reading. As soon as the heat is over, the shutdown will come to an end, with exceptions of course. I hope you don't mind what I say. This is a suggestion. I hope you all have your own ideas (although this is difficult to do), but I hope you can keep writing, work hard to practice your writing, and find your own way of writing. Come on!

Brother, you are the one with the most precious things, why don't you even write about Melba?

It would be better to write about the ancient people who came into contact with light 30 million years ago and super evolved into new evolvers. You can design the image yourself. After 30 million years of evolution, they will definitely become super powerful. Maybe they can develop and design various forms by themselves. Moreover, it can also be said that they have darkened during the 30 million years of evolution. Then I figured out how to imitate General Trigat, who degenerated into a light trumpet and was reborn and grew up, combining light and darkness to develop a new form. For 30 million years, I could test various forms and various energies. Isn't it possible to develop subspace, time and space at will? The most important thing is that I like Shiroma's Shizuma Yumei. It's a pity that I can't write a book.

I always feel like the plot in the gym is weird, I'll check it out after the update.

The introduction is wrong, can you be more serious?

Someone has a tenth of your monthly ticket. Let me read it again. There was a popular book called Zhong Zhong Shu. Just like you, I don't even have a fraction of my salary.

If I remember correctly, I wrote a novel about Melba before. I don't know if it was The Eunuch or something, but I can't find it now.

You might as well write Golden Dragon Melba

Too many typos, no corrections, bad look and feel

I thought it was just a transformation into Godzilla, forget about Golzan.

Don't you, my brother, also go to the volcano?

Golzan's version of the super mechanic career system. So far so good. The only problem is that the background introduction is Masaki's younger brother. Then the protagonist kept telling others that he was an international student. Also give me a name that is different from the background introduction. What is this for?