We're All Soldiers Now, Who Has Time for Romance?

Two poisonous points, ex-girlfriend and cousins. The writing is quite good, but it would be better if the author could change these two points. Is the protagonist's ex-girlfriend the shadow of the author's ex-girlfriend? So the author keeps writing plots that she regrets to make the author happy in the world of the novel? She appears several times when the protagonist performs meritorious deeds. Fortunately, after graduating from the military academy, I deleted her WeChat account. Although it was a small pleasure that my ex-girlfriend regretted it, it was a bit disgusting to keep mentioning her. I hope I won't see her again in the future, for example, if I go to give military training to college students, I will meet herself or something like that. Also, those relatives, that cousin or cousin, are also disgusting. There is no need to write like this. Even if such people exist in reality, there is no need for you to disgust the readers. It is still disgusting to repeat it many times. If you didn't write about ex-girlfriends and relatives, your book would be great and a classic. It's a pity that the author didn't change it and insisted on writing it.

Nowadays, when military novels are recommended, they go to the National Defense University of Science and Technology. I would like to ask you, dear author, to carefully understand what the National Defense University of Science and Technology does and what kind of school it is. If you are a field force and want to study, and then go back to become a military officer, you go to the National Defense University of Science and Technology.

From the introduction, I feel that first-class merit is like eating and drinking. In reality, most people who get first-class merit are heroes. The few who survive are also highly disabled

After reading chapter seventy-six, to be honest, I was quite speechless when it came to the description of my ex-girlfriend. Either they would not see each other for a long time, or they would just be the heroine. You have always written that your ex-girlfriend has been willful about breaking up and has been contacting the protagonist after breaking up. She even went to his home. From sending messages to the protagonist, asking and begging at the beginning, etc., To later posting about her situation, plans and plans, it shows that she is changing. Why is there so much space for someone who does not plan to be the heroine? To be honest, the writing has changed a lot. The article also said that there is a trick, just come to me and I will chase you directly. In this way, the image of the heroine is directly established, instead of being a supporting role like now, writing more pages than the heroine and having bright spots. The real heroine only has that little space and nothing to read. The heroine is just like a passerby.

Is it serious to be promoted to major in two years? Is it wartime? It's still possible in wartime

I'm really touched to write this book to commemorate my unforgettable military years!

I won't talk about the bug in the system, nor will I mention that it's only chapter 108 before continuing, let's talk about the four female characters that appear in the article. Ex-girlfriend, willful and pretentious, publicity lieutenant, green tea, cousin, no tutor, mother, not familiar with the behavior of a small family. Why, women can't have a positive side? Also, when you write about the protagonist's military camp, just write about the protagonist specifically. You can just cover other people and other plots in essays. Do you have to write it in a rich and colorful way? An ex-girlfriend wrote so much about her, a good friend wrote five chapters, and even a bad friend wrote a chapter. Is it useful? Did it have a big influence on the creation of the protagonist? After all, isn't it just that the number of words is just bad for the money? Finally, there was so much foreshadowing. I always thought that the protagonist would follow his squad leader to his company, but he ended up going to the next-door camp to work as a catfish... The key point is that when the next-door camp was conducting exercises, the results were not good. They also said that after the protagonist went there, life would definitely be difficult and he would not be able to accept it. A clichéd slap-in-the-face plot. There are reasons why it doesn't become a masterpiece.

A bottle of potion increases the value by 5%. Assuming that a normal person's value is 100, and the protagonist is considered weak, he is given 80. The tenth power of 100*1.05 Is 160+. The protagonist drank dozens of bottles. Counting his 30 bottles, 80*1.05 To the 30th power, 80*4.32=345.6, Which is three times that of a normal person. Author, do you know the concept of physical fitness in reality? Even if it is a simple multiplication, three times the physical fitness of a normal person can be used as a punch to punch Tyson. Moreover, the protagonist with such physical fitness was only 1 second faster than that person in the obstacle course. Why, the supporting character also had a system to achieve success, right? And the key is, why should he? Why can a provincial athlete do this? The squad leader is only 1 minute and 55 seconds long. If a national-level athlete is co-authored, it will not take 1 minute and 30 seconds to kill the protagonist. This data is really outrageous. This potion is useless, so stop drinking it. There is no other author who can write a potion that increases the index so expensively.

The 36-year-old senior colonel in the novel next door is already the commander of the Reunification Brigade...

I would like to make some comments on this book carefully: 1. The title of the book is somewhat inconsistent with the content 2. One of the highlights of the book is the system, which is ignored after recruit training. As an ordinary person, I don't think you will be so good if you don't focus on the system. 3. The author may hope to reverse the polarity of the views of people around him on being a soldier, and the description of family members and relatives to create a sense of pleasure, but my sense of perception is not good, and there is a problem with the value orientation (although it is a novel, it is a military article) 4. I doubt the killing and suppressing of the special operations team by the three rocket launchers during the battle? I am an expert in small-scale raid operations. I have 80 or not 100 counterattack plans in this situation. A platoon can handle you, let alone one person. (Personal opinion of a puppet army fan)