Red Mansion: Fairy, Don't Make Trouble, I'm a Serious Person
红楼：仙子别闹，我正经人
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 111k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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48Chapters
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The creativity is not bad, but the structure is too huge. The daily writing of Jia Fu is quite interesting, but the fairy part is a bit...
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After reading Chapter 20, I feel that the author has a little too much foreshadowing and content to talk about. This requires strong writing skills. It may be exciting once it is written. I need to fatten up before reading.
The story is okay, the writing is very exciting, but the second chapter is too inconsistent, it is better to just remove it, otherwise it will lose many readers.