This Brave Man Wants to Retire

This different world setting is so classic. 😅 At a glance, you can try to find some new races or different powers or equipment systems. It is really difficult to have the desire to continue watching with this ancient western fantasy setting.

The beginning is too bland. Although there is nothing poisonous about it, it is not very attractive either. It may be difficult to attract people.

At least the last book has a beginning and an end. Please support me.

That's it? A classic Western fantasy routine. At the beginning, I saw the protagonist's subordinates slandering him, and thought that the protagonist would awaken as a citizen of the motherland You said I have done these things, then I'd better really do them, protect our country → Protect my country

It has a bit of the flavor of ancient Internet literature, the plot is simple and straightforward, the protagonist is invincible and pretentious all the way, and the royal line. There probably aren't many people reading this kind of writing these days, it's really too old.

The main story has a Japanese comic style. Start the pretense process around why your former subordinates betrayed you. Then find the traitor and fight the final boss again. Anyone who reads Japanese comics can guess this main line. How can I put it, there is no sense of expectation. I hope you can write hundreds of millions of stories.

Use force to suppress all participants during direct meetings. I don't quite understand it. Can anyone explain it?

It's too urgent. This plot is really too urgent. Moreover, the plot is much duller, neither sad nor exciting.

The name and content, except for the identity of the time traveler at the beginning, are more like the adventures of a classic Japanese-style warrior who left the team. The story of a former warrior who was abandoned by his companions and rediscovered the truth. It is very classic, but the writing style is also interesting. It is this subject matter, and the author's plot is advanced very quickly. It feels like he is planning to write a short story as a training work?

Wudiliu is written in such a bland way

The writing of this book is okay, but the choice of subject matter is not enough to support a complete novel with hundreds of chapters. If there were dozens of pictures in the past, many people liked them, but now there are hundreds of pictures that are not written, and you don't even want to click them, so when you read it, it feels uninteresting. In fact, this type of book should be more like the world travel genre with dozens of chapters and a small copy.

Warcraft Quest has been re-skinned and turned into fan fiction. I guess the female version of the Evil Demon King is Alice. Which quest line should I write next? Ancient gods or elements?

Overall, this book is at an above-average level. I personally haven't found any bad points in all the chapters so far. This book is mainly a story in the post-brave era. The protagonist, the hero, returns after leaving to save the world again. This book is not good enough in some interesting aspects, which means it is generally not good enough, but it is still well written and worth reading.

It's beautiful. I'm an old bookworm and I like to write like this.

There are a lot of foreshadowings. For example, the one with the Holy Light Knight is preaching. It feels like a player is collecting faith (the person behind the Holy Light Religion may be a player. It may be that a player has discovered the role of faith) and wants to become a god. It is estimated that several players who want to kill the protagonist have this reason, because the protagonist is too deeply rooted in the hearts of the people in this era, and it is difficult for him to spread the collection belief. Darken the protagonist and eliminate his previous influence. Only then can we spread the faith and become a god. Holy Light Religion players (there may be some) feel that they may also be with the Necromancer, directing and acting on their own to collect faith.

It feels pretty good, but there seem to be a few people subscribing. It needs a wave of promotion 😅

Although the plot is a bit old-fashioned, the setting is still very classic. Keeping this style and ending with about a million words can accumulate a lot of fans. I will order it all when it is released, and I look forward to the author's next book to become a god!

It feels okay. Why is the atmosphere like no one watching?

A bit boring, the writing is okay

Well, it looks good, I like to see it.

It's been a long time since I've read a novel about taste like this. I'll keep ordering more.

OK, here comes my favorite part of the dark dungeon again 😍

Before signing, there are two chapters. After signing, there is only one chapter. I don't ask you to update more, just keep two chapters 😭😭😭😭

I feel like the author could write some extra stories, such as how the Shadow Council traveled through time, what it was like before the time travel, and how it came together.

I feel good, it looks good.

The writing is good, the story is cliché but the design is reasonable, you can take a look