The Wizard Begins with Occlumency

It's extremely poisonous. I'm giving you two coins for commenting. I won't talk about the little poisons before. Let's go directly to Chapter 37. The protagonist's research results were plagiarized, and the research income was 37%. What did the author say? It said that this was money earned by others (the plagiarists) based on their skills. What's wrong with it? I just laughed. To put it simply, the protagonist's achievements were plagiarized by a student who was nothing (not even a teacher). The author said there was nothing wrong with it. He earned it based on his ability. It is worthy of you. It is highly toxic. Be careful.

Originally, the writing was good at the beginning, but each time a mysterious woman was added to each article. First, it was to whet the appetite, describing the protagonist's need to improve his strength and not engage in other things, and then the woman was obsessed with the protagonist. While talking about building strength, he is also playing with ambiguity. There's no such thing as strength, and there's no such thing as a woman who can't be cut off with a single blow? Every time I describe the protagonist, I have to focus on his strength, but every time a woman comes to share her experiences, it becomes a drag, and she is not so nice to my brother. Moreover, the description says that if you develop strength, you should develop strength. Don't say that the protagonist is not tempted by strength, and at the same time arrange for a girl to come over and be obsessed with her. The protagonist has to ignore her for various reasons.

Even if the plagiarism is proven, you still have to give the woman some money, right? No objection yet. Are you so vicious from the beginning? How come there are women's rights in the wizarding world?

I kept chasing it down, but I still felt like I couldn't grasp the rhythm well and couldn't climax. If it were a campus article, the plot of giving out scores could be arranged to be more enjoyable, but it is not included in the article. Letting the protagonist take the first place in the exam paved the way for someone's jealousy (not to mention the protagonist's serious study). However, this person basically did not appear in the scene. The void gathered fire and made people know that he was a villain and that he had done bad things. However, there was too little description of this person and it failed to leave a deep impression. Then there was the rush to publish a paper, which would have been fun, but in the end, the opponent got part of the results, and then the protagonist got into trouble again, which was unpleasant and made people angry. We can expect a wave in the future, but because we are a big family, it is estimated that this future will take a long time, and this foreshadowing will most likely fail. At present, there are no intellectual battles on campus and few martial arts fights. There are conflicts brought about by strong winds in daily stories, and there is no romance. The system was originally a highlight, but it was not written out. I won't mention the fighting scenes, they are few and have no impression. Character creation is a big problem. One of the two main villains looks down on the protagonist's background, and the other is jealous of his low qualifications but achievements. The author's method of arousing hatred is relatively immature, and he directly stated that it is because of this mentality. The latter's jealousy feels insufficiently paved. In the early stage, the president had no role at all and was always behind the scenes. Later, when the protagonist became a deputy president, he seemed to be implicated and passively offended the protagonist. In order to make him look like a villain, he used jealousy to incite a wave of hatred to explain why he wanted to engage the protagonist.

At present, in campus articles criticizing wizard skin, plug-ins are effective, but they are not prominent and distinctive enough. I haven't watched Harry Potter that much, so I have no idea about the few existing plug-in skills. The plot is hard to tell, one incident after another is relatively compact. The writing is relatively tender. Looking at the content, I guess the author is a science and engineering college student or a high school science student? Female supporting role... Those who like female protagonists probably won't hate this character too much, but the comment section was full of curses. This female partner gives me a little bit of the feeling of a brat in anime who would scold a bastard, but she is more mature.

The protagonist is an attractor. He can find him in any trouble. He socializes when he has nothing to do. He attracts the hatred of the vice-president of a novice organization. When he works in the laboratory to make money, he can meet someone who steals the experimental results. The three-ring wizard targets the results that are obviously his own and wants to share 30% of the people who steal the results. If he rents the laboratory for half a year, he has to sell two lives to the wizard. The poisonous spots are densely packed.

The character of the protagonist is really awkward. Especially like the kind of boy who was pampered and grew up in a remote mountainous area and ran to the city. She always likes to be on the side, with that kind of reserved yet sensitive and fragile character. And there is also a very absurd sense of being a poor man trying to pretend to be 13. This is a hard thing to say, but other than this adjective, I really can't describe the protagonist's weird feeling of being a poor kid who wants to be decent. There is also a weird and rational description of the love story of a licking-dog academic. 😭You can't say this book is outdated, nor can you say how white it is, but it makes me feel uncomfortable just looking at it. It's like the children of Ethiopian middle school teachers who ran away to Europe. He is reckless but can't bear to lose face. He is obviously poor but has an arrogance that others cannot understand. When it comes to falling in love, you have to hold on to it if you want it, but if you say no, a lot of time, money, and energy will be spent on that golden retriever. It can only be said that this is a rhapsody for a fragile and sensitive person with low self-esteem.

I was quite speechless at the beginning. After traveling for so long, I didn't draw the chance to draw cards. Are you waiting to give birth to a baby? What's even more speechless is that you waited until the qualification test to take the draw, and you said you were cramming. I said before that you will pass the third class, and you will definitely pass the fourth class, so what else are you taking? If you smoke it in public, aren't you afraid that a colorful light will flash in your eyes, and then the wizard will put it on the experimental platform? The writing is not good, and I don't know how to avoid the poisonous points.

A few poisonous points in the early stage. 1. I was the first to be promoted to apprentice in the early stage. I kept pretending and didn't get rewards, especially when my krypton gold system needed such rewards. I don't know why I've been pretending to be a pig. 2. I had just planned to keep growing, but was spoiled by a woman and went to a party. Because the woman was threatened at the party, I was forced to use all my wealth to buy weapons for self-defense. 3. There is a female troublemaker around me who neither drives away nor makes friends with. There are no good things and a lot of bad things.

I thought it was a scientific research article about wizards, but it turns out that the scientific research component is less than that of traditional wizard articles. With all the intrigues between people and society all day long, I felt that the author might as well write about officialdom!

The setting is good, but the writing is not good. The setting of this woman is really stupid and bad. I don't understand the purpose of setting this woman up. Her only purpose now is to hold back the protagonist. It does not help the protagonist at all. Then many people peek at him through him. Every time it causes conflicts, the author may think that if the protagonist is a bitch, he will not promote the plot, so he has to write a woman to hinder the protagonist.

At first, the heroine Green Tea was scolded a lot. I thought it was okay to have such a character. I jumped to the back and subscribed to a chapter to help the author. Later, I deliberately pretended to be a pig and the classic villain fell in love with the heroine. The plot caused conflicts. Although it was cliche, I pinched my nose and endured it. In the end, the patent was plagiarized and the plagiarizer was given 30% of the profit. I felt that the chapter I subscribed to was fed to the dog. Read the next chapter There is self-defense at the end of the recording, and the blind guess is that the plagiarism is not good, but the plagiarism is all to cause trouble for the protagonist. Are you too lazy to read it? This kind of book that relies entirely on the whole world and the protagonist to advance the plot is already ten years ago.

The existence of female supporting characters is a huge flaw. The protagonist that everyone loves to read: has the perseverance to pursue power, is not addicted to women, is calm and composed, and has plans for the future. The protagonist of this book + female supporting role = Selan who says that she is actually a nanny. She wants to study but is always interrupted by others (or because of the female supporting role). She should be a strong person but becomes a timid idiot (pretending to be a pig to eat the pig in the tiger). The wizard's astronomical text becomes a campus love story.

The male protagonist has traveled through time and is not a brat. He clearly knows that the female protagonist is approaching him to take advantage of him, but he also realizes that he has gotten himself into trouble, and then he becomes frustrated. You have to say stay away, but actually stick to it fiercely. Was the male protagonist in need of women before time travel? The most important thing now is not to quickly improve your strength? Is it for women? It's better to be a little brat. There are many ways to create conflict between the protagonists, but you have to choose the most disgusting one. Otherwise, don't give the male protagonist a character like this. He is obviously this kind of rational and calm character, but he does all the hot-headed things. Everything is in one place, so it is inevitable to take care of it. The male protagonist traveled back in time and lived for only a year before coming to the Wizarding Continent. Why, the female protagonist also traveled through the earth? After analyzing the fact that the female protagonist paired up with the male protagonist was useless and did not cause trouble, it is interesting that the male protagonist resolutely jumped into this pit. This is a campus romance novel disguised as wizard literature. The male protagonist here has no backing, no background, and no strength, but, alas, he is just bullshit. Just dare to get into trouble for a girl. Just not afraid of death.

A lot of intrigue and bullshit every day. I don't know the point of the wizard's novel. I can't just brush over all the bullshit and messy things, but here I focus on describing the number of words.

Author, do you want to poison everyone? You wrote such a vicious heroine in the early stage, which is equivalent to screening readers. But now you support the heroine all the way. All the conflicts along the way are basically because some people want to get jealous of the heroine, and the readers have accepted it. Now you say that the heroine has become independent, and she has not discussed with the male protagonist to join a small group to cause trouble? Author, have you read too many tutorials? Are you quite proud of yourself, thinking that the heroine has written a character arc? Do you feel like you arranged the character's growth? Have you ever read a word about a character's arc and started making it up? Do you really think you're very technical?

I saw the assessment part of the competition. To be honest, it was boring and nothing new. What did the protagonist learn this school year? Putting aside mathematics, what did you learn about botany, human body, and rune analysis? I have read so many so-called papers, but I really don't see the protagonist doing anything of his own. Not to mention perfume and herbal cultivation, it is just a practical operation that adds some extraordinary concepts. There is also the issue of zero-ring spells. What is the difference between wizard writing and mage writing? Does casting a spell rely on mental power or magic? What determines the power? What is the meaning of the zero-ring attack spell? How does the number of models affect spells? How does environmental energy affect spellcasting? What is the impact of energy intensity on spell power? What does the spell model composition mean? What is the composition of a single spell rune? How much control does the model size have? Take the current talisman as an example. The talisman head is composed of an edict and an edict. So what is the rune model based on? Hieroglyphs? Natural element image? Is the change in Mist and Rain Technique a change in the model or a change in mental control? Or is it a change in magic power output? Why can't these changes be applied to zero-level attack spells? What type of energy is it? Active or inert? Universal or exclusive? For example, is the damage caused by Ice Blade Technique physical damage or spell damage? Looks too ordinary, nothing new, no ideas

I haven't read it yet. I read a lot of comments in the comment area about the female supporting character. Isn't it like the kind where after entering the academy, a bunch of men get jealous of the female supporting character getting close to the protagonist, and then the protagonist comes out to show off and slap her in the face?

Goldfinger setting, male protagonist's character, female supporting character's character, villain's IQ, the difference and relationship between wizards and mortals. Is there anything about the author mentioned above that is impressive? It's quite funny to say that he should be a protagonist with high IQ, but after provoking the enemy, he didn't even understand the situation of the enemy. He changed the initiative into passivity, let the enemy prepare, let the enemy choose the time to attack, and let the enemy choose the location to attack. Good guy, you are the contemporary Song Xianggong, benevolent and righteous, so benevolent and righteous. Also, you, a wizard apprentice, have taken so many classes and experienced modern education. When using witchcraft, your observation of witchcraft only remains on the surface, "the fog is very thick." Could you please be a little more inquisitive? ? ? Then you are afraid to say: The protagonist has some guesses about the composition of witchcraft, but because his understanding of the wizarding world is not comprehensive, he will not take the initiative to analyze witchcraft before completing the basic courses. This style is much more powerful than yours, that fog is so thick? Let me show you my new witchcraft: Little Mist

I have read Chapter 97 so far, and many comments mentioned that the author's portrayal of the heroine was okay, not as bad as those comments said. So far, I personally think that the biggest poisonous point is the plagiarism of ideas. After the paper is repeated, the author's way of handling it is so bullshit. Reality is not going well for me, why should I take a breath before reading your novel? I'm afraid that not all readers will run away. My personal feeling is that the author wrote the wizard novel in the wrong category, and should have written about the city. As of Chapter 97, there are all kinds of intrigues, including business wars, inventing fragrances, applying for patents, and accurately sniping at enemy new product launches. Really, I don't read wizard novels to read skin-changing urban novels. Of course, the author may be the wizard he knows, and that's what he should be like. I won't refute it. I can only say that the author's book is not my cup of tea. That's all. It's a long way to go. See you soon!

Kailan Armor(￣▽￣)~*

This book is a typical academic wizard. The current environment in the book is peaceful. The wizard academy is more like an ivory tower. The protagonist has no deep hatred. The entire wizard camp is lawful and neutral (leaning towards good). There are no obvious poisonous points such as intelligence-lowering attacks, etc., But the shortcomings are also obvious. The overall environment is very relaxed and comfortable, with almost no sense of tension. The academy is very orderly. The key is that even the golden fingers are unremarkable, and the overall style is biased toward farming style. The author has difficulty depicting the Western fantasy and mysterious style, resulting in a lack of joy in harvesting from farming. Personally I feel it's just too bland. It's hard to feel the tension and excitement of the plot in the previous dozens of photos.

The author can write in the introduction that this book is for daily wizarding literature to screen readers in advance. This way there won't be too many comments about abandoning the book in the comment area. 🙂

If you don't miss any of the ancient poison points, you have to be the one to stomp them all, the author~

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the protagonist is almost equivalent to a thirty-year-old adult male who was castrated into a minor and then stuffed into a classic Japanese daily life light-life male supporting family, where he lived for 16 years. The insignificant uncle next door in Japanese family comics. He is so confused that he doesn't look like someone who has a second life. He has another chance to be a student. What can he gain if he doesn't understand his identity? What are the privileges? What are the benefits? What are the restrictions? There is a cheat, but I don't know what the rules of the cheat are. Basically, it can be predicted that it is an urban novel in the skin of a wizard. The protagonist, through vertical and horizontal alliances, recruits apprentices, pulls tiger skins, receives the favor of senior wizards, builds a big business exchange, and makes money to meet the lottery requirements of the cheat

I feel like the author can't continue writing anymore, and it seems a bit unfinished. It is obvious that this book does not have a complete outline. What the author wants to write has almost been explained clearly. The problem is that the protagonist is only level 4, and there should be a long chapter to follow, but there is no inspiration and ideas. There is no result in trying to hold back the plot. It will only lead to the unfinished start of a new book amid constant interruptions in updates and abuse from readers. Again, authors are warned that they must have a good outline before starting the book. At least there must be a complete synopsis of the story, otherwise it will be too painful to think about the plot later.

After reading the new chapter, Goldfinger has become useless. It seems that it has been changed by the will of the world. It has changed for the better, and Goldfinger has been controlled. In fact, the protagonist has become a puppet of the will of the world. In a place like the Soul of the Sea of ​​​​Consciousness, it will be changed as soon as it is said to be changed. The protagonist is quite happy. The current status of the protagonist is that the problem of the golden finger that was worried about the future troubles has been solved, and it has been controlled by the will of the world. Then the question is, the will of the world with obvious self-thought has taken up residence in your soul. Are you still yourself, the protagonist? At present, I don't see the protagonist worrying about this, or is he happier? Now Gold Finger Tiandao can take it away if he wants. Once the Gold Finger is taken away, the protagonist will be wiped out by everyone immediately, and it will be difficult to survive. After all, the protagonist has no value anymore. The knowledge of the universe such as the solar system is in the hands of the World Meaning. I feel that An Xin can be a puppet. Maybe he can become a Saint of the World Meaning. As long as you have fun writing, author!

It's only a little over 1,000 fan points after fully booking. Are you all giving rewards?

When you wrote this heroine, did you want to select the kind of readers? Are you afraid that your grades are not good enough?

There are too many intrigues and intrigues, and it's hard to prioritize them.