America: the Exorcist

The writing is very good, but the plot is not "enjoyable" in the current sense, and the sense of upgrading is not strong. This is covered by a good plot, and the reading interest is still acceptable. The first disadvantage is that the protagonist's behavior is very irresponsible and childish, and he is too tolerant of disgusting female characters, but he is not completely brainless. The explanation given by the author is rubbish. I personally dislike this very much. Disadvantage 2: The protagonist's behavior is very passive. Although the plot development plan is okay, it is not out of the protagonist's own will. He mostly plays the role of a miserable and forced clown (personal opinion). However, the author also uses the invincible literary routine to kill several small villains to remind him that it is refreshing. The sense of separation is too strong. Even if you are deeply bitter or directly invincible, it is better than this two-way situation. Western fantasy has a dark background. If the author wants to write the protagonist from childish to mature, it is actually okay. There is no need to intersperse cool points too early that do not fit the protagonist's behavior. Of course, this style is too discouraging in the early stage. Advantages: The author has a deep understanding of the essence of online plot descriptions. The writing style can directly help me overcome these small and big poisonous points. However, unless the plot is very complete and I can read a large plot (one volume) in one go, I probably won't touch it and will keep it on my bookshelf for now. At the same time, I hope friends who are following the book can give me some feedback. What is the main character saying so far? I hope you can provide me with some information. I'm so confused about reading it. There's been a book shortage recently, and it's hard to give up on such a well-written novel.

The theme selection and entry point of this book are quite good, but the plot processing and coherence are very poor. The author may want to write a larger world view, but the writing power is not enough and the writing is very fragmented. It is only 500,000 words and there are so many characters that it is difficult to remember. I don't want to write a passing plot, so I just write a few things together, but try to write as little content as possible, as it looks too incoherent. Please support full subscription and monthly pass.

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Come on, come on, I think the subject matter is very good and the writing is good, I will give you a monthly pass

Don't ask for a system. I think the inheritance of the world itself is the real thing. If there is a system, it will be incompatible with this world. Then the people around you will be all paper people, and the social relationships between them will be false. If you think that you are the protagonist, everything should be around you, and you will become arrogant. Reincarnation in this world must be alive with flesh and blood, otherwise it will be the same experience as playing an RPG plot game.

After reading Chapter 27, I find it most annoying that the protagonist is used as a shield by a woman he has met several times to fight with other men. It is extremely cliche, and after the trouble is solved by the protagonist, the protagonist and the woman treat it as if nothing is wrong 🤫

I always feel that the protagonist is inexplicably aggrieved. It is not refreshing at all. I feel uncomfortable all over after watching it. What the protagonist has paid is not equivalent to money. Compared with money, I feel inexplicably aggrieved! ! ! No more watching, let's go, bye

Author, don't you think the blessing in Chapter 27 is a bit contrary to human nature? For example, if you want to get married and buy a house, the difference is tens of thousands of yuan, and you only have three or four months of salary. A friend who you have known for two or three days asks you to become a legal person of the company, and then introduces you to a friend who is the landlord of the house you like. He also gives you thirty thousand yuan. There is a high probability that something will happen, and you agree. Moreover, when a relative of yours passed away and inherited an inheritance, which would most likely be enough for you to buy a house, you agreed based on the factor of being a friend. Don't you think this is being taken advantage of? Or is it because of the house? Is it necessary to buy that house? Not the one next door?

The creative writing style is also good, but the writing style is too off-putting. No wonder many people criticize the male protagonist for being brainless.

A little sick, the female vampire deceived Pig's Foot and asked Pig's Foot to bless her niece. She had to bear the price for 300,000. The key is that Pig's Foot was not very short of money and someone else told him the truth. Pig's Foot also said that he didn't want to lose this friend (who only knew him for 2 to 3 days). Later, it was also said that the female vampire did not regard Pig's Foot as a friend. Isn't this a big complaint?

After reading a few chapters, I wonder if the protagonist has been assimilated. It's a typical American exorcism, just like watching an American TV series. It's just as reckless as it is. Like Zha Kang, the Wen brothers still have a lot of false evidence.

The relationship has become strange. Originally, we were planning to get the golden apple and save some 500,000 yuan. After we got John's property, we didn't mention the money much. It was just about the plot.

There is no doubt that the works are thrown away and abandoned.

The first and biggest poisonous point about the way of writing is that the wizard in the original text gives blessings. If the person who is blessed has any subsequent consequences, all the consequences will be fed back to the wizards. Both wizards feel that this situation is very embarrassing and embarrassing. As a result, the protagonist ends up because of 3 I agreed with 00,000 U. S. Dollars. It's not the so-called friendship. It's just this small amount of money that will have to bear the endless unknown consequences in the future. The protagonist in the writing is like a big guy. I don't ask him to be smart, but whether the mutual contributions can be equal, or not so disparate. Didn't he just get millions of assets embezzled by his father? Is there such a shortage of hundreds of thousands? This novel should not be written for long, and I estimate that it will not exceed 300 chapters.

The world view and setting are very good, but the plot arrangement has too many poisonous points, just like a virgin licking dog who was sold by others to help others count their money.

Looking at the comments and looking at the coolness of the label, it feels like a joke

It can only be said that the author obviously cannot handle the various interpersonal relationships of the protagonist. Various female characters keep popping up, and the protagonist is still a virgin.,,,,,, And then he keeps suppressing the combat power. It is outrageous. A first-rate world view and a third-rate writing style.

A typical American protagonist. Usually this kind of protagonist is awesome, but his life is rubbish, and there is no fun at all.

The more you write, the more outrageous it gets, the protagonist is just a tool man

The wizard who is good at potions licks the dog,

It's boring. Except for the protagonist's fake father, all the other key supporting characters are women, and they all have an affair with the male protagonist in a vague way 😒

The career setting of the protagonist is quite good, but there is a problem with the blessing chapter. Many book friends have mentioned it. It is equivalent to cheating, and blessing is given because of money and potion channels. Doesn't the author think there is a problem? It's not equivalent. Also, why are you friends? Your protagonist is a wizard, and your main circle of friends should be wizards, because the so-called friendship of a vampire requires blessing, and there is no mention of the friendship of a vampire. It's poisonous.

The story is novel, but the protagonist is not outstanding and his image is flat. He is not as lovable as the supporting characters. He is like a puppet who only advances the plot. Removing the protagonist will not affect it.