Versatile Mage: The Crouching Dragon, Mage Emperor

No, most of the people in the original junior high school are basically at the elementary or intermediate level, so they attach great importance to the awakening attribute, because thunder and fire have combat effectiveness at the elementary level. Why does the big family care about this? Isn't the key to talent? Of course, being able to awaken dimensional systems, white magic, and black magic at the elementary level does mean that you have a certain amount of talent, but they are all elemental systems, so what's the difference?

What magic department is cultivated in a big family? The super attack alone is the most terrible. Ordinary people and small families can't afford super, but the rich can't afford it? Moreover, full-time mages can awaken the directional magic system. Why don't you look down on it and just use the magic stone to awaken it? If you need anything, just use the corresponding forceful awakening. Training in a big family based on blood is more reasonable than magic, let alone talent.

The Zhuge family set in this book is very unique, but as the new generation has the highest talent, it seems very disrespectful to not give them any resources when they go out. After all, cultivation is a slow step, step by step, and you can't quickly rise to the middle level in the early stage. To be honest, Bo City is just a novice village, and it doesn't do much to improve the protagonist's strength. Because you rob Mo Fan's resources, you have to replenish Mo Fan's resources later to let him advance to the intermediate level. If you don't rob him, then why are you going there? To get to know the protagonist group, or to see the disaster in Bo City. This is my humble opinion. Book friends are welcome to give their opinions.

Today I am looking for a fan from all over the world. The protagonist of this book is the 17th person I have seen today who saw Mo Fan awakening and agreed to help keep it secret!

This setting is unreasonable. What's wrong with the weak chickens in the early stage of light, water and earth elements? They can't develop in the future. Zulong is still an earth element. A big family has no foresight and decides the people based on the early elements.

After reading more than 20 chapters so far, I always feel that the protagonist's talent is somewhat buried. He is the most talented child in the family, and his important resources are not skewed. Does coming out of the mountain mean automatically leaving the core of the family? After coming out with Tang Yue, I always felt that I had not made any progress and stayed in high school taking useless classes. Several plots can be interspersed, for example, Tang Yue plays some role and takes the protagonist to the forest to see monsters and so on. The author can selectively refer to or ignore some places that I personally feel are unreasonable.

Is the big family afraid of awakening other lines? Can't the light and water elements cast a forbidden spell? Can't get resources for the strongest single attack of the super-level light system? Can a big family be the same as a commoner?

Mu Nujiao

Author, although I haven't read your book, does the protagonist have a summoning system? If so, let me give you a suggestion. Go with Mo Fan to find Flame Fairy, but there is no need to rob her because there is a more suitable choice - Jiang Feng from Ya Jun. You can completely contract the seriously injured Jiang Feng through the Flame Fairy incident. This way you don't have to fight for Mo Fan, but you can also quickly increase your combat power, and it can also reflect the protagonist's redemption of the tragedy of the original work.

So why set up a big family? If the protagonist is gifted but has no resources, then why should the protagonist repay the family when he grows up? The meaning and superiority of family have not been brought out.