The Heavens Began with the Sun and Moon God Sect

Very well written! It's been a long time since I've seen such good food.

In fact, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is the leader of the Sun Moon God Cult. Going south has more benefits. He can go to large households to find eunuchs who have purified themselves but are not accepted, and lend a helping hand when they are desperate. First, he teaches ordinary swordsmanship and internal strength. When Lin Yuantu dies, he goes to get the updated version of the evil-proofing sword manual and raises three thousand evil-proofing guards. The protagonist is invincible in the world.

Author, your main character's name is rubbish. You might as well change his name to Zhang San, or Long Wu!

The protagonist has only been in the first world for ten years, and the dialogue between this hall master and this hall master is also a talent. In a few years, it will be me or him.

What the hell? Let's change someone! How wonderful it is to be in Swordsman, where you focus on cultivating and chasing after the strongest. You are in a different world. You don't practice or retreat, you just want to find women to play with. You must be sick! I can't do it. Isn't this world more advanced than Swordsman? It will take you many years to break through the innateness in Swordsman. How come you are invincible in another world? What disgusts me the most is the collapse of the character. It was originally a good character who pursued the strongest, but now it has become a bit of a lecherous character. He doesn't practice cultivation anymore, so he just knows how to kill people? Seize the secret book. Doesn't the secret book require time to practice?

The protagonist's Xuan Ming Divine Palm is too low. Anyone can force Xuan Ming's true energy out of the body. Where do you tell Zhang Sanfeng to put his face?

I find it's really hard to find books that I can read nowadays. For example, the book titled "All Heavens" is now a world without end. It's a poorly written world and I have to go through the old plot. In the past, it was all about what is the greatest benefit of this world and the goal is clear. It's great to just take it and run away.

Trash is worse than natives. The time traveler is worse than a dog, why bother writing more later?

What is this Xuanming Sect? Why did Pig's Feet establish it? Are there any doctrines and goals? Isn't it just to gain influence? Others, such as Mingjiao/White Lotus Sect and some miscellaneous sects, all have clear goals. Without these goals, it would be better to call it something real.

The adjective for when you are short of breath is "canthus bursting". I have seen at least dozens of the idiom "canthus bursting" appearing in at least forty chapters. It is very poisonous and jarring. I can't find other adjectives? Over and over again, my eyes are splitting, I feel stupid, and the protagonist's IQ is also up and down. Apart from these poisonous points, it is still a good book. I hope the author will change it. If he doesn't change it, most of it will be studio writing. He is paid to commute to and from work. He doesn't even bother to think of words. He just keeps licking the idiom "canthus is splitting". Sometimes I really want to kick the author.

You can give the protagonist the Jiuyou Xuantian Magic Skill, found the Xuanming Sect, and have the four great corpse ancestors under his command, the ten great Yamas, the judge of water and fire, Meng Po, black and white impermanence, bull-headed and horse-faced, three hundred ghosts, and thirty thousand Yin soldiers. Order, Yunnan, Qinghai, Guizhou, Sichuan, Gansu, Ningxia and other places. Dominate the Northwest. 🙂🙂🙂

Forcibly creating conflicts, I just kept one Dongfang Sheng. It felt like the writing was restricted in every way.

The protagonist is just a fool, he just knows how to act cool

Otherwise, martial arts are lonely, with fighting and killing throughout the story. Who can keep watching this? Gu Long, Jin Yong and other great figures have really not learned anything about the wonderful love, hate, and resentment. They really just pay attention to imitating a tiger and imitating a cat. 🙂

You have exaggerated the force value of Swordsman too much. I have not read the book of Swordsman, only the TV series. People in Swordsman don't know how to use their internal energy at all. They only let their internal energy attach to their weapons to increase their sharpness. The protagonist, Ice Soft Palm, has long been invincible by exerting his inner strength to the outside. No one in Swordsman can break his defense if he exerts his inner strength to the outside. His swordsmanship is of no use in all the bells and whistles.

It's so early, so we can't just wait until the plot starts without changing the plot.

I could tell from the scene about Xiao Li's Flying Knife that he definitely couldn't continue writing, it was completely messed up.

It shouldn't be a bad ending, it shouldn't be about flying knives

Ning Zhong was criticized again by Lao Yue. No wonder everyone said that the protagonist looked like a native.

It's not a problem that the protagonist is vicious, but the martial arts warrior in ancient costume is actually not lewd. There are also quite a few beauties who smile proudly. For example, there are only two in Huashan.