Naruto: Jiraiya, I Am the Great Writer

How can I put it... The overall writing style is very good, and the protagonist's growth is also decent. There is not much poison either. The only drawback is that the plug-in is a bit large. It's just like a tomato. Now I can't tell the difference between a tomato and the starting point. It's no different than digging for gold in shit. The overall picture is still viewable, it just depends on whether you mind turning up the plug-ins.

The original story about going to the battlefield at the age of five is already perverted, but I didn't expect there to be a master. The story about the emperor's uncle at the age of five

Literary man? If you can become a literary giant even if you are passionate about heaven, wouldn't it look hideous to serialize other novels?

What is this first chapter about? Does Zangzhuo find a way to quit the ranks of ninjas, but instead becomes a genius?

The literary system should give [Photographic Memory], [Tentacle Monster], [Thoughts Like a Fountain], [Erudition and Knowledge], and [Innate Ox-Horse Sacred Body], right?

A lot of characters appeared, a lot of backgrounds were laid out, and finally in Chapter 5 we saw the Golden Finger, the Eye of the Emperor and the Writer System. I don't know what the Eye of the Emperor of Heaven is for. This fanfic cannot be read without thinking, it will be very painful, the author likes to hide things. He also likes to write long and difficult sentences. So why does the title of the book mention Jiraiya? I thought the protagonist traveled through Jiraiya.

I am not satisfied if the author does not accept Chiyo. Although I know it is difficult, this is an order.

Yes, it's not a cookie-cutter routine. The lottery has more weird skills designed to defeat various ninjutsu, and the counter-routines are more attractive.

I have to complain after reading Chapter 10, the overlord color is not strong enough! Not to mention its growth potential. It can be regarded as a magical skill for ordinary ninjas. As we all know, most ninjas have high attack and low defense. In a battle, being stunned by the overlord's domineering energy for less than a second may determine the outcome. The most important thing is that Haki can be released at close range without sealing. If it is opened close to the face, most ninjas will not be able to react.

I want to discuss a topic. One Piece, why can't Ace die? Hokage, Lin, Minato, and Kushina can't die? Why must we make up for these regrets? How could they become regrets?

I thought the literary giant wrote articles to make the ninja world reflect on war, the daimyo system, and the one-country-one-village system. Who knew it was just a systematic literary article disguised as a literary hero?

I've written several books, but I can't even write them in order, and there are so many long sentences that are difficult to pronounce.

I read in the comments section that it was said that he wrote pornographic books when he was five years old. Is this true? So outrageous

The plot can go anywhere, but of course some things are too idealistic. For example, if I hadn't searched for the protagonist's eye, the Emperor's Eye, on Baidu, I wouldn't have known its ability at all. Then taking the graduation exam in advance is like child's play. The protagonist gives people a feeling of playing house. Will such a person really die faster than a rope tree once he goes to the battlefield? One more thing, the content is always off track. We are obviously fighting for exams, but as a result, there are always too many extracurricular topics. As soon as I get caught up in them, you kill me. Always interrupt the current topic to talk about something else. Even if the protagonist's character is off-kilter, the writing style is also like this, hey!

Jiraiya is already a scumbag, and there are still people who can compare with him! Cake hand

Personally, I feel that making out in heaven is popular for two reasons First, the writing is good Second, there was too much pressure during the war and I needed other things to relieve the pressure.

These 150-plus chapters feel a bit unacceptable, even my own woman is so scheming 😥

It seems like Tsunade's plot is gone in the latest chapter?

Please update more, it feels like it's gone without seeing much.

Damn, is the author so awesome? I haven't read it for more than a few days and there are already more than 20 chapters.

I haven't seen it yet, so I'll ask first Tsunade

It perfectly suits my taste. After reading books for almost ten years, I have rarely come across this kind of work that completely matches my favorite elements. This kind of pseudo-invincible text makes me feel really comfortable. The protagonist's plug-in is a lottery to convert the abilities of all realms into ninja realms, such as the Eye of the Emperor, Overlord Color, etc., But the disadvantage is that it has little to do with the literary system (currently there are only more than 70 chapters, which may change in the future). The reputation value can be obtained no matter what you do to increase your reputation. I hope the author will either change his name or return to the theme and write more books in the future, or change the way to obtain the reputation value. For example, there will be a bonus for writing books?

Well... Does the author really not consider changing his name? I just saw how dismal my results were, and I'm a little afraid that I won't be able to continue writing. I'm still raising it, and I'm afraid I'll die from it.

Hokage's ceiling is very high, not just in terms of combat prowess, but also rules-based abilities. Only other gods can control most people in Dragon Ball