The Invasion from the Inner World Begins

The biggest problem with this novel is its absurdly low margin for error in previous scenarios. No matter how many correct decisions a player has made, a single wrong decision can easily eliminate them. At this rate, there simply aren't enough survivors. A common feature of well-developed rule-based supernatural tales is that survivors aren't eliminated by a single wrong decision.

[Recommendation] The rules of the first ghost story are rigorously and logically set up, which is eye-catching. The protagonist is somewhat like Chu Xuan from Infinite Terror. He is rational, cold, powerful, and slightly cunning (this has not been seen yet). The ghost story setting has the feel of "I Have an Adventure House". I hope the author can create a captivating and irresistible story.

I've read a similar novel before. The story begins with humanity being transformed into various kinds of robots for unknown reasons. Then Earth began to merge with other parallel worlds, starting with relatively weaker worlds like Attack on Titan, Demon Slayer, Tokyo Ghoul, and Inuyasha. Later on, there were more powerful worlds like One Piece, Naruto, and Dragon Ball.

A decent ensemble piece, quite interesting, always involving group battles.

The fight scenes weren't very well written, but the ghost stories were of high quality. Overall, it's worth reading. The real-world plot wasn't very engaging or exciting. Thumbs up!

Pshaw, I thought it was the afterlife from the title 😤😤

One suggestion: the abilities gained from the Holy Seal should be usable in the Mysteries of Rules, but they should at least have the ability to reduce the lethality of some rules. In the early stages of the story, most people are just ordinary, which is fine. But it feels unreasonable that so many people are dying in high-level matches later on.

Recommendation In this apocalyptic world, besides being wary of monsters suddenly emerging from the black fog, the "demons" 👿 in human skin are even more dangerous. Amidst a variety of unique and unpredictable crises, past experiences are utterly useless. Reborn, Fang Xiao initially thought he could overcome the dangers ahead based on his past life's experiences.

The fight scenes were poorly described.

I've read about 70 chapters so far, and aside from the occasional rambling, there are no other problems. I feel this book is quite good, and if nothing unexpected happens, it has the potential to become a huge hit.