Cyber Demons Cannot Be Exorcised by Physical Means

Emmmmm, cyberpunk is not a good word. It is purely a representative of high technology and low life. Common people are squeezed by companies. Mechanical prosthetics and capitalist ideas materialize human beings. It is a dystopia. Combine this with the national style. Uh, what about a future where capitalism is extremely developed? It sounds weird

I personally only read twenty chapters. But I can say that this is a book with great potential. There is a feeling of cyberpunk➕Chinese style. But I must say that the beginning is too discouraging. Not the first chapter, but the first two hundred words should be revised. The plot develops very smoothly and is indeed enjoyable to watch. But I always feel like there is something missing. Chen Qing's identity actually makes it difficult for readers to empathize with the emotions of his parents being killed. It is after all (no spoilers). The settings of the red screen... Are not enough to be incorporated into it. Because it's cyberpunk, switching hands and opening a skull or something feels normal and doesn't feel crazy at all. Actually, the current performance is not a big problem. The main reason is that the newcomers have little traffic. I personally feel that the performance is much better than many on the list. I hope the author can endure the loneliness and stop cutting. After all, you see, the one next door, Chixin Xuntian, didn't he just slowly reach this state? [Postscript: Although there is nothing wrong with the title of the book, it feels not compelling enough. It can be said that traffic is exchanged for power. I can't say whether it is good or bad. I can only say that it is a trade-off.

In fact, I still like this kind of book. The world view has its own grand system, the text is sincere and emotional, the characters are vivid and distinctive, as if they really exist, and Killer Whale and Chen Qing are as close as friends. The reality is really cruel, and this Chinese-style cyber world with its terrestrial lands and land-based cities only belongs to us as authors and readers. I hope more people can follow the update together, so that Lu Xingcheng's story can continue in one-dimensional space.

Let me express some of my own opinions first After reading the first 30 chapters, I can see that the author has relatively big ideals and wants to write well. The world view and settings are very good, and they are more in line with the characteristics of the ancient style. However, there are also a few points that make me uncomfortable 1. The scene setting and details are not specific enough. The so-called novel does not have the color impact of animation. Readers rely on the details described by the author. Before, the author threw out the carriage A concept, but did not introduce its appearance and scale in detail. This is very fatal when thinking about a relatively large epic setting such as Lu Xingcheng. Without a more detailed description, readers cannot imagine the overall framework, which affects the reading experience. In Chapter 8, the track repair incident seems to be just opening the door and getting off the car, and then describing a huge wheel. The detailed process in the middle is also very important, which will test the author's imagination and writing style Then there are the daily scenes, to create a vivid image, especially the cyber genre. Whether it is high stunts and low consumption, or a world controlled by companies, the living conditions of the people at the bottom and daily buildings must be described. In addition, details of life scenes such as airship dining cars, neon lights of cyber logos, and other buildings can be described in an ancient style to increase the fullness of the world. Otherwise, the whole world image will be very empty 2. The problem of character creation and dialogue, whether Zhu Xing The dialogue between the young master or the fat man and the protagonist is too deliberate, and the pace is too fast. Maybe I have read too many novels, and I always have an awkward feeling when reading them. In short, this may be the author's first book, and the original requirements may not be too high, but he can still hone his writing a little bit. Think of Bloodline of the Kingdom and Overturned Tower. The author can refer to the character dialogue and rhythm. Although these books are not very good, at least in terms of writing and narrative, I think it is quite comfortable In addition, the words spoken by the characters are too vernacular, which is not a bad thing. Proper colloquial vernacular will slow down the pace, but once it is excessive, it will make people feel that the level of the book has dropped, and the character creation is too messy. It does not mean that readers will not like it if it has to be written in Zou Zou's mode. It means that it is similar to a sentence, which can be reflected in the body, demeanor, body movement details, and mental activities. This is difficult to describe, and can only rely on the author's own knowledge reserves and writing style. Cyberpunk is not mainstream after all, so it is relatively niche, let alone ancient, which makes it difficult to produce high-quality products. However, I still hope that the author can persevere. The author can also refer to the narrative method of the apocalypse forecast. After all, people always make progress through continuous learning and experience. I hope the author writes better and better. Finally, please encourage me.

A little request, it's not easy for a new author, the subsequent stories will only become more and more exciting, please! 🙏🏻

Let me talk about the conclusion first, a good book, absolutely a good book. From a personal sense point of view, in Luxing City, a sense of vastness came over me, and I suddenly felt that the world view was huge. The descriptions of the pagodas and the Temple of All Living Beings in the city behind are really immersive and amazing. The protagonist is also a true Chinese cyber style, not the kind of swindler who cultivates immortality, nor is it a description of a cyber game, he is a true Chinese style! But there are also shortcomings. From a personal perspective, it is the setting of the "red screen game". This crazy setting really kills the fun... The world view is originally very big, and the author can't finish writing about the protagonist's exploration of various immovable cities. Baiguizhong is also very good as a standard villain. As soon as this setting came out, the original setting was like a mirror, and I suddenly felt "it's too big, too much, I don't want to watch it"... I can think of the subsequent plot as nothing more than the protagonist being driven back home to do something... What might be prevented by the shuttle between the two worlds? But this view is a bit old (in my personal sense, it is very similar to Daogui), and it is too big. I am tired of watching it. I don't want to read it when I think there are so many things or that this is just one of the worlds anyway. It's not that I haven't thought about this world that will appear in the future, but I just can't read it anymore. Personal suggestion, only personal suggestion, turn the plot of returning to reality into a slaying of inner demons. I think the current world is big enough! (Also depends on the author)

The clown is in the palace, the master is in the folk. Such a good book can only be collected by a thousand collectors, but those outdated and outdated works in the assembly line style are surrounded by fans. So far, everything seems to my liking. At least I will order all of them until they are finished. As long as the author doesn't delay updates, the reputation will not be bad.

In order to meet the market, we have made a lot of sacrifices in terms of content depth compared to before. I hope it can work this time.

Among all the cyber genres I have read recently, this is the best one without any trappings. I loved it

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