The Rise of the Weird Mechanical Wizard

The protagonist is loyal to a prince who commits mass murder, and is forced to do so. He has an affair with someone just 2 days after traveling through time. He is really horny and thirsty, and even sees the girl's private clothes and blushes. What kind of ancient writing?

This plot is really annoying. The protagonist travels through an icy and snowy field in a daze and almost freezes to death and is rescued by a dwarf. He was brought to the city and just gained extraordinary powers, but before he could stabilize, he got involved in a lot of troubles. Also, because the protagonist's intelligence and ability have entered the eyes of the royal family, the protagonist is forced to choose a camp. There is not much description of how to advance the cultivation system of this world and how to develop the protagonist's own abilities. From the beginning, the protagonist is involved in a bunch of conspiracies and conspiracies. This is the summary of more than 20 chapters I have read. Overall, I feel that the writing is okay, but it is a bit tiring to read. Alas, forget it, everyone has their own preferences, maybe this is not my cup of tea. Let's go.

There is no problem in succumbing to threats to your life. The problem is that you then work desperately for the person who threatened you. Is the protagonist so cheap?

A lot of intrigue and incomprehensible plots. I saw the title of the book was Weird + Wizard, so I clicked in because I wanted to see the weird and magical world, but the current content really didn't appeal to me, so I gave up and said goodbye.

First of all, the setting is interesting, but is there something wrong with the heroine's behavior? She inexplicably lets the male protagonist live at home. Such a large organization can't afford staff rooms, right? It was very logical for the dwarf aunt to save the male protagonist, but when it comes to the female protagonist, she inexplicably turns into a clockwork puppet? And as the adopted daughter of a former half-violent organization boss, how could a combatant be so defenseless? We've only known each other for a few days. I don't feel that there is anything that can make Feifei and the male protagonist's relationship develop by leaps and bounds. It is purely to make Feifei become the heroine and inexplicably promote the development of the relationship. The entire interaction between Feifei and the male protagonist reveals a sense of deliberateness. The seamless connection to working for the prince is quite strange. Even if his adoptive father gave the order, he has no complaints against the mastermind who killed so many colleagues and partners? The following paragraph about going to a cocktail party to buy clothes can very reasonably reflect the plot of the temporary comrades' development of communication. The clothes Feifei changed into were a simple red skirt and black shoes, and Levi wore a black suit. If the author doesn't know how to dress, just watch the dressing video. This is too sloppy. If you can't, just copy the clothes of the villain in Nuannuan! Then the intrigues and intrigues up to the cooperation with the capitalists were passable. But when the prince said he had a gangster godfather vibe, he didn't notice it at all. The Corleone family still protected civilians and did things for their "friends". The prince's gang couldn't be called a godfather at all, they just killed and killed. The classic wealthy/powerful second generation that came out at the dinner party later was too classic. An ambitious big capitalist brought his children to a banquet where he clearly showed his side. Didn't he say hello in advance to let his son know that those people should not offend? But the slap-in-the-face plot is too classic and it's okay to endure it, after all, it's a newcomer. Although I am still far from catching up on the latest chapter (I only read Chapter 28), I can see that the author still has a lot of room for improvement. The setting is very interesting, and it feels a bit like a JOJO witty substitute. You are not sure what the opponent's awakened ability is. There are so many places where you can play well with the weak against the strong, mental arithmetic without intention, etc. But the writing style is still weak in some places. That's all I can think of now. I hope the author can polish his writing style.

This is the world of super powers, bastard wizard

The writing is good, but the plot is a mess

Change your name? Sorry, I don't have a sense of immersion anymore

It's a bit confusing, the plot is too fast and there are no details

After Chapter 58, I feel like I'm starting to add buffs to the protagonist. Is the latest chapter going to start a new journey?

I didn't understand it from the first chapter

If the author writes out the characteristics in the title of the book, he will be able to achieve results, but the writing seems to be... Extremely poisonous.

Is there a Shen Nong 🙂