Do You Only Have One Horcrux?

Very well written🤓

The plot is good . . . . . . . Low emotional intelligence: the writing is too hip

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There is no logic, the golden finger is not clear, the preface and afterwords of the plot are not clear, the background of the world is also unclear, a messy hodgepodge, the attribute is increased by 10 times as if it has not been improved, and the realm is even more fart.

As far as choosing a university is concerned, the most suitable one is Seoul University. Isn't the protagonist lacking resources now? You have nothing, you go to that school. What's the use of giving you basic knowledge? Every Horcrux you have comes with it. Basic knowledge, and you can practice it by yourself in space.

The protagonist writes about real NC. Any dog ​​with a plug-in leash can be the protagonist. The main character is written the same as it was 10 years ago.

The writing is very messy, and the author's narrative skills are really poor.

The feeling after reading it is mixed and scattered. It can be seen that the author wants to write a world, but the background description is vague, the various forces have not officially appeared, the protagonist's motivation to move forward is unknown, and the world in the sea of ​​​​consciousness is not well explored. It seems that I remember that the protagonist picked up two weapons to fight two kinds of monsters.

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Welcome everyone's positive comments😁

What can I say, the setting is okay, but the plot is confusing and the combat power is unclear. How can a low-level spiritual eye skill kill eyes so many times? Is the protagonist too useless or is this magical skill so easy to go wrong? Are medical treatments so advanced that an ordinary civilian orphan can perform eyeball repair surgery at will? Otherwise, there is no need for this magical skill to appear at all. The strength is average, and the risk of practicing is high. Under normal circumstances, the official will not let people spread this kind of skill at will. Otherwise, if you cultivate one, it will be useless, and the outline will be changed.

The plot is quite interesting, but it is written too loosely. Various characters appear too quickly, enemies swarm forward, and realm levels are divided into points. Again, the alliance is sieved by undercover agents. Either the protagonist is given a plug-in that can see through the enemy, or there are a lot of villains. The early chapters are too crowded and messy. The original protagonist's one-line advancement was written as a group drama, with a bunch of people from various colleges and universities, and then a murderous plan, the Gu family was involved in assassinations, the mycelium was targeting the protagonist, the Wang family, and He Weasel's side plot. Although the plot is good, it is all done at once, and the reader will feel tired after watching it. There is too much content and it is too congested.

After reading Chapter 50, the system gradually became so confusing that I couldn't stand it anymore. There was no contrast between the strong and the weak, and it became a mess.

The introduction is just a blur. I don't know what to say. Don't even mention it.

It feels so messy! There are a bunch of messy skills, I don't know what the use is of writing all this messy stuff.

The settings look confusing. I don't know what is written, I don't understand it, brother.

The plot is scattered and the writing is a bit inconsistent.

Horcruxes should be special weapons. Each person only has one. The protagonist's plug-in has multiple Horcruxes (literally).

If you don't understand it, it's like Horcrux, Soul Eater, Soul Eater and so on. There is no world historical background, the story background is just all kinds of NB to entertain yourself.

After reading Chapter 10, I really don't understand what is written⊙∀⊙?

It looks pretty good, why are there so few people watching it? I already look much better than those in the top 10 or 100 on the ranking list. Those who make me look like I am reading a book written by AI and typing it with my eyes closed, right?