Tabletop RPG: These Investigators Are Not Right
桌游：这群调查员不正常
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 129k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
51Chapters
0Votes
190Recs
15Fans
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Reader comments 11
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Isn't it true that the three golden chapters all contain so many poisonous points? I said before that coc is suitable for me because I am stupid and I am a detective enthusiast again. This is okay. From the beginning, some people started to do classic things and the protagonist just nodded and let it go. You can say that you are a social creature and don't want to cause trouble. It's like child's play and only the main criminal and the protagonist are locked up. The protagonist who nods, I take it as the plot needs it. Finally, you have a protagonist who knows what the dice roll is, but also doesn't know what a super game is. Here, even if you ask someone who caused trouble from the beginning to ask this question, it won't become a poisonous point. Anyway, I can't resist it.
After reading the two dungeons, I just feel that the protagonists are too abrupt and some behaviors are too inexplicable. I don't know why I got the Silver Key out of thin air in the first dungeon. In the second dungeon, Yaoyao, I don't know why she has so much goodwill towards the protagonist. She seems to treat the protagonist as her own relative as soon as they meet. That kind of unconditional trust, True Six After reading these two copies, the biggest feeling is that the protagonist cannot advance the plot. It is very uncomfortable to watch, has no characteristics at all, and is inexplicably emotional.
The subject matter and writing style are both good. I have never understood the original module, but the first story is a bit too deus ex machina, and it feels like a mess in the end.
It's not just a bunch of village rules and mistakes in the first chapter. If you want to write a board game novel, make it clear that you need to use village rules. Don't be serious about misleading newcomers with mistakes and omissions.
The author's dice can't be Naiya's dice. There are so many ridiculous failures and great successes...
I've thought about this idea before, but I didn't expect someone to actually write it
This is really the first time I've seen an online article about a board game.
Board games, can anyone recommend a more fun one?
Come on, the subject matter of the book is quite good, but when will the first update of the beast evolve?
Newcomers, take your time. Even if there are few people watching, don't give up too early. Your writing is not bad. Try your best. Come on.