
Konoha: It Must Not Be My Fault That the Baby Is Crooked
木叶:娃长歪了一定不是我的错
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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If a book attracts others by opening a harem, it will definitely be removed from the book list by others because of opening a harem.
After reading the seven pictures and the introduction, I can basically confirm that the protagonist is a grandfather-like character who contributes to Konoha and teaches Naruto and his group, as well as some descriptions of the third generation in the article. Personally, I feel that although the third generation is not completely a bad person, he is certainly not a good person either. And when the protagonist and Mitarashi Anko were discussing how miserable Naruto was, he compared it with the One-Tailed One and said that this was even worse. I think it's very inappropriate. This feeling is like when you say to a person who has lost an arm, you should feel lucky. Look, there is another person over there who is even worse than you and has no legs. It is not commendable to use one person's more miserable person to inspire and explain the misery of another person. Also, the author, what do you think of the two characters Jiraiya and Sandai? For the protagonist, this is a real world. The protagonist should be a time traveler based on our common three views. If the protagonist does not need to get any benefits from the third generation and Jiraiya, then for a pervert who often goes to peek into the women's bathhouse and an old man who always peeks into the women's bathhouse and other people's privacy with a monitor. Based on these two points, I really don't understand how anyone would like this kind of character.
I know that you have seen too many conspiracy theories, and it is indeed aesthetic fatigue, but I have to say If Hiruzen is not a bad guy, then at least he must change before Hiruzen starts to become the third generation Hokage, otherwise it will be very strange Noseki: Hashirama's grandson, Orochimaru's disciple. How did he die? Third Generation: I don't know White Fang: At least he is a hero. How did he die? The Sandaime: There is really no way to save him, I don't know Jiraiya: Feeding the enemy will destroy him. How to teach. Sandaime: No matter what, if you nourish the enemy, you will nourish the enemy. Jiraiya believed in the Great Toad Sage, did I know that I also supported him in destroying him? Orochimaru: Human experiments, experiments on digging up graves and digging up corpses. Sandaime: Didn't see it Tsunade: Hashirama's granddaughter, my disciple, wants to engage in medical treatment. The Sandaime: I don't support it (don't say try to make a special case first, the best thing is not to say a word. Otherwise, Kato Dan will not be able to succeed) Hyuga Hizashi: The people of Raikage Village have come to negotiate peace, then it is definitely your problem. Apologize Minato: Anyway, I just didn't catch up when there was only one enemy in the whole village, and there were times when you couldn't catch up. Kushina: What does your son's injustice have to do with me? It's not that I wronged him. I gave him the money back Ninja School Student: Experimental bench, come on. Battlefield, on. Monument, above. Danzo had to ask a lot of questions You can set the Sandaime to be a well-intentioned Sandaime, then you have to make him really reasonable, instead of giving a few confessions and not mentioning the things he participated in, and he did not want to commit seppuku (no one is held accountable for what he did before his death after seppuku in Japan, maybe this is the rule. I don't understand it well). Of course, if you follow Kishimoto's example and let Danzo take the blame, it can only mean that you are not in control. At the very least, the question is, if I can do so many things, why don't I do the same?
The author should not whitewash Sarutobi Hiruzen
The Sarutobi clan preserves the legacy of the Yondaime couple. After the Fourth Ninja World War, Konohamaru Sarutobi returned the scarf knitted by Uzumaki Kushina to Naruto when he grew up. However, the other assets of the Yondaime couple were digested by the Sarutobi clan, just like the Uchiha clan's legacy was swallowed up by the Sarutobi clan, the Shimura clan, the Gen Organization, the transfer clan, and the Mitomon clan. The Sarutobi clan formed its own Konoha Fire Release clan during the Fourth War. It can be seen how many departments and positions the Sarutobi clan occupied in terms of the number of ninjas and Konoha Village! Without Tsunade's order, the Sarutobi clan would not have sent so many ninjas to the war, and there would not even be the means of the fifth generation of Tsunade and the sixth generation of Hatake Kakashi to continuously weaken the Sarutobi clan. ,,!
Why are they willing to believe in conspiracy theories? Because conspiracy theories can make simple-minded people think that they are not simple-minded
For those who say that the third generation cannot be cleansed, I just want to ask, where are the three generations of black people? The first generation gave away the tailed beasts for nothing, but his death narrowed the gap between Konoha and other villages. The second generation went to peace talks and was attacked. The third generation said that he would keep the queen, but the second generation did not use it. He passed the throne to the third generation. Except for the fourth ninja war, the first three times were fought with the third generation, and each time they were victors. To say that Konoha's peak period was also World War II, the Sannin was also taught by the third generation. During the three wars, one against three or four every time, how much wealth is enough? The third generation must be able to defeat four ninja villages in order to prove that he has contributed to Konoha? What are the so-called black spots? Death of White Fang? Was it unusual for White Fang to die? The original book states that the mission failed because he saved his teammates, and there is another sentence at the end, which caused heavy losses to the Leaf Village. If he doesn't die, who will? The order given to him was to dismiss him at home. This kind of treatment was simply too caring for the White Fang. Even in this way, some people still think that it was the third generation's intention. Besides, the Uchiha problem was planned from the second generation. The third generation was soft on the Uchiha. The original book also said that Itachi himself and Danzo suddenly acted. The third generation didn't know it, but kept thinking about it. How to make Uchiha and the village more harmonious? It's even more ridiculous that someone can blame the third generation for the death of Nezuki. He went to the battlefield, not to play house. Orochimaru was still his teacher and stayed with Orochimaru. If this kind of protection is not enough, then why not just stay in the village and take care of him? The fourth generation's death was obviously a suicide in love. Can this be blamed on the third generation? Regardless of the original novel or the animation, it is written that the Yondaime did not have to die. It was the Yondaime who believed in Naruto and then used a ghoul seal to die. Let's talk about the so-called Yuan Fei clan in the Great Ninja War. There are only a few people in the comics. Moreover, the three sons and wives of the Third Generation died for Konoha. The remaining Konohamaru was taught by Naruto. How can it be shown that the Third Generation provided benefits to the Yuan Fei clan?
The protagonist is no different from a native of the ninja world. He has no idea about the plot and is even worse at writing emotional scenes.
About the protagonist's mysterious strength
The genjutsu can directly hypnotize even tailed beasts, all kinds of beasts, but there is no improvement in strength or anything. I thought it was an invincible text, and then suddenly encountered a three-tailed and Beilihu, and fought like a life and death fight 🤔
Licking the protagonist, whitewashing three generations, licking the dog character, goodbye
After reading three chapters, the third golden chapter left me speechless! The problem of the third generation is a problem set by Kishimoto, it doesn't matter whether it's right or wrong! As long as your reasons are good, that's fine. I can't stand the setting of this book and withdraw it!
Purely invincible, a nanny, with harem tendencies, not to my taste, I saw the Kingdom of Water begin to ink. If you like the harem, you get 7 points, if you don't like it, you will fail.
That's right, I've been sick of the dark trends, conspiracy theories, and Uchiha killings that are all over the streets lately. There's a saying that goes well: the setting you write the first time is genius, the second time you write it becomes mediocre, the third time you write it it's disgusting, and the fourth time you write it it's just a piece of shit💩!
The various ways the author's bacteria clean the floor are so disgusting. I asked you to tell a story, and you came to explain this and that, and it seemed like I wouldn't tell the story if you didn't listen to my explanation.
The most likely outcome is as shown below
Everyone, come and see, there is someone here who wants to help the third generation clear his name.
The book looked okay in the early stages, but it really didn't work in Chapter 35. Originally, the pua Kyuubi was a bit too easy to write, but I really couldn't understand Ino's sneak attack later on. It's not the way to write a bond, and the main character is Minato, the illusion-enhanced version. I really can't understand it when a kid who has just been a genin for a few days sneaks up on him.
After keeping it for a while, I just read the title and decided to follow the original work. I couldn't stand it anymore and withdrew it. I don't exclude relaxed fanfics, because that's what I write too, but my own stuff is too little and not worth reading. It's better to go to Youku and get a membership to read it from beginning to end.
It is really difficult to clean up the third generation. If we don't talk about other things, who dares to say that the third generation doesn't know about Danzo? For a leader who has been in power for decades, other families have not become worse. Only he, Yuan Fei, can produce 3,000 ninja troops behind him. How greedy is this? And about the comparison between Naruto and Konohamaru's lives, how can I make it clear?
Chapter 3: Clean up the three generations, haha, goodbye
The protagonist's strength fluctuates and it's really uncomfortable to watch.
Are there too many metaphors like this lately? One chapter feels like half a tube of water has been poured into it.
Among all the Naruto fans, this one is definitely unique. There are no conspiracy theories or too many calculations. It is simply a good ending for the original characters. It is quite novel in terms of look and feel. If you are tired of watching Naruto with conspiracy theories, this is a good book. I hope it will not fall apart in the future.
Recommended Naruto fan novel "Becoming a Tsuchikage in the Naruto World", no system
Finish it as soon as possible, reorganize and start again
After reading the latest chapter, I realized that it is almost over, and I am very grateful to the author for the refreshing points and creativity. The whole book is too scattered, the main line is not very clear, and there are too many words on the group portraits. The protagonist's strength is unclear and there is no exciting point of upgrading. It is a pity for the author's creativity. I read the latest chapter today and understood the setting behind it, but it seemed too much to establish a deep bond with the original characters. If we talk about Chenyou, the story before the beginning seems to be more interesting. The civilian ninja who gradually develops begins to make various progress in the process of being suppressed, and the emotional line is more reasonable. In addition, it has always been a pity that regarding Chakra's method of double rest, according to the setting, Chakra is the energy with the most potential in this regard.