Card Making: Give the World a Little Chinese Shock

After reading seventy chapters, I always felt strange. The dialogue felt like reading a famous novel translated from a foreign country. In the plot, why does the protagonist faint at every turn? Isn't it bad to slowly develop while having a golden finger? After fainting for no apparent reason, a little boy came out. What the hell was that? It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

I have read the book through your comments. The writing is really good, but the plot is not smooth enough. As for the book review, the plot is still too little at present, and the first small climax has not yet appeared. As a result, the characterization of the protagonist is not very obvious, and I really don't know where to start; Secondly, it is not recommended to add any meditation or other training methods to the card setting book. It is enough to simply make cards and get feedback to become stronger. There is no need to accumulate settings and spirit. Restoration of strength simply depends on sleeping and taking drugs. Anyway, I personally feel uncomfortable with this breathing method and meditation method; I also hope that the author will write down the card making settings more clearly. I roughly understand that card making in this book includes star number and quality. I hope you can classify it well. Sometimes you write how many star material cards, and sometimes what quality cards are written. It feels quite confusing. I would like to give you a small suggestion. The material cards should only be of quality, such as summoning cards and so on. As long as the star rating is required, for example, a few white-quality material cards can produce a two-star Myth Summoning card at most. For example, in the later stage, you can write a few purple-quality material cards, and you can only produce a seven-star card at most; Readers can make good use of the settings of rebirth and the long history of mythology. I hope they won't just mention a few sentences at the beginning. After all, Chinese mythology is so long, it's not impossible to leave out a few powerful figures, right? [Raise eyebrows] There is nothing else. The author needs to work hard on the writing and characterization. If you have ideas about the plot, you can add a friend to chat. After all, if I want to write a book recommendation post, it is best to discuss the development of the plot with the author

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I always feel weird? This design is definitely one of the reasons why I always faint. There are all kinds of financial groups and powerful people, and ordinary people are separated from the card masters and the plutocratic class. You can faint in various ways outside and not be killed or stolen. It is really a world of truth, kindness and beauty. The dialogue also feels weird.

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Two problems, the first one is too much nonsense, especially the Nissin feeling. The second one is that your protagonist has only entered the secret realm a few times, so how come it's all things he can't solve? No matter what bad luck happens to him. The energy is exhausted at every turn. Can it be a little closer?

It's the protagonist's speech that is particularly uncomfortable and strange.

Riding a cloud chariot and an electric whip, the support committee moved away, riding the dragon Qingqiu's Rong Yi Lu Li... Recommendation: The setting of the protagonist's rebirth is not the old-fashioned way of traveling through time and carrying memories. The card setting has exploded recently. In the cookie-cutter setting, there are many alternative treasure cards. The novel is gradually showing its signs; this is the case with "Card Making: Give the World a Little Shock of China". As a new author, the writing style is very distinctive. There is nothing unorthodox about reading the novel while playing tricks, and it gives people a very novel feeling💪💪 Plot: During the process of rebirth, the protagonist accidentally glimpsed the long river of history, which is called [China], which is a power different from the seven types of card powers in this world; the protagonist returned to his student days with these memories and started a cheating journey; I believe that in the future, this world will be resounding with [China] Xia]'s voice... In general, the appropriate use of jokes is a plus point for this book, and there are no big logical problems. It is a very stylish new writer, and the novel setting also gives people a sense of freshness. I believe the author can bring more Chinese shocks to our readers! Highly recommended🚀🚀{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

I thought the protagonist was a time traveler, but I didn't expect him to be an aborigine.

Although the writing is not good, the author is extremely obedient. The new version supports readers' grandpa to complain about us one-on-one online. Comes with flattering service and correction of various unpleasant points, with a good attitude. The voice is sweet and can be deceived (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Just kidding, if you think you can read this book, please join the group online.

There's a plot and writing, but the dialogue is too weird and smells like a comic book

The plot is old-fashioned, the main character is always mentally exhausted, what is he doing, just come here twice now and then, come back to this, from the beginning until now, I don't feel safe as the main character,

I have read several short stories about Chinese mythology and cards before, but I couldn't grasp the plot well and they all turned out badly! I hope I can write it well

The book is okay, and the subject matter is very attractive, but the dialogue is too uncomfortable. Is it normal for people to talk like this? Every sentence is very concise, and it belongs to the "One more word will kill" series, but this is not an advantage but a disadvantage that persuades people to quit. This not only causes the words of each character in the book to have the same taste, but also leads to the overall reading experience and rhythm. I have read dozens of chapters based on the subject matter and have to complain 🙂

First of all, let's talk about the information that is beneficial to the reader's grandpa: 1. Try to keep the chapter updates at five minutes after 0 o'clock every day (there are two chapters in the new book period) 2. The book will report the manuscript deposit status to the reader's grandpa in chapters 11, 21, 31, etc., With the purpose of recording growth. 3. This book strives not to make mistakes or write [poisonous points], so please let the readers know the poisonous parts in the comment area and [immediate deletion and rectification]. 4. Readers' grandfather's long comments will be replied, and short comments will be partly replied. 5. Because this book can accommodate various card systems, it supports the reader's grandfather [customization]. If the reader's grandfather wants to see his favorite card system, he can point out in the comment area that if there is a perfect system, it must be used. If I have new ideas, I will improve it myself and use it. I will definitely let you know when I use it. Digression: 1. There is absolutely no problem in reading books for readers. However, due to the limitation of new book recommendations, readers who have time still hope to [follow up on reading], or please click on it every [Tuesday] to have a look. This is about reading statistics and recommendations. Thank you very much. Thank you very much.

I'm currently reading chapters 37 and 38. It may be that Gou Daoliu has been reading too much recently. I always feel that the protagonist is very urgent. Reading this book feels like following a drama at double speed. The plot is not followed, but there is no sense of immersion. I will add it to the bookshelf first and wait and see.

After seeing Chapter 38, what do you think of this plot? It looks like the author really doesn't want the results

What is this? Why can't I understand this paragraph?

Let me briefly talk about my personal reading experience. The storyline of the plot is well written, and the subject matter is also good, but there are too few descriptions of characters, environment, battles, and actions. Let's talk about the impression in several points: 1. The dialogue between characters. The dialogue is not interspersed with the characters' body language, expressions, etc., And it looks ordinary and even a bit perfunctory. Based on the tone of the previous dialogue, when creating later, it is recommended to intersperse the body language of the characters to enrich the personal characteristics of the characters. The dialogues can also be polished up. In real life, few people speak and speak only with cold jokes. 2. There is less description of the environment. In addition to direct description, more side effects can be used. For example, when I encountered a demon spider, when I first entered the cave, there was some white spider silk on the ground in addition to gold. This increases the authenticity of the environment and also highlights the possibility of a demon spider in the cave. 3. Write the protagonist's performance in battle in detail. In order to highlight the protagonist's combat experience, when describing the combat actions, don't mention them all in one stroke, but expand on them in detail, which gives a good impression. I won't say much for now. Finally, I wish the author that his writing skills will reach a higher level and his creations will have no limits.

I heard that I'm here to stay, but I haven't watched it yet. I'd like to support you by ordering all~

My new book "The Almighty Card Maker: Starting from Zhong Kui", all the weird things, important characters, cards, and materials will be illustrated I have completed the work without any unfinished work, and my character guarantees that you can enter the game with confidence. The following is a brief introduction to the work: [Mythology, history and folklore, academy flow, secret copy, illustrator] Mo Bai traveled through the card world and became a new trainee card maker. Here, everything that forms collective memory can be used to make cards and play extraordinary and wonderful roles. Popular culture, celebrities, social occupations, hot events... History, myths, folklore, legends, all can be used to create cards. Among them, cards made from historical myths and folklore have great power! Unfortunately, due to the invasion of monsters, this world has suffered a civilization fault, and historical myths and folklore have long been lost. However, Mo Bai, who is familiar with these, can use them to make cards as he likes! Encountering red and white demons at the beginning, in order to save his life, he decisively made the divine summoning card [Zhong Kui], and since then he has embarked on the path of an all-around card master: A summoning card that no one else can create even if they try to break their brains? [Huang Feihong], [Guan Yu], [Black/White Impermanence]... I can choose any historical heroic spirit or mythological god! Equipment card? [Embroidered spring knife], [Zhangba snake spear], [Golden cudgel]... Swords, guns, axes and pickaxes, there is no best, only better! Vehicle card? Friends, have you heard of [Wood Cow and Flooding Horse] and [Kunpeng] which cannot be stewed in one pot? Venue card? After passing this [Naihe Bridge], your card will forget you as the card owner, I am so awesome! Trap card? I activate the [Spring Festival] effect, and all cards on the field must be returned to the card owner for reunion! A few years later, Mo Bai Muran looked back and found that he was already at the top of the card master!

The title is China, focus on China's cards, and eliminate those foreign stuff.

In this book, there were no problems with Huaxia's ideas and cards at the beginning, but things started to go wrong after entering the secret realm with the official team and seeing the blue dragon. What about the role of the mythical cards you made? Mythic cards are useless at all. They say they enhance mental power, and then, wait for death? There will be no continuation of the plot after that, just make the card directly? There is no development in the subsequent plot, and then the plot after that is useless. You can't understand what the main plot is. The protagonist is a 6-star reborn. It doesn't feel like a 6-star at all. It's almost like a primary school student. You can give it up. I have no desire to continue watching.