
Dou Po: Become a Disciple of Han Li and Kill the Unparalleled Xiao Lao Mo
斗破:拜师韩立,杀伐无双萧老魔
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- 797k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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Xiao Yan is not like Han Li. He is cautious, but he pays more attention to emotions than Han Li. This is destined to be like Han Li, but not Han Li.
How can I put it, I probably know why this book is not popular. Because it is too similar to the original work, and its own content and plot are too rare, no one reads it. This genre is actually the ancient fandom and group streaming, and the plot is basically unchanged. Because the early fandom writers didn't have enough writing skills at that time, I made a compromise. This is the fanfiction generation 1.0. Now that the fandom has been in the fandom for more than ten years, the writing style of fan authors has also improved greatly. The fanfic has become based on the plot of the original work, and some original plots have been substituted into it. This is the current generation of fandom 2.0 The current flaw of the author is that he writes in the style of the fanfiction 1.0 Generation, which does not conform to the general trend, so it is not popular. This is my humble opinion, just click X if you don't like it
Tell the truth, did you only see Xiaoyan's humiliation of breaking off the engagement, but didn't see the shiny green hair on Nalan Yanran's head? From another perspective, your sister's fiancé is having an affair with other girls, who can bear it?
Isn't this the idea of an old demon Han replacing Yao Lao?
How old is Han Li? Han Li is 20,000 years old in the Mahayana. He cannot become Han Li by eliminating inflammation. Han Li has persecutory delusions. He is already invincible in the mainland when he is over 40 years old. Han Li is only invincible in the human world when he is over 1,000 years old. Han Li cannot be considered invincible in the spiritual world. He himself has admitted that he cannot defeat the Time Spider's fusion. Han Li's character has been worn out.
Are you copying the original work? Are one thousand of the two thousand words your own?
It's a pity. I want to see those who are cultivating immortals in Dou Qi Continent. Dou Zun sits at one table and Dou Sage sits at another table. Xiao Yan: Where is the big seat?
The introduction and the content are completely different. The introduction is about an actor. He lost the three-year contract, but the content not only won, he made a big fuss in Yunlan Sect, killed Yunshan, and hunted eagles to protect the law. This is to trick people into killing them.
Xiaoyan frowned and retreated behind everyone. Han Li frowned and held Xiaoyan in front of him. Xiao Yan frowned and retreated behind Han Li. 🙂
Fighting through the sky speed version
The martial arts and fighting skills are basically from the original work, and the rhythm is also the same as the original work. There is basically no difference. What is the use of Old Demon Han? It's better to read the original work
Have you never read The Legend of Mortals Cultivating Immortality? What is the character of Old Demon Han? Isn't this Yaochen with a different name?
The further you get to the back, the less Han Li looks like him. The back is completely modeled after Yao Lao. Han Li does whatever Yao Lao does. These are two people with completely different personalities.
What the hell is the author? As Gu Xun'er, he doesn't have the space jade token of the ancient clan's fighting saint on his body, so he uses Ling Ying to self-destruct. Even the Nine-Star Fighting Emperor cannot be invincible in the Northwest Continent. The entire ancient tribe was kicked in the head by a donkey, and a Nine-Star Fighting Emperor was asked to protect a tribesman with a divine bloodline.
The evil poisonous body is really nothing to Old Demon Han. In fact, it is nothing to advanced immortal cultivators. Immortal cultivators are those who have gained enlightenment and accumulated energy like Doupo. They have reached the top of the world in a few decades. After a long time of development, it is still just a poison elixir method, and there is no dedicated cultivation method. In the end, a poisonous body backfires. Look at Zhetian and get many divine bodies. You see, the one that will backfire is not a boost.
If Han Li came to Dou Qi Continent, he would not accept Xiao Yan. It will only silently absorb his fighting spirit until Xiao Yan dies.
Azhe, isn't there something wrong in the last few chapters? Hasn't the Xuan Zhong Ruler turned into a black flame sword?
Don't know what he wrote? Han Laomo has never been so stupid as to expose himself to the crowd. He has always blended himself into the crowd.
It's written like this and has such a pretentious attitude, what kind of taste does anyone pay to see it?
To be honest, I have been suffering from inflammation for a long time. The first book I read was Fighting to Break the Sphere. I read it four times and couldn't read the first three chapters after the fourth time.
After all, Nalan is really not a vicious female supporting character. Many people criticize her for breaking off the engagement because she dislikes Xiao Yan as a waste, but Tudou's setting is that without any emotional foundation, she will break off the engagement no matter what. It's just that she regretted it later when she got in love. This is something for later The improper way to break off the engagement did hurt Xiao Yan's heart objectively, but judging from her subjective position and understanding of the Xiao family, she could not do better The book does emphasize that breaking off the engagement in private is the best way countless times, but this statement is not completely true. Firstly, talking in the lobby of the Xiao family is not a public meeting, and it is not beating gongs and drums at the gate of Wutan City; secondly, even if the engagement is really broken off privately, and it is only discussed with Xiao Yan and his son, once the engagement is finalized and the dissolution is to be announced, others will still talk about it, and it will be useless to withdraw privately. Looking at it from the other side, the purpose of her visit was to "break off the engagement" and she had no intention of humiliating Xiao Yan. This was a good appearance for both parties. Xiao Yan got angry and immediately threw away the divorce letter. This time, Nalan was deliberately humiliated by Xiao Yan, but Nalan did not have any overreaction. If she really came to break off the engagement because Xiao Yan was a fw, then it wouldn't be explosive if the fw wrote a letter of divorce Another point is that Nalan Cuo should not use the power of the Yunlan Sect to suppress others, let's look at it again. Nalan Jie was determined not to allow her to break off the engagement, right? Therefore, the most suitable way to rely on the elders of the family was simply not feasible. Looking at Xiao Zhan's behavior, when he heard that Nalan was here to break off the engagement, he became angry and vindictive on the spot. Without a kudzu leaf to stop her, she would have to leave Xiao's house alone - it would not work to go alone to break off the engagement. These two are gambling to death. If they don't rely on the Yunlan Sect, what else can Nalan do? I didn't think much about it when I answered the question, but the guy in the comment area made me think more and more. Compared with when I first answered this question, the general direction of my thoughts has basically remained the same, but there are indeed many differences in the details Most people have always emphasized that Nalan Yanran ignored the dignity of Xiao Yan and his son, which was the biggest mistake There is a problem. It is wrong to ask Nalan to consider Xiao Yan's face, because Xiao Yan and his son have not considered Nalan's face at all The solutions to their marriage are: First, don't marry with your belly from the beginning. , Everyone is happy; Second, Nalan Jie should not be so stubborn. When Nalan said she did not want to be accused of marriage when she was a child, he agreed and took her to discuss the termination of the contract. As long as Xiao Yan did not become a loser and his mentality collapsed, nothing big would happen Third, in the three years when Xiao Yan became a loser, the Xiao family took the initiative to go to Nalan's house to terminate the contract The third point is the key point The situation in the novel is not the worst. The worst is that as soon as Xiao Yan fell from the clouds to the bottom, Nalan couldn't wait to break off the engagement. Therefore, the novel does not describe Nalan very well. If she broke off the engagement as soon as she heard that Xiao Yan had become a loser three years ago, there would be no way for her to leave it here. But waiting for three years before coming here is a bit subtle. Xiao Yan was laughed at, would Nalan really not be criticized? Xiao Yan is under huge psychological pressure, but Nalan Zhen is not? Xiao Yan's face is all about face, but Nalan Yanran doesn't want to lose face? Xiao Yan felt that if Xiao Zhan was embarrassed, he would be laughed at and unable to hold his head up. From another perspective, it was Nalan Jie who made the decision at the beginning. Was he embarrassed in the past three years? But Nalan Yanran still waited for three years under pressure, and Nalan Jie never let go, and always disagreed with Nalan Yanran to break off the engagement So, Xiao Zhan, the patriarch, did not understand the ways of the world, and the other party clearly gave him three years. If he thought more, he would take the initiative to go to Nalan's house, and there would be a high probability that nothing would happen in the future Nalan Yanran finally lost her composure and took the initiative to run to Xiao's house. Who would have thought that Xiao Zhan didn't know her at all and couldn't even guess it - he didn't take the engagement seriously either Xiao Zhan never thought about the dignity of Nalan's family or Nalan Jie's dignity; Xiao Yan also didn't think about whether Nalan Yanran's situation was as embarrassing as his own - so he came to ask Nalan Yanran to consider everything, is it reasonable or not? Nalan Yanran was asked to quietly go to the Xiao family to discuss the matter, not to break off the engagement directly but to discuss first, such as how to compensate, such as the subsequent cooperation between the two families - Guigui, Xiao Zhan was in his forties at the time, and he had been the head of the family for a long time. In addition, I still think that her behavior when breaking off the engagement was not excessive. First, she knew she was wrong; second, the apology was basically in place (because Xiao Zhan only gave it out after he agreed, so I didn't expect it to be a charity); third, it was "in public", I will explain Once again, there should be a large number of outsiders in the public, and all the people present are Xiao family members. What kind of public is it in your own family? Essentially, it is because the patriarch cannot suppress the gossip of the clan that he is embarrassed. I blame her, an outsider, for not doing things well. Is there really nothing wrong with her? Besides, Nalan Yanran is not overly domineering. It is clearly written in the original work that she is a little girl who was so frightened by Xiao Zhan that she did not dare to raise her head when he got angry. Xiao Yan labeled her as disrespectful to her elders and then became angry. In other cases, I have never seen an author create such a controversial female character, who is simply evil or stupid Nalan asked to stay away from the other Xiao family elders to talk alone when he entered the house. That would naturally be better; but when Xiao Zhan thought of a certain possibility, he asked to talk in private first, which could also avoid the messy things that followed What, he really didn't think of it? Nalan Yanran could not imagine that she would have to protect the face of the head of the clan in the eyes of her own family, which was completely within the scope of her understanding The following original answer was what I originally wanted to change, but I will not change it No matter how she broke off the engagement, it must be excessive in Xiao Yan's heart But as a reader I can completely understand, and at the same time, I feel that her way is not unreasonable The reason for Xiao Yan's anger in the novel is that Nalan broke off the engagement in public. First of all, it cannot be justified in public - the lobby of the Xiao family, to put it bluntly, it is your Xiao Yan's own living room. This is considered a public meeting, so how can we take into account his self-esteem? Secondly, she said that she did not consider the situation of the Xiao family and the face of Xiao Yan and his father. She didn't understand the Xiao family's situation, so she could only apply it according to her family's environment. Nalan Jie told the Nalan family that Nalan Yanran had no choice but to rely on the Yunlan Sect to break off the engagement because of his pressure. How could she have imagined that the branches of the Xiao family were complicated, that the head of the family could not convince the public, that a few elders were so arrogant, and that Xiao Zhan couldn't control it at all How to cancel the so-called private engagement? Climb over the wall to find Xiao Yan in the middle of the night to discuss whether we should break off the engagement? (If Xun'er found out, he might not ask Ling Ying to kill him on the spot) In this way, Xiao Yan would still feel that Nalan was adding insult to injury, because his mentality was completely broken at the time Moreover, even if it was handled this way, the consequences would be equally serious. Assuming that they happily decided to break off their engagement in the middle of the night, they couldn't hold on to the news the next day, right? After being released, the young clan leader originally had a fiancée who disappeared inexplicably. How can no one in the clan gossip about her? Borrowing off the engagement on the spot, after all, everything was out in the open, and everyone who saw it knew what was going on; if it was resolved privately, other people didn't see it and didn't know the process, so they might guess how ugly it was Even if they were both extremely ambitious, and the surprise was very After a long discussion, they decided to talk about their own affairs and save face for each other, so it was decided that Xiao Yan would unilaterally announce his divorce from his wife, and Nalan would unilaterally announce his divorce from his husband - even so, some people in the Xiao family still laughed at Xiao Yan - "The dead loser is left here to achieve spiritual victory" It can be said that as long as the engagement is broken off, it will be a dead end for Xiao Yan. There is no better solution except "breaking out the conflict in front of everyone in the family and writing a letter of divorce to divorce his wife". No matter what, there are people who are weird with himbb But Tudou didn't pay in the early stage. Lan wrote too much and brought a priceless apology; later she wrote that "the behavior was right but the method was wrong", which was outrageous It would be better to write that she did not keep the promise of her ancestors and went her own way which was wrong - anyway, with a feudal background, this way of writing is more justified.
Why doesn't the author update it? I still think it's quite interesting and a pretty good article.
Support the author, but I also hope everyone will support my friend's novel. I would like to recommend you a fantasy novel that is extremely imaginative. This novel is: Returning to the Fairyland, the book is at the starting point. This is a very silly novel. The author specializes in funny novels. There are various plot contrasts and funny plots in the novel. The novel is very funny. I hope you can support my good brother. I hope you can support the crowd and the seat. Thank you for your support, fellow Taoists.
Author, why don't you update? I've been waiting for you for a long time
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
The author didn't reply. It seems it's a studio article.
With so few updates, does the author not know how to be a eunuch?
How should I put it, since you want to hide it, can you hide it till the end? What about that soul? ? ? No soul? At least you should hide your surname Xiao when you go to a new place.
It feels like there are quite a few books in the same month that are eunuchs at about the same time 😭
Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King
Is there any update? Why did it break again?