Diving into the Sea

It's obvious from the first chapter that the protagonist is a complete fool. Dare to eat food from unknown sources. He doesn't even know his current situation. The function of attributes is not understood. [There is another bug. It is set that reality and virtual interoperability are available, and contaminated food in the virtual world is inedible. It is easy to reduce the san value. In reality, food is safe. You can collect real food into the virtual one. The san value is reduced. It will reduce your sanity. And rationally speaking, strange things will happen. If you encounter an evil god.

How can I put it, if it is not so messy, it would be a pretty good novel. The game's real world of diving and digging for treasures is already synthesized. It is exactly the same as the introduction. I really want to read it. In the end, there is another one looking for my sister, and then I am being watched in reality. Others are the Riddler, I am irritable, and I was born in The enemy is being ganked to death, and the fun point of driving such a big attack is not reflected at all. You have to go all the way to some bloody battlefield, and you become crazy on the way. Oh my God, it completely deviates from the main line of the introduction, and the fun point is lost. Isn't it good to just write a scuba diving treasure hunting synthesis to show off, a simple and cool article?

Shen Nong Trial Book, I have read 40 chapters and here are my opinions. Everything represents my personal opinion only. First of all, the biggest feeling was that it was boring, and I didn't even think about reading it. This is definitely a book by a new author. It has many, many flaws, which are not harmful at all, but they do affect the viewing. As for the writing style, it's just like that. Don't expect it. It's good if it can only explain things clearly. Sometimes the settings are conflicting. Whether it's the protagonist's reaction to this weird game or the various behaviors of the official characters when they first appear, they are all quite low. The most important thing is that the introduction of this book shows that the main world view is dark and weird Cthulhu style, including the extraordinary skill the protagonist gets for the first time, which is also a thorn of flesh and blood. Generally speaking, I think this kind of novel is the most suitable. The protagonist must either have a high IQ, be calm and rational, like a dragon or a phoenix among people, or he must be mentally ill, decisive in killing, crazy, or very stubborn. In any case, you must be different from ordinary people, but as a character What the author writes about is another situation. Ordinary people. It doesn't mean that ordinary people can't write. You have to be able to write and gradually grow up. You are like Brother Huozi. You were an ordinary person at first, but gradually you became crazy and became famous. But this book obviously does not have this At one point, you can often see descriptions such as frowning, wary expressions, and pupils shrinking, which makes me feel that the protagonist cannot match the brain waves, which is not what I want to see. By the way, when I wrote this, I realized that you are playing a game and how can the game character description be so detailed? 😒 The conflict between the protagonist and the supporting character also has a sense of lack of brains. In the middle of the night, a bunch of people followed the protagonist and found out. The first hostile words they said were, how did you find us? 6 To no. Well, overall, this book feels very boring to me, so you can take a look if you want to read it.

What, can you bring items in the game into reality without traveling through time yourself? So why did my sister disappear? ! Cthulhu + gaming seems to be a very common combination, but what about adding sandbox creation and adventure? Facing the unknown of the deep sea, can you use everything around you to resist San Check and reveal the secrets of the world? Of course, the premise is that you can survive. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Work information] Book title: "The Secret Journey Under the Sea" Author: Black Mule Status: 40,000 words in serialization (signed) Tag: Secret Fantasy, Cthulhu, Deep Sea      Game alien world, sandbox, wilderness survival   Recommendation index ★★★✰☆ [Highlights] 1⃣The game system is complete and highly feasible There are many parameters in the game, but they are concise and clear, and there are relevant comments. Referring to sandbox games such as Minecraft and Ark Evolved Survival, in addition to viewing self and item information, you can also play synthesis. In addition, many gram elements and san value (mental judgment) settings are added. 2⃣Special race: Robinson and Friday The protagonist lives on a desert island and meets Robinson. However, the Robinson here is a race rather than just a person's name, and there is a savage servant, Friday... Could it be that the author of "Robinson Crusoe" saw this world in his dream. 3⃣The main line is clear and the writing is smooth 💁‍♂️ Main Line 1: Protagonist Line My sister disappeared in an Internet cafe. The only clue is a game in the email. It seems that this is just a well-made sandbox game. You can control the game villain to synthesize items and explore the sea, but it can communicate with reality. How should the protagonist grow up in the game? Lost at sea, hunting savages on a desert island, or making a fortune with a synthesis platform? 🙅‍♂️Main line two: World confrontation line Existing clues 1. My sister disappeared while playing the game, 2. Modern corpses appeared in the game, 3. Items can be brought into reality from the backpack, 4. There are many similar elements in the two worlds, 5. The official organization supports the exploration of the game, 6. The identity of the player cannot be exposed in [Empire]... Speculation 1. It is not difficult to see that the game there is a real world and interacts with the world where the protagonist lives. The two worlds will inevitably confront or even merge. 2. In view of the existence of deep sea and abyss in the game world, maybe that is the root of connecting the two worlds. Does the deep sea in the real world have anything to do with it? 3. It would be great fun if either of the two worlds emerged from the deep sea on the opposite side. 4. Where did the missing people go? At present, the protagonist is just controlling the game character in front of the computer. When the san value is cleared to zero, is it completely GG? Do you want to be resurrected? My sister! 5. Deep Sea + Abyss, I don't know when Mr. Ke will appear [Similar Recommendation] Apocalypse Forecast This sandbox game is unreliable

It's pretty good, but there's too much mental activity in every step, the forward swing is too long, and it looks a bit tiring! Suggest more

I have reached chapter 42 and can't read any more. So far, I have gone into the water three times, once as a novice, once as a last resort, and once as a helper using a wetsuit. If it's not a serious lack of connection between the name and the content, it's just a long prelude to despair.

You were too stupid to give money in front of me! Give the doorman an onyx, and give two more after hearing useful information. It's as if you are his servant Just give an onyx to the restaurant in the back, do you think you are a fool? Without asking about purchasing power, he himself doesn't know the exchange rate between onyx and obsidian coins So to put it this way, the protagonist was defrauded of all his money just by the guard making up a few random sentences!

This protagonist is too innocent, what thoughts are shown on his face?

This person's brain is definitely too cold to think of the protagonist's cousin. He also said that there is a crisis coming and he kept asking the two fools.

Another trashy protagonist. Why are so many people now willing to watch trashy characters? Can't help Sister Li

I feel like the main character is too stupid to watch.

The book title and introduction are very good and attractive, but the rhythm and plot are quite messy, and a lot of poisonous points are inserted. I wish the author will write better and better, and see you again! Come on.

It seems to be full of gorgeous fantasy style, but in fact the protagonist is stupid and the plot is stereotyped

The main character is so stupid and keeps being pushed around, which is really boring

Promise me, if you can't continue writing, just write the ending. It's better to have a bad ending than to have no beginning or end.

Why is there such a boring main quest of finding a sister/sister/daughter/fiancée? This quest can only fill a volume at most, but it sucks to be the main quest of the whole book. They all find an endless loop of twists and turns until the protagonist becomes invincible towards the end of the game.

[Recommendation]: The disappeared sister, the game left in the favorites, the items that can be brought to reality - Monsters that can cause pollution to the human body, the Robinson race, the empire, the sulfur sea. "Do not reveal the identity of the player to the empire." How many secrets exist in a small sandbox game? [Rating]: ★★★☆☆ [Subject]: Fantasy-Mysterious Fantasy [Book Title]: The Secret Journey into the Sea [Author]: Black Mule [Status]: Serialized [Evaluation of Work]: 🙂 1. Novel writing: Place the game into reality, and the actions taken in the game can affect reality. This ingenious way of writing is considered novel even now. 🙂 2. Huge world view: The game contains a variety of organizations and forces. Empires, nobles, the deep sea, etc., There is also a race called Robinson that is smarter than humans; monsters contaminated with pollution. The worldview with hidden elements of the old class aristocracy and Christianity is very complex. 🙂 3. The main line is clear and smooth: The story begins with the protagonist's sister disappearing while playing a game. The protagonist starts to get into the game in order to find his sister, and gradually pulls the progress of the game into the deep sea. With the game as the main line and the search for people as the hidden line; it is so clear and non-procrastinating, making people feel happy. 🙂 4. The author's writing style is excellent: The author's writing style is excellent. Through the author's description, we can easily feel the dangers from the deep sea and the horror of pollution. The author's description of the deep sea is very detailed, and many details are terrifying. [Recommended groups]: Readers who like grammatical elements, Readers who like suspense genre, Readers who like adventure novels. (ps: The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.) {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

The author's background setting is quite good, but the character of the protagonist is a bit hard to watch.

What about your game's feedback on reality? Read a dozen chapters and keep playing the game?

This novel is so good, I'm going to save some. Now you can read on

This update frequency, and the plot of the tadpole looking for its mother, are a bit difficult to comment on.

Killing people in the game is difficult, but killing people in reality is much easier.

Not bad, I like this kind of normal protagonist, please keep updating

No more eunuchs

If you are sick, treat immediately

Hey, why doesn't the author charge for listing?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Awesome👍🏻300,000 words. English cow.

Dear friends, is there any book club group 🐉