
A Mayfly’s Journey
蜉蝣逆旅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 203k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
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The author should delete this paragraph after reading it. Keeping it will not be good for your popularity - but you should really go to Zhihu and read the articles by "Dancing" and "Wandering Toad" about the writing of novice Internet writers. Your first chapter is so messed up. The three characters at the beginning don't have names yet. The correct approach is that for most novices, other than the protagonist, there shouldn't be a single breathing thing in the beginning. If you are confident in your abilities, you can add a role, but the spotlight must always be on the protagonist. The two old guys at the beginning of your game put that blind bastard, and it took a long time for the ink to turn to the protagonist. That was really trying to persuade him to quit.
Chapter 70 has not been signed yet. It is recommended to cut it off.