Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Ancestor's Blessing

I feel that the plot is too rushed, and the scenes where the characters appear are too confusing. Although it is the same theme as the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, the plot can be focused on one or two people in the early stage, and the rest can be used as a background embellishment to slowly flesh out the characters.

Uh... How should I put it? It's a poor imitation of Xuan Jian Xian Clan, but it's not bad. The main plot settings and writing are a little lacking. You can watch it when you're bored.

Qiuzhui (ಥ_ಥ)

Thank you for your encouragement. 🙏 I will write a good book. If you have any suggestions, you can put them in the comment area. If you want to have a guest role, you can tell us and discuss it together. (I know my update speed is a bit unsatisfactory, but I have taken all the time to type [except eating, bathing, going to the toilet...], After all, it is not full time, and the manuscript storage has been exhausted) But I will ensure that I update it at least twice a day! (Even if only one chapter is released that day, another chapter will be released around early morning!) Finally, shamelessly, I beg for a wave of follow-up reading, and click through the latest chapters with my lucky little hands. It is really difficult for newcomers to write new books 🥺

The group portrait writing is ridiculously messy. Your content has nothing to do with the title of the book.

The viewing angle switches so frequently, why are you watching TV? Can a novel be written like this?

The writing is very good, please comment, brother.

Blessings begin when family members die🤫🤫🤫

It's okay, I'll read Chapter 300 now 🙂

I read it in a haze, and after reading more than 20 chapters, I had no idea what it was about.

It's hard to describe in one word. I wrote it in such a hurry that I didn't explain anything clearly before putting it on the shelves. I don't even know how old these two teenagers are, 9 or 15 years old, what Yuhao Mountain is like, how high, how big, how distributed, what is the geographical location, what is the situation of the Lin family, what kind of industry does it have, and who are the people talking about it, they are all mortals. Is the surname Lin or another surname? Where do they live? Is it on the mountain or at the bottom of the mountain? How many towns are there and how many residents there are? There is no geographical change in what you wrote. You are home in the blink of an eye, you are on the top of the mountain in the blink of an eye, and there is no change in time. Lin Xin is here in the blink of an eye. The ancestor is dead in the blink of an eye. At least half an hour? Three days? Three months? There are so many faults that you can tell at a glance that he is a newbie.

One by one, watch the great masters having fun, and follow the trend of group portraits. I haven't quite figured it out yet, but I really have the ability to write group portraits well. I can't wait to enter the mainstream soon😋️

How many descendants does the protagonist have?

Shuangwen is popular with the public, and it is not blindly suppressed.

There is a big problem. The name of the novel does not match the content of the novel. The name is the ancestor of the family, and everyone who clicks in hopes to see the blessing from the ancestor. As it is about to be released, the ancestor appears once, gives a blessing, and gives a rubbish four-star technique. Then the novel was still detailed and everything was written. According to this writing method, when the second blessing is given after 30 years of writing, it is estimated that the 500th chapter is in the middle. When the second blessing is given in the middle chapter of 500, what will be given? A five-star technique? When the 1000th chapter is about to be completed, what will be given for the third blessing? A six-star technique? So in the whole book, the ancestor woke up three times? Blessed three times?

Okay(ﾉ_ _)ﾉIt's really dead

I kept writing and deleting everything, but I didn't even know what I was talking about. It's too confusing.

This book lacks pig's feet. Just focus on writing no more than three pig's feet in each generation, and others will mention them in one stroke. Sounds confused now