Fake Brave 2

Is the author planning to adopt a two-dimensional style? The language is more like a two-dimensional light novel. The channel is wrong. Readers of the fantasy label tend to prefer less verbal descriptions and more action descriptions. The protagonist's character is revealed at the beginning, which is the starting point for readers to be tired of the two-dimensional Asasi, which is even more wrong. It is recommended that the author first use a few chapters to introduce the worldview background of this article after summoning the heroes, such as the environment of the royal city, the lives of the people, etc. To increase the sense of immersion. Then, the characters are slowly revealed. After the characters appear, the identity is first revealed. The current character's name suddenly appears. The memory point is too low, and it is easy to forget after reading.