The Qin Dynasty Arrests Fangshi, What Does That Have to Do With Me, a Qi Refiner?

This is utterly toxic; everyone praising it is a genius. I'm disgusted. Hopefully, those who can make it through ten chapters will leave a comment here.

I've read a similar book where the protagonist travels back to the Qin Dynasty, and Fusu learns about it and reports it to the First Emperor. That book was too drawn out; the First Emperor, after learning about it, sends Fusu to test whether the alchemist is truly a master, but then he doesn't believe him. The latest chapter is still about testing him—it's too tedious. I hope this book won't be too drawn out.

This book is good. Although it only has five chapters, the beginning is quite interesting. I just hope the author can tone down the pretentiousness. In this "I am the only one who knows" worldview, kings and generals should be indifferent to the protagonist, like grass and dust. In this context, the protagonist should have a haughty and disdainful attitude. After all, they are just mortals.

It's so long and rambling, with huge stretches of inner monologue; it's really annoying to read.

This author isn't here to write a novel; they're here to plagiarize. Almost every chapter is filled with nonsense.

A poisonous weed: 1. Recklessly distorting history. While seemingly attempting to write a normal historical narrative without using fictional settings, it recklessly alters history. For example, the author made the mistake of stating that the royal family of the Qin Dynasty was surnamed Qin, and then offered a self-righteous explanation that was utter nonsense.

The main point is to not believe the comments. I clicked in and read through it, enduring the nausea to reach chapter 50. After that, I basically skipped over it because I was afraid of encountering more garbage. But I'm not writing this review to criticize the novel. The main thing I saw was a comment that said, "If you think it's badly written, go write your own book."

1. The general heard that a certain person possessed divine power and wanted to execute him, but was frightened away by the wondrous scene. 2. Tell Fusu after you get back. 3. Fusu didn't believe it, and then the two sides argued. 4. Fusu and the general went back up the mountain, and were once again frightened by the strange scene. 5. Then, how to tell the emperor...

57 Chapters already, and I've written nothing. The plot summary is that the protagonist travels back to the Qin Dynasty and becomes a cultivator, which is discovered by Meng Tian, ​​who tells Fu Su. Fu Su goes to verify this, and the protagonist hits a bottleneck in his cultivation and goes out to find opportunities. What kind of nonsense is this? 57 Chapters? Did you flood the internet?

First, water, obviously water. Second, there are contradictions. At the beginning, it was a rumor that the fleeing sorcerers killed 9,000 people in three days, but later it came directly from Fusu's mouth. The historical records only state that a total of more than 400 people were killed. 😅 Third, regarding poison, using ministers to test medicine goes without saying, but misrepresenting the *Tao Te Ching* as the *I Ching* is quite ingenious. 😥