Infinite, Starting from Jinmen, the Martial Arts

I decided to give up. I suggest the author to write well if he wants to write well. If he can't write well, then give up. This happens every day.

It's saying that I couldn't bear it any longer and saw that the author chose a demon in the late Ming Dynasty for his second world. . . . Not vomiting, not happy. First of all, I don't want to say anything about Stitch Monster now. The opening chapter was written well, so it's okay to copy it, as long as they agree. But the question is, why do you copy everything? ? ? People write that the White Lotus Sect is a saint, and that the saint's brother is the leader. In fact, this is a failure. You copied even the bad work without correcting it. I don't even know what you mean by writing this. Especially the role of Saint Brother, is it really necessary in your novel? ? Secondly, there are so many stories that can be written in the late Qing Dynasty, can't you have some ideas and innovations of your own? All the plots are copied from others. The history of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China was so tragic and majestic that just participating in the historical process is enough for you to write about. What's even more speechless is that you also set up a system, and the system task is to find Dragon Scale. I am really convinced. A failure among failures. . The most fucked thing to me is that the author chose the demons of the late Ming Dynasty as the second world. Why did the Qing Shi Ke you copied collapse? It was because the book started high and went low. The second volume was written in such nonsense that it was just for fun. The force value has completely collapsed, and the plot has no plot at all. The system of the demon world has changed, and there is no sense of progression. Add the pseudo-system flow, and the historical weight of the first volume is simply gone. If you ask me, I would also choose history for the second volume, so as to keep the weight of history, and honestly go from Qi training to climbing up the force system. Martial arts training is not the center of the novel, the center should be the plot. The majesty and weight of history cannot be compared with martial arts novels. . That's all, let the author think about it carefully. Moreover, I couldn't understand the first volume and I was speechless.

To be honest, the author's educational level is really not high. He should know that poppies should not be lit even if he has been to junior high school.

There were some brilliant pictures at the beginning, in the style of Gu Huoniao. After killing Cixi, it immediately turned into an ordinary white text. The fierceness of the enemy and the clear-minded thoughts were all gone.

Copying here and there, in just a dozen chapters, I saw the shadow of the bird and the guest in green shirt. The writing is not bad, I can only say this

It's wonderful. Nowadays, few people write about the national martial arts of the Republic of China. They all write about the infinite worlds and all kinds of nonsense.

Many people ask, what is the black dragon? Let me explain in unison, the black dragon is a totem! This book is indeed an imitation of the Guhuo Bird. The big brother made the Yanfu, and I made the totem! The black dragon is a totem, the protagonist walks with a totem, and his totem is the black dragon! The writing style of this book is similar to that of Gu Huoniao, but the content is definitely different. Secondly, I am definitely not as good at writing as the big brother. There is no doubt about this, Zhuyu comes first. I can only say that in the first copy, I tried my best to write the martial arts in my heart! The following dungeons are also as mentioned in the introduction, there will be monsters, mechas, etc., Etc. I cannot guarantee anything else, but the quality will definitely not be worse than the current content of the first dungeon! To be honest, if I plan to write an original copy in Zhutian Infinity, this decision is very difficult! After all, Zhutian still belongs to the same fan category, so it is quite difficult to be original. In addition, this title is not popular, and I didn't pass the first round of testing, which is quite helpless. When I tested the water, there were no new books in the library, resulting in a poor foundation and making promotion a luxury! But, I still want to keep writing! So, I hope that brothers and friends who think this book is not bad, parents who live in food and clothing, try not to keep books! After all, writing a book is definitely a hobby, but if you want to talk about it, you also have to eat, right? Please read more and read the latest chapters, please! You see, I write, cooperation will benefit both sides, right? I still hope that everyone will support me. After all, as a street fighter, I also want to try to see if I can make a living by writing books. I work full time, so the cost of trial and error is quite high. I won't let you down, I hope that all the parents who live in daily life can also give me a little hope! Thank you!

The writing is good, although there are many traces of routines that can be seen. Several households have the same direction.

Bad news, stitch monster, bad news, a mess of stitches

I'll go -_-||It's popular now to renovate old novels?

Bad news: Stitch monster Good news: All stitched up

It's not that the old man had murderous intentions towards the protagonist, the protagonist would have crippled him. Are those big soldiers in front just let go? Eh! If you don't change it, you won't be able to stand it anymore.

Why does the first chapter you wrote look so familiar to me.

I just came back from the reward to speak, and I always feel as if I have seen it before. Did it come out and rewrite it after it was cut before?

As mentioned before, the first round of recommendations for this book was very early. In addition, the title of the book was not chosen well and it was not yet included in the library for recommendation, which resulted in the book not passing the first round! So it is really important to catch up on reading now. Brothers, I must continue to recommend it next week! If streaking was not recommended, the author might starve to death... The most basic reason for writing a book is to make money and eat! I wrote it for you to see, it's mutually beneficial, right? Dear parents, please stop raising books! Read more! ! ! Tuesday's follow-up reading will determine whether the recommendation can be continued! So the author hereby implores all the parents who have food and clothing! Read more! ! !

When will you become the number one in Tianjin?

Why do I feel this way? I've seen it before

It's not enough to watch, it's not enough to watch at all. Zhutian Infinity wants to give up on martial arts.

Please read it! ! ! Dear food and clothing parents, if you think this book is good, please read the latest chapter! This book has been pushed forward. The current situation is a bit bad and numb. It is undoubtedly impossible to pass the first round of this follow-up reading! The author also needs to eat when writing a book, woohoo... It's not a poor performance. If you read the latest chapter, you can see how many people have read the book, and how many people have advanced to the next chapter. Everyone knows it. I really hope you don't just read one or two chapters and put them on the bookshelf without moving. I know that the new book issue does have fewer chapters, but it is really important to follow up! If you can't pass the first round, then it's really over... I didn't expect it to be so miserable, woo hoo...

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