You're Just Making up the Exercises, My Disciple, Have You Really Mastered Them?

I can still hold on to more than 130 chapters, which is quite impressive. Everything after that is like a running account, water, water, water. The author is simply insulting the readers' IQ. What has the first apprentice experienced? The second apprentice is on the waterside, encountering escort missions, and encountering enemies. They are all in the same realm. They just changed the name and the location. Are they copied? Pay money to see this thing? Showing it to me for free is a waste of time.

The first half is a mindless and enjoyable article, but once you get past the inner realm, it's no longer enjoyable.

The setting is quite novel, not as brainless as other invincible protagonists (only before the spiritual realm), but that's about it. There is a repeater in front. But it's okay if you ignore it, it's not a big poison. When I arrived in the spiritual realm, my IQ began to decline. It's still okay to frown. He died of poison when he arrived in the divine realm. The protagonist is completely brainless and extremely watery. As for the matryoshka doll changing map, knowing that fantasy novels cannot avoid it, can your setting of the matryoshka doll be more novel? Bianhuang (separated by a mountain range) Inner Domain (separated by a door) Spiritual Domain (separated by a bridge) Divine Domain. Didn't watch it later. Furthermore, the destructive power and lifespan are also very confusing. Tens of thousands of years have passed since the Blood Demon Rebellion in the early stage, but the Grand Master and the Little Heavenly Man are still alive. The destructive power is even more serious. Later, the True King and the Immortal both condensed the law into their bodies, and they fought hand to hand like mortals. The key protagonist can also impart magical powers. (Can supernatural powers be learned? What can be learned is called magic.) This book assumes that magical powers can be learned. Ni Mo Tai Cang Martial Arts has no soul and no martial artist's own laws, Xu Ni Mo. In the realm of magical powers, one's soul is set to have magical powers that are self-generated. Supernatural powers are the application of the warrior's own laws.

It's really watery, it's getting more and more watery, and there are so many abilities to set up cashbacks. As long as you show more and more strength, you might as well not write anything a hundred times.

There is no point in continuing to read. The routine started to repeat itself

Very pretty👍👍

Relaxed and freehand... Novel in conception... Teasing some old book routines from the starting point, a stroke of genius, I hope it will be different from Tiandao Library. Supporting role (you can have a slightly lower IQ in the early stage but don't fall into a cycle). The more awesome the apprentice is, the more normal the development of the protagonist will be.

Everything behind is written by the studio, right?

Get up and continue writing when your monthly ticket comes

The subject matter is quite interesting, but there are too many annotations, which makes me dizzy and tired of reading The character of the protagonist Li Xuan is also a bit boring, and it would be better to be a little bit mean Also give Li Xuan some peach blossoms, like a mistress There are many events, such as the interactions between Xu Yan and Meng Chong and the female characters, love, hate and so on

I change the map too often. It's all anecdotes, and there's too little profound plot.

In fact, the writing is good. I was originally persuaded to leave it in the comment area, but I thought about a sentence in Perfection. If I didn't see it with my own eyes and understand it thoroughly, then I would be extremely vulgar. Monthly tickets are provided, and the pacing is well arranged. I can finish them all in one afternoon. Refinement, refinement, refinement

Think about the following realms, the three innate realms, true qi, true essence, and extreme essence. Innately practice the true qi, and the true qi turns into the true essence, absorb the power of heaven and earth, and practice the attribute extreme essence, then the divine realm, comprehend the will of martial arts, and then the true body realm, the law. Dharma body, true body, qi and blood, extreme essence, and will are three-in-one, condensing one's own Dharma. The Dharma, physical body combines to form Dharma body. It draws the power of the stars and the universe to open up the Dharma body's acupoints, which is the real body realm. Next, the world realm, mountains and rivers, caves and heavens, and the world. The acupoints and apertures merge into mountains and rivers. The mountains and rivers grow into caves and heavens, and the caves and heavens evolve into the world. 🙂

I hope Qidian will have a function to block authors😅😅😅

If the author is not capable, then stop writing poems and just copy some from the Internet No better than you

The same sentence is repeated over and over again. It's so stupid. There are so many settings on the Internet. If you just copy them, it's enough for you. It's still so stupid.

Coming, coming, invincible flow in the same realm, hahaha, half step to perfection, half step to peak, half step to great perfection,

The protagonist in the author's writing is like a waste, and he is too hesitant to look forward and backward. The author's writing skills are also very poor, and he is afraid that his combat power will collapse. However, he writes the feedback multiplier from his apprentice to himself so high that the protagonist will be crushed numerically. As a result, he himself is a coward and dare not take part. The protagonist's character is that of a market villain and a hypocrite. He is so hypocritical and disgusting.

Don't use your true energy, just use Yang Shen Qi, blood martial arts and you will be invincible in the world.

Let the protagonist know his ability to make things up early, otherwise the same routine will be too poisonous

According to Xu Yanshen's artistic conception, he can kill the God Refining Realm. Pig's Foot is a level higher than his apprentice, but he is still afraid of more than a dozen people at the God Refining Peak. I don't know what the author is thinking. The combat power is chaotic. If Xu Yan has Pig's Feet's Divine Origin Realm cultivation, he may not be able to sweep through the strongest people above the God Refining Peak. Isn't this random writing? I said before that it is a hundred times the disciple's cultivation level. I'm afraid it's not possible for a dog to beat a pig's feet.

I can't read this book. There are too many supporting roles and apprentice scenes, and the protagonist is such a dick. Reading the book and looking at the protagonist is too uninspiring, so I can only leave.

Everyone, including the protagonist, is mentally retarded

This is one of the most embarrassing novels I have ever read. It made my scalp numb, as if I had returned to the age of potatoes.

It's so cool, it keeps filling with water, and that saint girl forcefully fills it with water. If a person writes n chapters and can't get it out, I think the author hasn't thought about it yet.

Chapter 105 persuades people to quit. Innate corresponds to a grandmaster, and what is superior to innate corresponds to a great master. So tell me, what are the advantages of the created true martial arts? Moreover, Xu Yan has heaven-defying combat power, super understanding, perfect jade bones, and an eternal genius, but he cannot even defeat a great master, and is written down by the author as worse than useless. Totally unqualified and unworthy!

I read the introduction, so does this setting encourage cheating... Teacher Zhang San, don't come out and say something 🤤

The protagonist doesn't pick up girls or pretend to be 13, but it's a bit less interesting anyway. The novel is very strange for a two-year-old novel. I don't know if there are too many eunuch authors or too many eunuch readers, so many books have no female protagonists or single female protagonists.

1. A very good subject matter. I could still look at it before taking 100 pictures, but after 100 pictures I was embarrassed to pick out three rooms and one living room. 2. The stamina is not enough, Tongxuanjing is a bit unbearable at the beginning, it is better to set up a template for cultivating immortals. Since you can make up a lot of exercises, it can be regarded as a main task for yourself. The plot of the side plot is very dull 3. The characters have a single personality, and the three apprentices feel that their personalities are almost lackluster. For example, the first apprentice can be more moderate in normal martial arts, develop management and cultivation skills, and help you take care of everything. The second apprentice can be more aggressive in the physical way, and help you develop your power. The third apprentice, now that he has made alchemy, can become a researcher, and can also help you compile exercises and give you some inspiration. 4. The world setting is a bit forced. It is impossible to have just a few warriors in the borderlands. Such a large population dividend can be used as a resource collection point even if it cannot be cultivated, and can even be used as a meat point for the demon sect. It is impossible for no one to rule without warriors. 5. The difference between the levels of the two training routes is a bit confusing. There is no general introduction to the inner domain skills and the level system. It is too vain to kill the Grand Master with one punch. 6. Just a little personal opinion, some people must say that what you said is so good, why don't you write it yourself? As an old bookworm, I still have self-awareness. As for why I am so long-winded, the main setting is pretty good, but the writing later fell apart, which feels like a pity!

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I kept saying how powerful the martial arts created by the protagonist were, how much better than the old martial arts. The disadvantage was that it was a little difficult to understand and practice. The main disciple Xu Yan is so talented that he can even practice such a difficult martial art. As a result, compared to the old martial arts, the main disciple Xu Yan, who has peerless talent and has practiced the super skills created by the protagonist, can only advance one level higher against ordinary people who practice rubbish old martial arts. However, he may be able to advance one level higher against geniuses who practice the old martial arts. The protagonist who has a hundred times the strength of the senior disciple and various more advanced physical techniques can only be guaranteed to advance to 1.5 Levels. How can it be so poisonous? The previous article was very good. I was looking forward to it so much. It pissed me off.