Pirates: Become the Remnant of Rocks at the Beginning

Give up and defeat Zefa at his peak in Chapter 13? Although it took seven years of cultivation, isn't this speed a bit exaggerated? Although Zefa's performance was poor in the later period, it was because his asthma was too affecting for a physical warrior like him, coupled with too many old injuries (even a broken arm) and depression (first the death of his family, the massacre of his students, his own broken arm, the disgusting operations of the World Government... Severely weakened Zefa's energy God, his domineering power was directly cut off.) But as a general at the same time as Garp during the Warring States Period, he may not be as good as Garp at his peak (his strength is a mystery, hard to estimate), but he is at least stronger than the three generals (before the war). After all, no matter in terms of domineering strength (at the same time as Garp, he had a black wrist (known as) or combat experience (there were too many monsters and snake gods in his time, and there were existences of White Beard, Golden Lion and Roger, and his experience in fighting top strong men was definitely much better than the three generals in the current anime), so his destructive power was weaker than the three generals (natural system advantage, physical strength) Mainly single) The top three generals in the top war are not as good as Sengoku Kapu Zefa's generation. After all, they have not completely reached their peak (even if Akainu is injured after ten days and ten nights, his strength will increase rather than be weakened. In addition, the age of the peak of One Piece, a strong man, is about three to five years away). With the protagonist's combat power in defeating Peak Zefa, to put it bluntly, you can now challenge the three legendary immortals in a one-on-one fight (One Piece's top combat power does not have instant kills, no matter how weak you are, you can hit it, and the protagonist is not easy to kill at the same level, and will be severely damaged and run away at most). The rest can either go to other worlds, or build a piece of land to develop and wait for a wave to send away Im, bury the world government, and rebuild a new order. But you are too fast in the early stage, and I am a little uncomfortable with it. I'm sorry, I gave up. [Personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it] I personally feel that it's not as good as the early sense of immersion in the book "This Pirate Backed by Justice" [limited to Chapter 13 that I read] [Personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you 🙏]

Why is it about summoning characters again? It's not that it's not right, but I came in through the title of your book, so my expectation is how Rocks' remnant gang will develop and become big pirates. Some new characters can be produced, but you summon characters to your subordinates. If I haven't seen these anime characters, I will be very annoyed. I don't know what their abilities are. If I have, I will be afraid of the characters' OOC.

The oral theme is good, but I can't stand it once I see the anime characters from next door coming in...😰😰😰

The original characters are okay, but there's really no need to draw Bankai characters.

It may be much better to extract the ability seeds of the characters in the world after the evolution of the world rules. You can create original characters, and then match the seeds to obtain the abilities. In this way, you can not only have an understanding of the characters' abilities, but also get rid of their sense of inconsistency.

I was deceived by the title, and then came the summoning flow 😅

Xiaowu beat the Shichibukai and still managed to return to the second level of return? Are you playing Hawkeye? Powerless to complain, messy combat power

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is one of the best among pirates. Kaido can't beat the Golden Lion, but he can't beat the Red Earl. The remaining Aunt Whitebeard is at least one of the top three in combat effectiveness. Then he said that Whitebeard can only support a pirate group by himself. Auntie's son has not reached his peak, and the protagonist is the whole group. The combat power is considered to be one of the best, isn't it? Why do I see a few lieutenants in this navy directly targeting the protagonist. Although he is a general in the future, he is not as strong as he was when he was a general. The latest chapter of the King's Shichibukai and Esdeath said where does the courage come from to start a war? Just a cat or a dog dares to start a war, the main character The man in the corner went out once and the navy came to the world to catch him. All the members of the Shichibukai are at the level of Hawkeye in the original work. He fought the four emperors twice. Doflamingo and Kaido in the original work were really wronged by him. Such a routine, I look down on the aunt who huddles up on a cake island to give birth to a baby. The protagonist is a otaku at home. Why, your protagonist is an ant queen and she is in a nest in a cave. No, no, don't be a captain. Summon a Meruem and let him take you to the end. Is it okay? The protagonist is a lanzi sea emperor, sea ji Anyone who comes to the nv bar can touch it. It is recommended to open the skill "Enemies of the World". The whole world will find trouble for you.

The upgrade is too fast, and the characters summoned are too strong. If you don't want to be invincible, you have to overpower the characters. Overpowering them will be disgusting. It is better to summon fewer characters. Some of the summoned characters are still in the juvenile stage, and some growth plots are added. As a result, the whole thing now looks very awkward, wanting everything and full of entanglements.

The frequency of summoning characters is too fast. After reading more than ten chapters, there are already more than ten summoned characters. In addition, the author's writing style is average and he cannot write out the characteristics of each summoned character at all, just like the data people used for fighting. Moreover, the summoned characters are too strong. After only a dozen chapters, the strength of the protagonist pirate group is already stronger than that of the Yonko Pirates at their peak. There is no plot from weak to strong, and there are too many plug-ins. I don't know what you, the author, will write next.

I can only say a few words about this writing style

Isn't summoning other anime characters equivalent to group travel? It is well known that the books written by Qun Chuan are extremely poisonous, and all the books have been thrown out 😅

This level. . . . Damn it, I don't see anyone reading this rubbish novel.

Forehead! I was still attracted by the title of the book, but you did this for me...

The biggest problem with the summoning flow is that the author cannot control it and it is easy to be stereotyped. The one that has a profound impact is the Black Cavalry Chamber of Commerce, especially the Sea of ​​Death Crossing. If the ability alone is fine, if all systems add mid-term combat power, it will easily collapse into an invincible flow.

System flow + summon flow. . . No desire to read at all

Let's talk about what I think is the poisonous point The protagonist's golden finger is that you can get victory points by defeating someone, and the victory points can be used to draw a lottery. The same person can only get it once a year. The weakest person has 1 point, while Zefa only has 100 points. But the protagonist always stays in one place and never takes the initiative to attack. The most important thing is that there are a lot of monsters in the sea that can beat you. Why are you hiding there if you don't fight monsters and upgrade? Is there any purpose for the author to give this to the protagonist?

It's still possible to draw skills! I don't want to be too sophisticated. I won't read books that include characters from One Piece. . .