Survival for All: I, the Creator of the Halo

I've read Chapter 17 of Volume 2 and stopped reading. The author's writing skills are not strong enough, and he is probably young. It's tolerable to describe forum chats with some price drops, but it's just a waste of readers' time to describe the protagonist and supporting characters talking nonsense. There is endless self-pleasure, large sections of copied lyrics, school dormitory nonsense, irrigation nonsense, etc., And the work is not good enough for readers to endure the nonsense. So, bye.

"I gave you a bunch of heaven-defying things, but you only use them to live in Jiqi and do business." The grave of Shennong is covered with grass!

Is anyone alive in the survival game world of Crusoe Madman?

I gave up after reading three chapters. These so-called "halos" are nondescript no matter how you look at them. This thing should be renamed Skill Creator. The halo skill template should be compiled like this: Halo name: xx halo Halo range: radius/diameter xx meters Halo type: consumptive/occupied/non-consumptive Halo effect: apply xx effect to yourself/enemy Consumption type: pay n points of magic/life/or other energy when it is turned on, and continue to consume n points of magic/life/or other energy per second during the duration. Occupied type: Reduce the upper limit of a specific attribute when it is turned on, and restore it when it is turned off. Consumptionless: No need to pay or occupy any price.

When I first saw the woman, I thought it was the same routine as before, but I ended up seeing more than 40 pictures, and then the woman appeared two or three times. It was pretty good, and the writing was okay. There were just a few mistakes in some places, but there wasn't much else wrong with it.

Why did it suddenly become disgusting at the beginning of the second volume? It's not that the slave scroll is disgusting, but that the "family, master, slave" stuff is disgusting.

Tsk, it's so deserted, give me a look

Test the poison, Holy Mother, run, hurry up

Ever since I read Suicune's Is there something wrong with your lord? I haven't seen Desire in lord novels because it's hard to find better ones.

The protagonist has such a huge advantage, but the management of the entire territory is very chaotic. Many managers are randomly appointed. Something as important as the soul contract is contracted to some ordinary people. The entire territory has one ring, two rings and three rings. There is neither a contribution system nor an upgrade mechanism. Reading your book is really an insult to the IQ.

A common problem with this kind of book is that the main character finds it too difficult, and the others probably have to die.

Self-Happiness Manual All I can say is this

To be honest, it's great, but don't keep feeding yourself chicken soup. Although the protagonist is an SSS-level profession, it is not necessarily the only one. There is no need to emphasize imagining that you are the savior, right? The protagonist probably suffers from chuunibyou. He is usually normal but sometimes feels like he is suffering from a disease. I feel good in other aspects, but this aspect alone makes me speechless😅😅

These titles of master and slave are so disgusting... If you want to write these titles, don't write that you are from the same world as the protagonist The most outrageous thing is that a group of people abandoned their wooden houses to find a way to survive for a game that was uncertain. How did this group of people survive the night without that woman's talent? These people have no logic at all

This book is simply called Slave Master Raising Day. Remember it?

To test the poison Our Lady Goodbye

With this kind of intelligence, he wouldn't be able to survive a day in the survival world without plug-ins.

To be a Holy Mother, you have to be a long way ahead of others, right? And your cheap Holy Mother is worthless. Do you think others can't chop wood? If you can't even get resources like wood, you might as well die. It's not that you don't want the Holy Mother, but the author, your Holy Mother is really childish. Do you understand?

Halo Creator, why not rename it as Rule Creator? Everything can be edited at will, it is directly the creator mode. It's outrageous that you haven't failed when trying to master skills. You can be a novice, but don't be such a novice.

Running quickly, I forgot to read the comments and was deceived by the good reviews.