Dedicate a Girl to the Birth of a Monster

This theme can definitely be science fiction or fantasy! The subject matter is interesting, but the writing style needs to be improved.

The subject matter is good and the imagination is quite big, but the writing style is a bit stream-of-consciousness, and the narrative technique feels a little lacking, and the characters are not three-dimensional enough. It took me a long time to realize that Teacher Liu is a female, and the images of the two female protagonists are completely blank. I know almost nothing except their names and genders.

I rarely see this kind of subject matter, surprisingly interesting

The writing is a little lacking, but it still has the potential to be a masterpiece.

The subject matter is good, my eyes light up 😍

"The artistic girl who draws monsters doesn't want to fail"

6. You cut it just after you finished speaking, right?

I think it's interesting but my grades are too bad. Let's take care of it first.