Fairyland Wasteland: I Can Travel Through Infinite Worlds

I feel like the reason for the low popularity and few comments is because the updates are too slow.

Don't write about those shabby things in the main world. You can't escape no matter what. Other urban supernatural powers, urban cultivation, doomsday cultivation, etc. The focus is on testing strength in other worlds and putting it on other worlds. Returning to the main world means explosive killing! Explosive killing! Save time. Don't just talk about so much in a few chapters. Don't write all the detailed nonsense in it. Author, you need to streamline your writing and the title. I can tell by looking at the title that this piece does nothing. There is no need to go back and change the name. Who decides after the plot is told? The itinerary in the different world is longer, so that the itinerary in the main world will be lengthened. The plot of the violent killings in the main world will be tight. Write a few sentences less about the useless people in the main world. Don't suppress the level. If you increase the level, you will kill violently. If you suppress the level, what should I kill? And don't write everyone else as mentally retarded. Their mission in this article can be seen at a glance. How about writing characters with some brains? If you want to make money quickly, you don't have to worry about whether the supporting characters have brains. A little logic problem is not important. The important thing is that it looks good. Your nonsense is a flaw. It doesn't matter if it's sexy. If you don't drag him out and write something disgusting, if you don't have any fascinating experience in this aspect, hurry up and figure out your plot. So far, I really don't see what the author is good at in this area, so just think about your plot honestly. Think about the plot. If you don't understand, just copy it and stitch it together. Then use your world view to draw and change it. get out of class is over!

What can I say? I still feel that the route is beautiful and has a sense of novelty. This book does not have this theme, but there are similar themes. Moreover, this book is too formal, with pig's feet, and you are still a person. You can't expand on many things. When it comes to cross talk, there are two people, one is praising and the other is funny.

The ideas and details of this book are good. There is not much to say. The biggest problem may be the emotional drama. It is a natural idea to have multiple worlds and multiple female protagonists, but from the aunt, the tutor girl to Jiang Yun, there are some templates. Most of the starting points have this problem. To sum up, it is a fake word, and the writing does not look like a living person. Opening ten or eight harems also feels like a template, but it drags down the level. Cultivation is a world view that combines great power. Everyone is training and struggling in heaven and earth. The thinking of men and women should be the same. After being flashed by the male protagonist's halo for a few times, he starts to worship him but doesn't grow his brain. This is the most boring thing to write. This is not to say that this routine cannot be written. It is logical for the weak to attach themselves to the strong due to various desires, but this can also be divided into two situations, love and pure attachment. However, no matter which situation, the sister-sister family reunion is poisonous, poisonous and fake, and it is human nature to be egoistic and exclusive. And greed, those who are in love will resent being neglected or not being the only partner. A purely dependent mentality may be like working for a boss. If the treatment is not enough, you may even cheat on other people in private. Therefore, when writing emotional scenes, you must write about these negative emotions in human nature so that they are not fake. For example, the aunt, a common starting point is that after the male protagonist rises in status, he unexpectedly helps or saves the aunt and discovers that there is no blood relationship. The aunt is shocked by the protagonist's domineering aura, and the two of them get together half-heartedly, and maybe even get the cousin. After that, the cousin and the aunt are jealous of each other, just pure paper people. If you want to write about a living person, you have to write about a woman who is attracted to the male protagonist, and you have to write about her being self-conscious or even avoiding social ethics as an elder. After they get together, you have to write about her loss of being able to cross the taboo but not being able to enjoy her lover all to yourself. You have to write about her escaping again but really can't give up on this relationship. She can only endure this relationship but still suffers in her heart. She is restrained in the early stage and struggles in the later stage. The greater the emotional fluctuations, the more like a living person. And since the first world has the Holy Son of the Hehuan Sect, we can also write about the Saint of the Hehuan Sect. The Saint pursues the truth by any means and uses all men as tools. When she falls in love with the male protagonist, she does not hesitate to take advantage of him, and even attacks other female protagonists out of jealousy. The more she desires enlightenment and the crueler she is to others, the more innocent and valuable her feelings for the male protagonist appear. Overall, this book does have great potential, but if the author can't handle the emotional drama well, he'd better start a harem with caution.

It's pretty good, but I don't think it's as good as your book on aviation, so I'd better concentrate on that one.

The female characters are stereotyped, and more and more of them are written, which is really boring.

Sometimes what people say is so unreasonable. Many of the contents are clearly stated in the article, but everyone insists on making up some settings from their own imagination. I am really stupid. It is really unreasonable! ! I will list some questions and then QA will explain them. Finally, let me talk to you about how to cause real harm to the author. Q1: [Why don't you make the elixir yourself and take it yourself to improve your cultivation? A: It's a headache. How did the big brother raise this question... The setting of the Exhausted Immortal Realm is that the spiritual energy is exhausted. Logically speaking, if there is no spiritual energy, there will be no elixir, right? And the spiritual plants in the modern world are artificially cultivated "apple trees" or financial products. I almost said that these things are a lie. Since there is no magic elixir, where can you go to make elixirs? Where to eat? Alas... The title says infinite world, there must be a dedicated alchemy world behind it, don't worry. Q2: [Why not learn to refine weapons and make talismans? Making money and gaining status in modern times? Instead, he becomes an internet celebrity by posting his inheritance on the Internet, while his children hold money and cause trouble? A: Brother, in the modern world, weapon refining and talisman making are all controlled by large companies and produced on assembly lines. How much money can you make from this thing? If you want to make a lot of money and gain status, you must compete with companies, right? Even if you are just making a small fuss and lowering yourself to earn some hard money, you are still a potential competitor of a large company and may be discovered. The protagonist publishes some spiritual skills during the Qi training period online. He does not make a penny in the early stage, but earns money from paid readings in the mid-term. He does not compete with others, nor does he have a big conflict with the company, and at least there is a layer of network between them. How much trouble can it cause? Even if his true identity is found out, he is still a genius, because he has developed qi training skills and has not developed a foundation pill. It is reasonable for him to be found. Why can't the protagonist be a genius... If it is the refining of weapons and talismans inherited by the ancient sect for thousands of years, and the real person puts it on the market to sell, and has to compete with modern large companies to grab the market, isn't that just asking for death? As long as you sell something, others can't find you? How can a child hold money and go to the market? Some readers just squirted after reading this. Does that make sense? I really don't see the benefit of refining the weapon and making the talisman first? Is there really something wrong with my brain? I don't deny this... I am dual-minded and my mind is indeed not clear, but logically speaking, I should first gain status and strength before I can do these things. It is very clear in the original article that the protagonist's plan is to first obtain a large number of scientific research status through discussion, and then obtain contribution points and social status, and then open a company for business after it is safe. The protagonist never said that he He doesn't want to refine weapons and make talismans, but on the contrary, the protagonist has always been thinking about his broken "Lingxiao A-type Long Sword" and "Flagship Level Talisman", and wants to open a company and make a lot of money all the time. This is just a matter of time and whether he is strong enough! I can only say don't worry, the further you go, the better. The protagonist, the golden finger, is born to be the savior. Q3: [Why don't people in the Exhausted Immortal Realm give up their cultivation and enjoy life as mortals? A: I really didn't expect this question. It's too outrageous. As soon as the protagonist opens his eyes, he sees people anal. There are still people who want to give up their cultivation. Do they want to be anal? Still enjoying life? It makes sense, I realized, it is indeed enjoyable to be anal... But to answer the question seriously, the monks in the Exhausted Immortal Realm live like beggars, but they are beggars full of hope! As long as you are lucky once, you will have a chance to obtain spiritual energy. As will be seen later in the article, ordinary people accidentally found a sect ruins and sold hundreds of spiritual energy. Although it is similar to a lottery ticket, who wants to admit that they are not the protagonist? To persuade people to give up spiritual energy and enjoy life, you must be a demonic cultivator! Q4: [Why don't the mortals in the Exhausted Fairyland build an army? A: It is impossible for me to write a hundred thousand words of world setting in the first three chapters. Many things need to be entered and explained slowly. The depletion of spiritual energy in the Immortal Realm is a slow process, and it has not been completely exhausted until today. It is not as simple and straightforward as everyone thinks, but it is also written in the first three chapters. There are foundation-building monks in the depletion, and how mortals can collide with foundation-building monks. Q5: [How are depleted prices formed? A: The depletion of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth does not mean that the monks have not stored spiritual energy. What was the first reaction of the ancient sect after they discovered that the spiritual energy of heaven and earth was exhausted? Isn't it about robbing the stored spiritual energy? These large sects spend all their money to grab spiritual energy and save it like hamsters hoarding food. How much spiritual energy will those large sects save in the end? It is not something that mere mortals can imagine. This is also the reason why mortals must perish if they build an army. In order to continue the inheritance, the big sects all have their own ideas and methods. Even now, they are still big sects and still have amazing reserves of spiritual energy, which is equivalent to strategic materials. The other thing is, how to distribute the spiritual energy after storing it in bulk? What can be exchanged for spiritual energy? I think nothing can be exchanged for spiritual energy, only spiritual energy can be exchanged for other things. Then spiritual energy is the equivalent, and it becomes more and more valuable. This logic should be no problem. Answer five questions today. It's not that I don't want everyone to troll, but I don't want to mess around with the rhythm. Many readers make up many settings by themselves. After reading three chapters, they write articles to troll me. I explain for a long time, and then go to other forums to troll everywhere. It really doesn't make sense. And it doesn't hurt. Just complain about my poor writing. I can only sit in front of the computer and feel sad while wiping away tears. But there is really no lethality in spraying. It is better to just say that the writing is bad. This is the real injury and I will feel uncomfortable for a long time.

It slipped away. The quality of the plot after chapter 47 is getting worse and worse. The chapter where I saw the protagonist taking a concubine completely ran away. The previous writing was good. If this situation continues, it seems that there will not be many readers.

If you don't like it, just come here and complain. If it makes sense, I will change it❤️

Just highlight one moji and learn those flying skills without upgrading first.

The creativity is quite good. Why is he a eunuch? Not so good data?

If this book is written, it will at least be a masterpiece.

Hurry up to the realm where beauty is a chair and you kneel down like a brick. This is in line with your name as a holy son. Don't listen to what they say about not having a harem and being a fake monk and a real eunuch.

When I saw Chapter 12, there were no techniques or how to upgrade them, they were all magic techniques. So this book is a magic training system, divided into levels according to the amount of magic you have mastered. If you want spiritual energy, just breathe in the sea of ​​air?

Hey, here I go again. The setting of this book is novel. After reading the first few chapters, I found that Platinum Pose is much more attractive than the other one. Of course, I haven't finished it yet. I will review it after I finish it.

I have been a book friend for almost 20 years, and I highly recommend this book. So far, the writing is okay. If it maintains this level, it can be regarded as a small masterpiece. Taking the starting level as the standard, I personally think it should be possible to be within 100 of the overall list. Authors who can make old book friends shine are still very potential and have platinum status. The main purpose of this post is to talk about the shortcomings of this article. It can be seen that the author is a little anxious because the results of the work are not satisfactory. One family's opinion, for reference only. First of all, there is the issue of handling emotional scenes. Does the author want to write a novel without a heroine, a single heroine, or a harem novel? However, the description of the relationship between the aunt and the protagonist is a bit ambiguous and makes people uncomfortable. The atmosphere of the heroine in the first world is enhanced here again, and you will be scolded as a eunuch if you don't take action. What readers are disgusted with is the stud machine, not the relationship between emotions or interests. Second, the protagonist's cultivation process is too dissociated. Because the author writes about four levels of this exercise and five levels of that exercise. In addition, you can practice more, practice in a shell, and the skill jumps up and down, which is dizzying. It is understandable that the author asks the protagonist to practice the most embarrassing exercises, but the more complex the exercises, the more complicated the exercises will be, which will make the readers confused, which means that it will be difficult for the readers to take the role. I feel that this part is a mess even at my graduate level, and it will be difficult and difficult for some readers to understand it. The reason why the protagonist's upgrade process is unreasonable is because the resources required during the upgrade process, what difficulties are encountered, and how difficult the cultivation is are all missing in the book. This also makes it too easy for the protagonist to level up, but readers think that the author deliberately suppresses the protagonist's level. Because you can level up by practicing hard in the house for a month. If you can level up by staying in the house for a month, what about practicing hard for a year? Is it okay to survive until the Nascent Soul? Since it is not impossible to get the Nascent Soul, the protagonist posts and risks exposing his cheating fingers to make a lot of money. This makes readers feel that the protagonist is too arrogant and not doing his job properly. Third, Goldfinger is too outrageous. This golden finger is a spell that the protagonist dug up from his ancestral grave. But this brings up a series of questions. How did the protagonist's family obtain such an awesome spell? Does this mean that there are still spells of the same level in this world that are awesome? Are there any sub-level, second-rate, or third-rate spells? Does this mean that this world was very awesome before? The development process of the main world is actually the version of the first world of scarcity a few years later, and then the spiritual energy is revived again? It is recommended that the author change the golden finger to a treasure type (you can refer to "I Have a World of Immortal Cultivation", the golden finger is a treasure from another world) or enrich the background of the main world. You can also do both. Fourth, the plot causes the protagonist to lack motivation to explore. This novel type is a variant version of the double world, that is, one time travel into multiple worlds. The cool thing about this kind of novel is obviously that the resources of each world complement each other, allowing the protagonist to make a profit. But in fact, after exploring the first world, the protagonist has no motivation to continue exploring. Why? The land where the Dharma couple cultivates immortality and wealth, and cultivates all kinds of arts. It's certainly not a theorem, but it has become a template. The first world is not over yet. The protagonist already has no shortage of wealth (magic weapons) and magic. He also has a rough candidate for a companion, and land is optional. This in turn affects the protagonist in the overworld. So where is the motivation for the protagonist to explore the next world? Is it okay to go to the top level of Qi training first, because I need foundation building pills or other things, and then go to the next world? (Because I think the author has already said in the comment area that he is ready to go to the next world) Even if the first two worlds are passed and the protagonist is not lacking anything, what motivation does the protagonist have to continue exploring new worlds? And the protagonist of the main world is doing well, so what are the advantages of the main world? If you want to position the main world as a world that has plenty of resources but lacks other foundations, it will conflict with the previous description. Fifth, the cool points are misplaced. The cool thing about the first world is that the poor suddenly become rich, which is quite cool. But what are the cool points that the protagonist gets in the main world? Pretending to be happy? But it also requires the protagonist to open a new account and post anonymously. He can pretend to be B, but he can only pretend a little bit. If you don't pretend to be cool enough, you can only pretend silently in the corner. This makes people uncomfortable. You can't pretend to be aboveboard, just like walking at night in brocade clothes. It's fun to post and pretend to be a b-person, without further exploration, such as the impact on the people around you, the impact on the world, etc. Or develop something new and exciting. Finally, the collapse of the price system. Personally, I think the author needs to pay attention to the fact that prices collapse at the beginning, which is a bit inappropriate. Normal novels tend to collapse in the middle and later stages. If you collapse at the beginning, it shows that the outline planning is not very reasonable. It's better to reconsider the planning. I originally wrote a post on Qidian. After locking the screen, it disappeared and was not saved. So I wrote a new one based on memory. This is just my personal opinion, please forgive me if it offends me.

Question: Traveling to other worlds and time spaces is as easy as visiting next door. You can go and come back whenever you want. Is it appropriate? Is it reasonable? When we go to another city, we must consume a certain amount of energy (fuel or electricity), and it will take time on the way. Going to another country consumes more energy time. It takes time and effort to open the Dark Door in the world of Azeroth. I would like to ask: How much energy does it take to go to different time, space and worlds? The protagonist returns from the Exhausted Fairyland. Where does the energy consumed come from? ? I really like reading time travel novels. But what I hate the most is the kind that is worn back and forth. There is no logic at all, and the setting cannot be self-consistent.

I have seen so many immortals who absorb spiritual energy. Are there any who do not absorb spiritual energy? The kind that seeks from within and does not take from outside. For example, the five elements are interdependent, and spiritual energy can be generated every time it rotates. It only seeks it from within, not from the outside.