Hogwarts: Bourne Returns from Warhammer

Very well written! However, it is recommended to change the setting, because the protagonist does not look like a veteran of the Three Golden Nails at all, and it is fair to say that he is a recruit. .

There is no special second creation. The fact that you need to transform when fighting is a good thing. Some articles are full of drama when they see seven or eight-year-old children killing everyone. Especially because the protagonist is not the kind of killing machine that shouts "The Emperor is above me" and "For the Emperor" every day, as if his brain is half missing. Still quite down to earth. In short, good looking

You are not Warhammer at all. The real Warhammer is like the pain Guilliman experienced when he first woke up, falling from the most beautiful vision to the cruelest reality. To put it simply, you are happily learning magic at Hogwarts, only to discover that the source of magic is subspace. Then you look at everything around you and everything is different. Psionics are releasing their psychic energy everywhere unscrupulously, and there are no safety measures. Even the trivial matters in life are inseparable from psychic energy. Every dish and bottle of wine you eat has psychic involvement. The Thousand Sons called it radical, saying that even Magnus would never dare to do this. Then you remembered something called the Obscurus, and you tried to control yourself not to think deeply about other things. At this time, Brother Fred invites you to prank other psykers. When you see them randomly using psychic powers to distort the human body and pollute reality just for fun, you will want to send two explosive bombs to them immediately. Just when you're wondering why Hogwarts isn't full of chaos portals, Professor McGonagall wants you to take a Transfiguration class, and your blood freezes when you witness an old psyker leading a group of little psykers to blaspheme the genes at will in the form of irrational witchcraft and blaspheme the genes. After finally making it to the end of get out of class, you no longer had the strength to be afraid when you looked at those buildings that relied entirely on psychic energy for their existence. You don't even dare to think about whether the earth in subspace would be as bright as a Christmas tree in the dark with such a degree of misuse of psychic energy. Speaking of trees, you think of the Forbidden Forest, but at the moment you don't want to increase your blood pressure by looking at those creatures that are so polluted by chaos that they cannot be explained by biology. Hagrid greets you and wants you to take a look at his recently hybridized Blast-Ended Skrewt. You blurted out: "If there is no reproductive isolation, why can mammals produce offspring with arthropods?" After hearing Hagrid ask you what reproductive isolation is, what are mammals, and what are arthropods, you decide to stay as far away from this blasphemous creation as possible. Finally, when you heard Dumbledore say that the sea of ​​souls is the ultimate peace in the principal's room, you immediately fell to the ground unconscious.​

I don't think there are too many problems with the second setting. As long as it doesn't look too dramatic, the second setting actually makes people look like it really appeared in the original text, and it's easy to accept it. And what kind of fanfiction is it without a second setting? My personal point of view is that I actually like more conservative fan fiction, that is, there are not too many secondary settings. There are a lot of secondary settings, and even the plot has been changed. A mastermind is added behind the final boss, or an additional mastermind is arranged for the protagonist. I personally cannot accept it. The most I can do is stop reading it. It's not to the point where it's useless. I also write books myself, and writing overly critical comments is a huge blow to the author. But I can accept the non-acting second setting. If it is logical, I will even think the writing is good and I will be willing to recommend it to my friends.

I have never understood the character of the male protagonist. After 300 years of Warhammer career, I only have the feeling of a naughty and mischievous child. When I transformed, I didn't see the warrior's perseverance. It just made me feel so middle-aged and not serious. While reading the part about Sherlock Holmes, my enthusiasm for this book gradually disappeared. Then the trouble caused by Holmes was not mentioned in the end. The punishment for Holmes was not mentioned. After beating the person, I couldn't understand why he was chatting and laughing with Holmes, one of the culprits. Let's just say he uses the fairy inheritance to compensate the male protagonist. The Train Arrives at the Station describes Hermione's arrogance and unreasonableness, and then disappears. There is not even a dialogue with her. Perhaps it can be said that it was not written, but the first meeting with one of the original protagonists ended too sloppily. Then there was a conversation with the mischievous trio in the carriage. It was not a humorous joke? (Maybe I can't understand it) There is also a lot of nonsense, and that part continues to kill enthusiasm. To be honest, I found it quite boring there. The last chapter is Chapter 30, which I have only seen. Under the guidance of his only relative, Horace Slughorn, in Slytherin for 11 years, he entered Gryffindor after 300 years of Warhammer career. I don't quite understand. After seeing this, my impression of the male protagonist is that he is a funny character, a loyal emperor in the Second World and a naughty child. There is no shadow of a warrior, no mature way of thinking. I have a premonition that the male protagonist will become the nanny of the trio. If not the nanny, he will integrate into it as a peer. That kind of childish way of thinking and behavior makes me not want to continue watching. How can a 300-year career as a warrior be covered by just 11 years of childhood?

Excellent product! A good and interesting book. 1. The highlight of this book is a truth! Harry Potter is essentially a fairy tale world. If a senior star can still engage in stereotypes when he comes to such a world, then there is something very wrong! 2. The author's writing style is very good, the language is humorous, and the SP value is very high 🤭🤭 (the children like it very much and the food is delicious). What particularly impressed me was the transitional chapters that most people can't grasp and can easily be boring to write (but they have to be written). However, the author has the power to find a new way of writing and write it in such a way that one wonders if Hamster Khan 🐹 left his loyal Bilibili and came to the starting point to write online articles! 3. Regarding the Warhammer elements, I found very interesting foreshadowings From some clues - the "Astartes" who woke up from high-end goods such as dormant chambers with built-in stasis fields in the Dark Ages; An "Astartes" who is about three meters tall and has yet to become a Primaris; an "Astartes" who is qualified to trade with the C'tan to hunt for treasure in the subspace; an "Astartes" who can fight back and forth with Angron after his ascension to Demon - have you thought of anything? Anyway, I don't think it's as simple as the protagonist being Black Shield, or a Loyalist wandering Space Marine. The Emperor has a Primarch with "no records"! Why were the two original bodies "disappeared"? Is it just too polluted, or is it too dangerous? Is there a possibility that the two Primarchs were temporarily hidden by the Emperor because they were incompatible with the demonic style of the Warhammer Universe? Please help me upvote the post!

Soldiers who have been fighting for more than three hundred years have become like children after eleven years of peaceful life? This is only one-thirtieth. Will a soldier who has been in the army for ten years become lazy because of a four-month holiday? What's more, he is also a monk Astartes who is mentally stressed all year round.

I would like to ask if the group of wizards in Harry Potter who distinguish themselves from humans are considered a kind of demi-human or alien? Can anyone answer this question? I think if it were human judgment in the Warhammer world, I think they might need to be cleaned up.

Those who like Warhammer may not necessarily like Harry, and those who like Harry may not necessarily like Warhammer. You have added another Sherlock Holmes. The author is constantly screening his potential audience and reducing his readership. It can only be said that it is a niche within a niche.

When will the Four Evil Gods of Chaos invade? Or when will the green skin grow a mushroom? Or when will the Genestealer roar? Or when was a green-glowing metal skeleton dug out from under the Forbidden Forest? This is part of the Warhammer repertoire

Halfway through, I thought of something... As a loyal Astartes, you either can't use the Patronus Charm, or... I always feel that it will make other people's opinions explode...

This idea is very good, but I think it's a little too childlike. The protagonist doesn't look like an Astartes warrior who has experienced more than 300 years, but like a real child. It's not that it's bad, it's mainly because it doesn't match the character.

As for the protagonist, I never imagined that he could survive in Warhammer for so long.

Everything about this book is good, but it would have been better if the protagonist didn't have the name of a Space Marine. It would be better to write a systematic article. The protagonist has gained the transformation and combat experience of a Space Marine. It is better than killing like this for 300 years and still being a Din.

As for the protagonist, I don't think he was well portrayed. He seems childish and careless. People who survive in the Warhammer world shouldn't be like this.

Now the trend has changed😏, Hermione, Fleur, Ginny and so on are all old-fashioned, and Narcissa Malfoy has become popular😏

Another protagonist assigned to Gryffindor, a century-old warrior of the Astartes Chapter who cannot be reckless. If you put him in Hufflepuff, it will at least account for the "stability" factor of a soldier. Gryffindor, a place where adventurous and reckless people gather, is not a place where soldiers who have lived for centuries will go.

If Hermione is a single heroine, please kick me out, thank you.

Another fan who uses a hammer as a plug-in... It's not that the author's writing is not good, the hp part is very humorous and the transition is natural. But, does this have anything to do with veterans? It can be humorous and pure, but it can't be completely separated, right? You are such a two-faced person, and your PTSD has been normal all your life. How could you remain the same as before? Summary: A hp fanfic in which the main character is a three-hundred-year-old veteran recruited from you as a substitute (jojo's substitute) If you want to see an hp fanfic, you can read it, but if you want to see the elements of your hammer, you should take a detour... It is tangible but not divine

Although they all shout "loyalty" and "the Emperor is supreme", both Space Marines and mortals have their own Xiao Jiujiu. The three major political commissars are the best examples. Even if they are 41k, the Underhive people who lack knowledge will not blindly worship the emperor. Fanatics like the Apostle Mathieu would also say "The Emperor is not omnipotent"

Has Blue Dragon not been unblocked yet? Is there an electronic version? I ordered it all but still have hundreds of chapters to read. I saw the chapter where the rat men attack the magic tower. The protagonist has been invisible for a long time.

Is there anyone with any information? Has Yongxu been released as well, or has a new vest been launched?

After reading a few chapters, I feel a bit like I started writing after seeing some settings and plots. I don't know what will happen next, and whether Shen Nong can say anything about it.

I have read a lot of explanations about the source of magic power. Some say that natural energy is converted into magic power, some say that aura is converted into magic power, and some are brought by the Warhammer Realm space.

It's very beautiful, but he's just a eunuch 😡

I'm speechless. This author has entered the palace for the second time. Eunuchs can also become a habit. If the scales of eternal order are broken, this one is also broken. I can't quit the literary world. Don't you want to harm others?