Tokyo Soulful Gospel

Don't have too many heroines, too many will make it look too confusing 😏

I probably understand why so few people have read it. This book has been sent. A lot of the author's things are just for the sake of jealousy. It can be said that he made this plate of dumplings for this plate of vinegar. There are endless grammatical errors and some descriptions make it difficult to feel immersed in it. But how can I say that there are still advantages, although it is not easy to find. Just send it.

I'm currently reading Chapter 10. In the first two chapters, I felt that the male protagonist had a certain amount of progress and retreat, which was okay. However, after my sister appeared, she acted like an abstinent male god. My sister was almost reversed, and the male protagonist didn't respond at all. As a result, I lost most of my interest in this book. I will try to read a little more later.

The writing is so astringent and I like it very much 😍

This is the woman

After reading ten chapters, the creativity in a daily love novel is good. It is more realistic without cheating. The writing and plot control are also good, but because it is biased towards reality, it would be meaningless to have more female protagonists.

The writing, the astringency, and the story are all okay. It doesn't have to be a big hit but it still has to feel like a high-quality product.

Sakurazawa Mo is mine 😡

I don't quite understand why I just want to write a big world, and then I do this because there are some rules about the starting point. I don't quite understand.

The author's writing is really good, the narrative is very smooth, and the techniques of dating are also very good, but it would be great if the younger sister and the ex-girlfriend also did things behind the scenes, such as conspiring to xenophobia, parents having dinner, etc. There are too many scenes of pig's feet, I want to watch the younger sister!

Plain and simple! Let's write light novels that are more serious! The writing is so light as a feather!

There shouldn't be so few people. I wonder if the author can ask for a few more recommendations.

First

Finished Kita in Chapter 3, awesome

Looking at the profile, do you have a yandere tendency? Come on and write

I thought it was well written and very engaging. The female characters are well described, and the male protagonist also has a good personality. Of course, the career line looks a bit worrying here, after all, ordinary people have no power and no system. Ask the author if he will accept all the last few girls?

Scumbag? There isn't even a female protagonist...

The writing of each heroine is remarkable, but Chiyo gave me the feeling that she was an important supporting actress and suddenly became the heroine? There are no problems with the plot, but the writing of the male protagonist is weird. The character is not clear-cut. It is obvious that the character is not a real scumbag, but the actual plot is ridiculously scumbag. Even if the ex-girlfriend rekindles the relationship not long after they met, why is he flirting with Chiyo while having an affair with his sister? What is the motivation for this love? I didn't see a step-by-step process at all. I can only say that the male protagonist used the trick to make the female protagonists serve his career wholeheartedly. So from this point of view, I have to say that the male protagonist deserves to be called a scumbag.

Isn't it just cut off without putting it on the shelf?

Let's see if the editor can make any recommendations. After all, the era of light novels has passed.

I gave you a small reward to help 🙂, come on

To be honest, I have read ten books of this type. Most of the writing styles in this type are good, warm and refreshing, but this category may be really niche. Basically, they are all dead. It is too niche.

The role of sister is so annoying, can't the role be reduced?

The three female protagonists chased after each other. Five, six, seven or eight more were really meaningless.

The book is okay, but why are there so few people?

Is this Tianyue Zhenli also the heroine?