Myriad Worlds Begin with the Sun Moon Holy Cult

Whether the protagonist becomes the leader of the Sun Moon Cult or not is irrelevant; heading south offers more advantages. He can find eunuchs near wealthy households who, despite their castration, are not accepted into the fold. When they are in despair, he can lend a helping hand, first teaching them basic swordsmanship and internal energy techniques.

Author, your protagonist's name is terrible! You might as well change it to Zhang San or Long Wu!

The protagonist has only been in the first world for ten years and he's already talking like "Master of this Hall"—that's quite something. In a few more years, he'll either be "I" or "The True One."

What the hell? They must have changed the character! In *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*, he was so focused on cultivation, striving to be the strongest. But now he's in a different world, no cultivation, no seclusion, just chasing women. Is he crazy?! I just can't believe this world isn't more advanced than *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*.

The protagonist's Xuanming Divine Palm is too weak. Anyone can easily force the Xuanming True Qi out of his body. How can Zhang Sanfeng save face?

It's so hard to find a decent book these days. For example, books with "multiverse" in the title are all about endlessly rehashing the same old plots and worlds. Before, books focused on clearly defining the biggest advantage of each world, making it easy to grab the objective and run away with it.

They're even worse off than the natives. Why bother writing more about a time traveler who's worse off than a dog?

What's with this Xuanming Sect? Why did the protagonist even establish it? Does it have any doctrines or goals? Is it just a way to build up power? Other sects like the Ming Cult/White Lotus Cult and various other miscellaneous sects all have clear objectives. Without such goals, it would be more accurate to simply call it a "sect" or something similar.

Whenever the author gets angry, the only adjective used is "eyes bulging with fury." Seeing this idiom appear dozens of times in about forty chapters is really toxic and annoying. Can't they find any other adjectives? It's just the same old "eyes bulging with fury" over and over again. The protagonist's intelligence also fluctuates wildly. Aside from these flaws, it's still a decent book.

The protagonist could be given the Nine Netherworld Profound Heaven Divine Art, allowing him to establish the Xuanming Sect, commanding the Four Corpse Ancestors, the Ten Yama Kings, the Judges of Water and Fire, Meng Po, Black and White Impermanence, Ox-Head and Horse-Face, three hundred ghost messengers, and thirty thousand Yin soldiers. He could then command Yunnan, Qinghai, Guizhou, Sichuan, Gansu, Ningxia, and other regions, dominating the Great Northwest. 🙂🙂🙂