If I Refuse Qinghua's Insurance, I Will Become a Military Officer.

Are you still saying that beheading one or two leaders will determine the outcome of the war? It's impossible. There are several senior leaders and staff members below who are still saying that beheading is too simple. Only by killing a considerable number of intermediate and senior leaders can it have a certain effect!

Forget about helicopters. After all, we are still in the Army. Does doing these things have anything to do with you being an officer? Now the fighter planes are flying, and then destroyers and submarines are also launched. Next time, just fly out of the earth and into space. If you don't do these hard work at the grassroots level as an officer, I think you are writing King of Soldiers. After a while, King of Soldiers won't be as good as changing his name to Superman.

Army, it's not like the armed police are looking for you to catch crimes. Armed police are usually dispatched to catch crimes. There are not enough people in the army to replace the armed police uniforms. This is politics.

1. It's too watery. The protagonist is awesome and so on. Every new character has to be repeated. Every time the protagonist encounters something or goes to the hospital, there are too many repetitive plots. 2. There are too many meritorious deeds outside the military camp, and the protagonist no longer looks like a soldier. The coincidences and forceful talk we encountered earlier were still reasonable, but the second time with the human trafficker was too ridiculous. After dinner, I went back and met the reporter who was investigating undercover. After receiving her request, I decided to send her there. Didn't there even be regulations on military management? 3. Are you writing about soldiers? All kinds of big scenes and events were forced on the protagonist. You didn't write anything about serious military matters. How was the protagonist in the military school? How much did he learn? How many skills did he accumulate for his future as a general? You didn't even say a word. You asked the protagonist to participate in a big event every day to gain credit? Promoted to general based on merit? The more I write, the more biased I am, and the more I write, the more clumsy I am. There are more than 400 chapters, and the timeline has not even passed a year. The more I read, the more speechless I become.

The latest chapter ninety-six: To be honest, this situation is absolutely impossible in reality. The recruit company has only been sent out for a month to perform a blockade mission, and they still face gun-wielding gangsters. If something happens to the recruits, who can bear the responsibility? If the recruits are given a broken stick, doesn't this mean that the recruits will die?

You've been writing an exercise for a month and haven't finished it yet. Why do you think your grades are so poor?

It's getting more and more complicated. The first one only requires a high school degree, the second one is upgraded to Peking University, this one is a direct postgraduate degree from Tsinghua University, and the next one is not a PhD from an Ivy League school. I won't watch it.

You should have given up on guaranteeing graduate school. The school doesn't care whether you are guaranteed or not, whether love comes or not. Anyway, there are plenty of people coming.

I thought it was another follow-up article from the studio, but it turned out to be a pretty good accident.

It's an excellent article among urban new books. It won't make people feel tired or the same, but it still has something novel.

Can the main plot of the story not be so forced? There are about ten accidents, all of which happened to the protagonist. Write less of this. It has been written as a special force. Officer training, training, strategy, etc. Are the main line, and meritorious service outside the military camp can only be occasional. It's all made up by various accidents, it's too compact, the plot is very simple, and it's boring and tiring to watch, so no other military officer novels are more popular!

Basically it can be summarized into three questions. The first one is too watery. He especially likes to use bread to calculate the word count. He also likes to insert it inexplicably in the middle of some plots, causing the characters to be interrupted, which greatly affects reading. The second one is that the author basically did not figure out what should be written and what should not be written. The plots that should be described are basically written in one stroke, or even not followed directly. Suddenly jumping to another plot, and writing a lot of things that should not be written. The overall plot is in a mess, and there is no sense of immersion Thirdly, there are a lot of typos, and instead of using harmonious words, a bunch of homophonic words are used instead, which also greatly affects the reading experience, causing the sense of immersion to further decrease

Announcement of abandonment. If you don't have the energy to write, don't write.

The life of a recruit is written interestingly and in detail. But too much detail will make it too long-winded, so get out of the novice village as soon as possible. This system is being used for too little purpose.

These pictures are so cool, I don't want to pursue them anymore.

Keep the pace as fast as possible, don't be like Wang Ye

He can't be... A eunuch...

It's a waste of time. It's a chatter from beginning to end. If you don't know how to describe psychological activities, don't write it. It's written like a primary school student's diary. The characters are very thin.

It starts after I feel the charge, the return of the Dragon King

As title

The last few dozen chapters have been difficult to read...

This must not be refined🤓

There haven't been any updates in over a month, so I guess it's unfinished.