Douluo, Ascend to the Gods File

As the title states, too many Douluo fandoms nowadays either give the protagonist a lot of enhancements (twin martial souls, innate soul power, ridiculously powerful martial souls, etc.), Or they give plot characters intelligence and forcibly create conflicts. I wonder, what's the point of writing like this? I even know roughly what the plot is just by looking at the chapter title, so why should I spend money to subscribe?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    " , handling of the relationship between the characters (where did Xiao Wu's love come from, why did Bibi Dong go dark, why did Rongrong choose the protagonist, etc.) 3. Considerations between the forces (the stance of the soul beast, Tian Dou's plan, the plans of the gods, etc.)) In terms of these, I think this novel is one of the few novels that writes something of its own.

I finished reading the book in a few days. After reading this book, I felt like reading other Douluo fandoms was as boring as elementary school students fighting, and I couldn't stand it. Either the plot is too brainless, or the plot is too imbecile, or the protagonist and the supporting characters all have above-average IQs. The target of this book should not be Douluo fandoms, but books in the genres of Dafeng Daggengren and Spirit Realm Walker. I feel that the author is more suitable to write his own book, or just apply the world view, rather than write fanfics. In general, I support the author, but can the update be faster? . .

The author has completely failed to understand the essence of fan fiction. Writing too many plots outside the main line is a taboo for Douluo fans. You have written too many plots outside the main line.

Like the title, author, you just wrote whatever you thought of, right? Ah? Without a preface and a follow-up, just adding a bunch of settings will make you feel stupid, right? If you don't have the ability or fame to learn the writing style of the great master Misty School, what will happen if you speak clearly? You have to be stupid and click vaguely but not thoroughly, leaving the reader guessing. There are a lot of bad writings by Douluo fans, and you are the first one to make me anxious and suffocated like this 😒

I have read no less than 20 Douluo fanfics from Qidian. Only this Douluo fanfic made me feel convinced after reading it! Not much else to say, I just subscribed to all chapters after reading twenty chapters, and I will give you a monthly ticket. I just ask you not to be a eunuch, and let me feel the author's writing style to my heart's content!

The third young master of the Tang family is so virtuous and capable that he asks you to help him write Douluo from the fantasy sewer to the advanced fantasy world.

Is this Douluo Continent? We are already wearing the skin of Douluo and running into the world of advanced fantasy. I wonder why it seems a little strange, but it turns out that it is not Douluo Continent. A reminder to those who follow, the author has a lot of secondary settings. In order to round up the secondary settings, he has begun to give various settings, which is already unreasonable. Remember, all foreshadowings are what they are before they are exposed. It does not mean that there are foreshadowings here. If they are revealed, it is a masterpiece, but what if they are not revealed? If it's shit, it's shit. Don't pay attention to his foreshadowing. What you think is unreasonable is unreasonable. In many places that are unreasonable, he is rounding it up instead of setting it up. If it is a setting, it is a secondary setting given by the round plot. I have seen through this kind of garbage. I spent so much money chasing books in vain. I thought the point of view was different. It turned out that I looked down on the original protagonist and finally returned to the original plot, but with myself The pre-plot conflict seemed extremely unreasonable and I didn't even realize it. I was still laying the groundwork, talking about love in Shrek. I found this part the most disgusting, because in my opinion, what he wrote was about romance, but in fact, it was about licking the dog to the end. I really laughed when I read the latest chapter on October 1. I saw it clearly. It turns out that this is what it is. It has caused so much trouble for myself, so I will deal with it like this, lick the dog to the end. I always thought it would be a reversal, and I would stop being such a dog-eat-dog. After writing for so long, my writing skills have improved a bit, but it has improved. The romance has become more sophisticated, and the main plot has been mixed in, making people feel like a piece of shit and a piece of cake. This is the feeling. It makes people feel that the emotional line is useless, and then it promotes the plot. I can't stand this, and I can't say it. Originally, the setting was awesome, and the main character was said to be a smart guy, but he kept doing money-losing business. Really, the books I have been chasing are disgusting. This is the longest I have chased. It used to be a day or two, but this one is good, two months.

The writing is very good, but there is no reason why it is like this. I even have to say that it is deserved. This is an author who can make sacrifices for the protagonist for the sake of the story, but he is also an author who fails to understand the essence of online writing. These two points happen to be two extremely important points for online articles. The sense of involvement of readers of online articles is very important. The author's writing style is very good and the readers have a strong sense of involvement. However, if you give in to the protagonist in some places for the sake of the plot, it will definitely make the readers unhappy. If you simply want to write a good story, that's right, but if you want to achieve good results, you have to consider the reader's mentality. The essence of Internet articles cannot escape the word "cool", no matter how it is, it must not be without it. There are many places in the book that can make readers excited. Readers are already looking forward to it but they skip it because of the author's indifferent attitude. Here we can see that the author's own exciting points are not on the same channel as the readers. To put it bluntly, the author is enjoying himself. Except for these two points, I personally think that this book is an excellent novel even if it breaks away from the scope of Douluo fandom. However, precisely because of these two points, this book can only be a good but not a popular book. It is a good story but not a good online article. This book makes people want to read it, and it keeps lingering on the pleasure point, so at first I was looking forward to the subsequent plot, but gradually I didn't have the patience to pay for it, because it kept lingering and never got into it. So I personally ran away to have sex for nothing after I booked it, because it was no longer worth it. People who read online novels are generally ordinary people who just want to read a good story and feel good to reward themselves. You have been lingering to seduce others. To put it bluntly, if you don't make readers happy, who will pay for it? It can also be seen from the back that there are fewer and fewer comments. After talking so much, I still want the author to pay attention to the readers' feelings. I like this book very much, but it keeps making me feel unhappy while reading. This is just a personal opinion, I look forward to the author's follow-up stories

😅The protagonist's IQ alternates between low and high, making it look like schizophrenia, and there are also those bad tastes. The author please set up the protagonist, one side looks like a scientific researcher, and the other side looks like a loser. Do you think this is reasonable?

Douluo Dalu was originally written in December 2008. It became popular in 11 and then Zhang Wei continued to write Peerless Tang Sect. If you traveled back in 20 or later, you would basically know who Tang San was because Douyin shared the beautiful life. . .

Why does Su Yuntao think that the eyes martial spirit is a useless martial spirit?

Very good, it is an almost fully enhanced version of Douluo, not a fantasy sewer. The author writes very well. Except for Tang San and the master who are relatively mentally retarded, the other characters have online IQs. He rationalizes the unreasonable content in the original work and brings the rigid characters of the original work to life 👍

It is a rare high-quality Douluo fanfic. The author added a lot of settings himself and changed the fantasy sewer into fantasy. The author added a lot of Machiavellian tactics to make those nonsense plots more reasonable. Great writing, support the author.

It is rare among Douluo fans to write supporting characters with brains. Ning Fengzhi is so sophisticated and Dugu Bo is powerful, which is eye-catching. The Douluo Continent with thousands of years of history in the background can only be seen in this book. In addition, this book is logically self-consistent and well written, but it is too slow.

After reading too many cool articles, I feel like I'm growing again. The supplementary settings for each character feel very appropriate. Personally, I think the only flaw is probably the Chamber Douluo. Without Zhang Wei's official intelligence, Bibi Dong has no chance of counterattack, let alone ascending to the throne.

The first four chapters describe the protagonist through statistical methods, creating a calm protagonist image. By the fifth chapter, the protagonist became a passerby like a child again. The tearing feeling was so serious that I even doubted whether it was written by one person.

This is my first time writing a novel, it's a mess

Although the writing is good, it is also a dead eunuch! (You deserve to be thrown into the street)

Oops, I'm really speechless. I can't stop scolding you. Shennong tasted hundreds of herbs and died. This author has only one point of view in this book. The protagonist is right, everyone else is wrong. Everyone else, everything they do is wrong. Whether you are cultivating or eating fairy grass, eating fairy grass is also wrong. He said that the increase in soul power caused by eating fairy grass is false. Hahahahahahahaha. This author drove himself crazy writing a book. . . (I was wrong, I was so wrong.) I actually thought that the author of Douluo fan fiction would be a normal person. The third young master of the Tang family is really the greatest author of Qidian. The book he wrote himself smells like chocolate. However, the author who wrote his fan fiction is also a chocolate flavor. It is true that a virus has spread. (Don't expect any Douluo fanfic) . . His grandma, wasting my time looking at that crap. . . convex (￣▽￣)convex . . . I really regret seeing this book.

This Yu Xiaogang's writing is too retarded. No matter what, he is someone who has read the collection of books in the Wuhun Palace and his own Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex Collection. You will always be able to read if you are not smart, right? Aren't rote memorization and summary summarizing the characteristics of Yu Xiaogang? Everyone in the world has had their IQ enhanced, and only the master and apprentice Yu Xiaogang lives in another world line. It seems very fragmented, even with Tang Hao. No matter how hard he is, he is still a titled Douluo, but he behaves like a fool who only knows how to blacksmith. His IQ and understanding of practice have been blown to pieces by Dugu Bo. The villain is so stupid. Doesn't it make others look like they're wasting money?

No? This martial soul of yours, the eye of true seeing? You are all talking about mental power, what does this have to do with the eyes themselves? Forget about the soul ring, then you would rather engage in flying than engage in your own martial soul?

The book was okay, but it was really uncomfortable to read. It felt like I was reading a novel from ten years ago, with all kinds of bellyaches and plots where I thought I was the girl but turned out to be another girl. Vaguely.

Has this protagonist really never seen or heard of Douluo Dalu or is he just pretending?

Everything else is good, but I'm too clumsy in front of women.

The author's writing is very good, but it is not in line with the current fandom environment. I still support the author.

It's been 4 months and you haven't even thought through the follow-up outline? I've only updated a few chapters, and you've stopped again 🥵

It can be cut off for a longer period of time, I hope the author won't mess with it and it won't end 😭😭😭

I don't have the money to cast a recommendation vote to support the author's book 😅😅 The reason why this book is so popular is that it makes even the anti-three-minded Xisan feel disgusted. However, other aspects of the writing are very good. I think some of the second creations are better than the original ones. Some details have been added, although some of them will be a little outrageous afterwards. There are not many fan fictions with multiple female protagonists and thoughtfulness. They can describe the social conflicts that arise in the world of soul masters in detail. It is not just love and love, it is not just fights, which makes this book have depth and ideals. Next, if I want to write a few chapters in my spare time, I hope to be able to write "Rebellion" in detail, without confusing it, with fewer problems and more precision. I will continue to support this book.

It's really a pity not to write this book. I re-read some chapters and found that even a weak buffoon like Gangzi was written with flesh and blood, which is touching. Not to mention the many detailed worldview additions and character interactions.

I will update it when I have time 😭😭😭