Doomsday: Save the World 1

Passing by, finished reading, the votes have been cast this morning, I will add it tomorrow Let me tell you my opinion. From the reader's point of view, as a systematic and refreshing article, the writing rhythm is okay and the writing style is pertinent. But after reading 20 chapters, I felt that it was not fun enough, there were too few fun points, and there were too few conflicts between the protagonists. Fighting monsters and upgrading are very important. However, as a fun novel, conflicts between characters are indispensable, and the number of words in one chapter is too few. You can try to modify the previous chapters to add more character descriptions and conflicts From the author's point of view, after all, this is the first book of a novice author. It is very normal for it to be lacking in some aspects. My suggestion is to update more and revise the text more. Overall, it is a novel that can be read, but it is difficult to retain readers. These are just my personal opinions. Please point out if there are any errors.

I have stopped updating recently. I want to find out the problems with this book and make major revisions.

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It's a bit of a running story, and there's a problem with paragraph division. It's a bit too long. In fact, the dialogue can be a separate paragraph. The most important thing is that the number of words in one chapter is too few. There are only 40,000 words in more than 50 chapters, and the average is only more than 80 words in one chapter. Under normal circumstances, 50 chapters are about 100,000 words. You are outrageous.

Thanks to the book friend Sheng Ai Hidden for the recommendation vote.

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Thank you very much for the recommendation votes from all the book friends.

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Brother, I can add more characters to the work and introduce the protagonist, so as to create more conflicts.