Attribute Martial Arts: Start with the Deduction of Wooden Stake Kung Fu

The level pressure is too great. The protagonist blindly pursues various high-level skills and basically doesn't care about his own cultivation. And inexplicably began to do some suicide behavior.

When writing about tribes, write about tribes well. A tribe should be treated like a country.

The author wrote carefully and wanted to give people a different feeling, but the more wordy the writing, the slower the plot progressed, and the effect was not good. The fighting was too brief, the plot was too wordy, and the martial arts progress was inexplicable. I don't use my strength in the right place, and I don't think much about it when I write.

Wait until you are truly awesome before talking about morality and rules. There are also principles and bottom lines. What can you do once the timeline is over that is not a great meritorious deed? Cut it off and let's think about it and write the next book.

Here you go, Chapter 6 persuades you to quit, the main character is written the same as the supporting character

To put it bluntly, I want to write the best effect, but my level is not the same.

Weird, looks so awkward! Very uncomfortable

Can you please stop acting like a person? It's too dramatic.

Please understand?

I read the comments carefully and changed some of the controversial parts. I am quite distressed. I don't know if it is really poisonous or if most people agree with the previous direction but are silent for various reasons. Doujiu has also heard that many people's grades dropped because they listened to readers' changes to their articles, and they were unsure and entangled. After all, I am just a junior writer, and the probability of making some common mistakes is higher. I can't feel it by looking at it, so I will leave it to everyone's judgment.

It's well written, and I'll give it to you if you have the votes.

It seems to be a relatively clichéd version of my attribute life.

With this writing attitude, it's no surprise that the eunuch is here!

Kung Fu and martial arts techniques should be separated. Kung Fu is used to elevate one's realm to a higher level. How can one practice it so much?

... Is it a navy or what? The first chapter is full of nitpicks