Cultivation Department Shura Field

I don't know what will happen later, but I see that I don't feel any Shura field at all now, I just feel helpless for the two little ones. The three female protagonists written are not in the same rank at all. I feel that I favor the senior sister. I guess it will be no problem if I just kick out the other two single female protagonists. If the male protagonist hadn't deliberately used the excuse of not wanting to fall in love to enjoy the ambiguity, he would probably have exploded. He deliberately concealed this and that and it was slightly uncomfortable to watch. (More than 400 chapters have been updated, and I haven't read it yet. I hope that the other two characters can be better portrayed, or that the male protagonist will not continue to be a scumbag... Forget it, this is impossible. After all, in modern literary harems, the male protagonists are basically scumbags. It's just a question of whether readers will hate the male protagonist after being scumbag. The male protagonist is quite unpleasant at the moment.) The above is purely a personal opinion. If there is any difference in opinions, it is my fault. I apologize in advance.

I liked Song Xingye very much when I read this book. At that time, I just thought it was because I liked the story of salvation and being rescued (of course the author also portrayed his characters well, which was also the reason). A few days ago, I suddenly dreamed about some people and things in elementary school. When I was in elementary school, I couldn't concentrate at the end of class. I always couldn't hear what my homework was after class. One of my classmates would always patiently tell me (at that time, my ability to listen to others was worrying, and sometimes others were reluctant to tell me). That touch of tenderness and her demeanor seem to be engraved in my heart. In fact, she may not be that good, but now I have a perfect filter, as if I have fallen in love with the person in my dream. (The person in the dream seems to include a lot or nothing, but now I only remember her) Emotion overwhelms reason at this moment. I have an extremely profound understanding of Jiang Nan's sentence "Perhaps it is because of ignorance of dreams, wandering people chase phantoms"

It's very interesting. It's not a pretentious novel. Three people in the harem is really the best number of people. The female characters are not flat.

The writing is okay, but the beginning really pissed me off.

The female protagonist is okay, but I don't think it's eye-catching enough, and the image doesn't impress me that much. The male protagonist is okay in the same genre, at least not so poisonous.

Compared to the second article "I Want to Feed You", I will still choose the first article. In terms of attractiveness, I think the first article is generally more attractive. After reading a few pages, I have a lot of imagination about what will follow, and the settings are also very interesting. It is really mind-expanding! When designing the plot, it can also be seen that the author carefully planted hundreds of millions of attractive hooks to pique the readers' interest step by step. The "I" in the article, that is, Wang Ke, is an online ride-hailing driver. I was reading novels on the Internet in my spare time and accidentally discovered that the protagonist's name in the novel was also named Wang Ke! What happened at the beginning was exactly the same as what I encountered. Under my urging, the subsequent updates also went in the same direction. Could it be that I became the protagonist in the novel? The general plot introduction can already attract others. The two people who have appeared in the novel so far have a strong sense of three-dimensionality and are well shaped. Although the unfolding of various small thoughts cannot be seen through the performance of the female protagonist, the male protagonist can understand the various thoughts of the female protagonist through the update of the novel and the description of the text in the novel. It makes people curious about what the male protagonist will do after having this ability. But it is obvious that writing this article also has certain shortcomings, that is, it is not easy for the author to write, and it is quite difficult. If it is not properly controlled and handled, it is very likely that it will die suddenly in the middle. The theme of the second article is relatively common, and it has this kind of regular readers. Someone in the chapter also mentioned that although it is enough for the author to feed the author, the upper limit of one may be higher. In short, if I were given a choice, I would most likely choose the idea of ​​"As the protagonist, I am sorry".

As the old book "Cultivation System Shura Field" comes to an end, it is time to start a new book. First of all, I would like to congratulate Da Lao Shu for successfully completing it. Although I personally feel that it is a bit rushed, there is still a lot that can be written. For example, when I first entered college, I felt that I could carry out a lot of daily life, after all, I changed the map. However, it is decided to end it, so let Xu Zhe's story stay here. About the new book, there are two openings. After reading and tasting it carefully, I still feel that the first opening "I'm Sorry for Being the Protagonist" is more attractive to me, while the other "I Want to Feed You" is not that interesting in comparison. In the following text, "I'm sorry to be born as the protagonist" is omitted as "Protagonist", and "I want to feed you" is omitted as "Feeding". First of all, in terms of setting, the setting of "Protagonist" is relatively novel, and virtual interaction interacts with reality. Wang Ke can obtain a certain God's perspective by reading novels. The encounter between taxi driver Wang Ke and runaway girl Chen Tianwei is very dramatic, and the relationship between the two is also very interesting, which will make people want to read it again. "Feeding" is relatively ordinary, and it did not give me enough curiosity and satisfaction. It is very routine, especially the appearance of the heroine. The rich girl meets a poor boy, takes shelter from the rain and becomes the hero's first guest. Although it is largely set to Japanese food to avoid comparison with many Chinese food articles, for me personally, the appeal is further reduced. Secondly, regarding the portrayal of the protagonist, the current "Protagonist" chapter gives me a more three-dimensional impression of Wang Ke, a male protagonist whose parents have died, who is constantly striving for self-improvement and has good intentions. By chance or God's will, I met the sensitive and suspicious runaway heroine Chen Tianwei. The heroine has many little thoughts, but her portrayal is pitiful. It's great! The male protagonist Shibazaki of "Feeding" is an ordinary chef who time travels to a teenager in Japan. I personally feel that he is very ordinary and does not have much sense of empathy and attraction. Because there is only one chapter each, I can only provide some personal feelings from a reader's perspective based on my reading experience. I hope it will be helpful to start a new book! Finally, I wish you a smooth book launch and a best-selling list!

The writing is okay, the emotional line is very good, and there is nothing toxic in general. It is just that it is unreasonable to make money in business and always have to share 30 to 40% of the income as dividends.

I've seen almost 300 pictures. There's nothing major about it. It's pretty good. Based on my many years of reading experience, I should have a high-quality product. When it was put on the shelves, it said 1,700 orders were placed. Why has it taken so long to not even have a high-quality product? Is it because the writing collapsed at the end or is it because of the lazy update of the author? The book is good, don't leave it to the eunuch if your grades are too bad. Come on, author By the way, I want to complain that the level of the high school entrance speech is too bad. It is really poisonous. Fortunately, it is just a short paragraph. The author still needs to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses In my impression, one of the best school speeches is the nirvana of grilled fish and the talk of the protagonist in the balloon. Those are all able to arouse emotions However, the author's writing of Duanshui Stock Trading is good and generous. Recommended New entrants will have a good reading experience by skimming over some of the little poisonous points. Recommended

I have read the opening chapters of two new works, and I like the style of the first one better. The writing style is concise and goes straight to the topic without being wordy. The setting has a very novel feeling. The protagonist discovers that his life has been written into a novel, or the protagonist himself is indeed the protagonist of his life, but his life trajectory is presented in the form of a novel. I feel that the imagination is relatively large and very creative. I can extend it to write a lot of things in depth, and I have no idea how the plot will develop further. Moreover, the rhythm of the first three chapters is tight, the plot is quite gripping, and the suspense is well set up. I feel like I am eager to follow up. But in order to avoid being arrested by the "Thunder King", the female student character who is currently debuting got into a car in a panic and followed the driver to his home. The driver walked to the bed after the little girl fell asleep and looked at the little girl and a strange adult man in the middle of the night. It still felt a bit strange.

Xu Zhe, didn't you say you didn't have any love plans in high school? So what do you mean by being a scumbag? At least Jiang Yuan didn't have puppy love. Xu Zhe: My goal is to make money, not to be single. It will be fine when falling in love no longer affects making money.

I have read both new chapters, and I think they are both quite good, each with its own attractions. "I Want to Feed You" adopts a relaxed Japanese campus style, paired with a food system or a business system? They are all very good elements that can make readers relax and enjoy themselves. It will definitely look good as you continue writing. Currently, I am curious about more functions of the system and the future development direction of the protagonist. I am looking forward to the protagonist becoming the comedy king in the island country. Oh no, it is the high school chef~~ The title of the book "I Want to Feed You" feels a little strange and does not seem to be eye-catching. You can consider revising it. After watching "I'm Sorry for Being the Protagonist", I still can't tell what style it is. Is it more suspenseful? The protagonist's life is the real-time plot of the novel. This setting is quite interesting, and it has a feeling of interweaving reality and fiction. And the suspense set up at the break in the third chapter is quite interesting. It is a good hook to attract further reading. It makes me full of curiosity. When will the novel be updated, what will be written after the update, whether Chen Tianwei can escape the clutches of "correction", how the male protagonist's fate will unfold, etc. The content is very flexible, scalable and inclusive. It feels like it can dig deep and stretch out wide.

Currently, I like the second opening chapter because I have always liked articles about light food. Reading it can relax the nerves that are tense due to the busy life. After reading the first four chapters of "Feed You", I am also curious about how the subsequent plot will unfold. I feel that the protagonist will have many interesting stories with a group of cute girls in the cooking club. And the article is very rich in elements, rebirth + system + day light + campus + food. It's hard to say how high the upper limit is, but the lower limit will not be low. I feel that the audience is quite large. However, some of the narratives in the first four chapters of "Feed You" are rather stiff and not very smooth, and I feel that they could be further optimized.

You have been ruined by the PSP in your life and cannot have a serious relationship with Xu Zhe. When you are having dinner with him, you always think about it, if only he brings a PSP for me to play with. When you send him home, you always wonder if there will be a PSP behind the door of his house. When you are sitting on a chair in his house, he says to go into the room and change clothes. Your heart is pounding, and you are always thinking, if he comes out with a PSP, should you kneel down to him? Then he came out wearing dinosaur pajamas and asked you what to do if your good friend confessed to him. You said come on, okay, and you brought his PSP over to play with it without even thinking about it.

Help, 🥵please update it more🥵🥵🥵 Reading this book is like reading the dark history of my junior high school🤢🤢🤢, but the protagonist is handled very well and it is very enjoyable to watch😋😋😋. I was so stunned😭😭😭😭😭😭 I was slapping myself on the ear and watching 😭😭😭[ fn=12] Please update a little more🥵🥵🥵🥵😍😍😍 Just a little more😍😍😍😍 I can't sleep😍😍😫😫😫😫😫🤡🤡🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

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I thought I couldn't read urban harem novels, but I didn't expect that it was just because all I read were novice novels. What I read was all about giving away girls on purpose, and slapping people in the face to push the plot. If this book doesn't focus on the characters, it's more like buying stocks. It doesn't matter if the characters are not broken. I think an excellent urban harem novel can separate the heroines into pure love stories.

I have been collecting it for more than half a year, and I finally got it for free.

After reading a little bit, I feel that it is a pity. In fact, the career line should be placed in college, and the high school line should use academic performance to show off, so that readers can enjoy it.

After reading Chapter 11, I just hope there won't be a situation where I have a romantic connection with the protagonist but doesn't accept it. The two green plums next door look quite comfortable to me from the front. It wasn't until later that there were several female characters who had emotional connections with the protagonist, but they refused to accept them and persuaded me to quit. Although the author talked about two at the beginning, now that you have decided on two, why not write them down? Why add a few love lines of defeated dogs? Highlight the protagonist? 😡

It's fully booked. It has the same name as the main character. It feels so immersive.

Beiji's wife is about to give birth recently, so updates are unstable. Tell everyone

There are a lot of great new light novel books coming out this month. This one and the one with super powers are currently my favorites, and this one is even better than that one. The plot of this book is more extensible and the story line has more content to tell. Be optimistic about this book and use it later to become the final Gu King.

I stayed up late to finish reading it and let me tell you how I felt. I grew up relatively early in junior high school, and I look older and precocious, so junior high school is the peak of my love. In fact, we started dating in elementary school (laughing) There are also seniors who have confessed to me, but they are just my seniors in the first and second grades of junior high school, and I also had an affair with my seniors in the third grade of junior high school So in my opinion, what the author wrote is quite real. At least I have encountered all the situations in the book, including that Sun Xqi

As a patient in his previous life, the protagonist received no love, had little social interaction, and was very lonely. In this life, he is not so dependent on his parents because of his precocious puberty, and does not have much entertainment. There is almost no pressure in life and career. In the future, he has the guarantee of food and clothing. Compared with such superior conditions in his previous life, the protagonist is still so self-disciplined, like an ascetic. Like a monk, he doesn't feel much joy in the face of achievements, and he doesn't feel complacent in the face of the love of the heroine. He just restrains himself, keeps learning, and faces people who like him around him. The protagonist is not unaware, but faces it calmly. He has never been loved in his previous life, and his life is miserable and lonely. The experiences in his previous life have not left any trauma in the protagonist's heart? Now facing such great love, doesn't the protagonist have any flutter in his heart? Doesn't he want to get closer or more intimate with the heroine? Doesn't he need to make up for decades of loneliness?

I don't know what I'm writing, it's a waste of time, I get more and more disappointed as I get to the end, it's uneven, I can't beat the senior sister 2 vs 1, I even suspect that the author is writing about a single female protagonist, the other two are just supporting roles, the author is not suitable to write multiple female protagonists, I can't find the feeling of Chen Gou, nor can I find the feeling of childhood sweetheart Cao Thief.

I am a recently exempted book, and I have only read part of it. I haven't finished it yet. The writing is actually pretty good, but I have a negative attitude toward Shen Lan's characterization. The chapter I just finished, Shen Lan, lured the underage protagonist to drink, and tried to violate the idea of ​​violating the protagonist. In the end, the protagonist was drunk and kissed the protagonist. This plot makes me feel a little sick. Even if you don't feel anything about this plot, you can imagine for yourself that your 14-year-old son who can earn 100,000 yuan a month is being seduced by a 17-year-old boy to drink and then be kissed and even violated in a hotel by a 17-year-old girl whose father wears leather clothes and rides a motorcycle and owns a billiard hall... Or you can also swap the genders. Can you tolerate your 14-year-old daughter who can program and earn 100,000 yuan a month? 😭😭😭 Except for this plot, this book is actually pretty good, but I still feel disgusted by this plot, so I will stand firmly opposite Shen Lan's party.

There is always an unexpected but expected joy in reading this book.

This book is really much better than those bad street books that copy and write songs after rebirth and then collapse into big stallions. Unfortunately, the results are not good.

I had a hazy feeling that the writing was good before, but the recent writing seems to make the protagonist a bit scummy. . . . .