Hyena's Journey

Alumni, do you have a book club? /Chapter 1-6 Thoughts/ *Introduction: First of all, the title and introduction of the book are not attractive. There is so little introduction. Dumb tape? After reading the introduction and title, I don't know what to say, (What is destined death and what happened? Only after the reader knows about it can he feel the pleasure of turning the tide after rebirth. This and rebirth together are one of the highlights, but it is not clearly written) About the world of the story Views, etc. Are not clear, (The background of the era (such as modern or near future? Imaginary or reality?), The power system, and even the name of the protagonist are not clear) * In summary: Introduction + book title + first three chapters + first fifty chapter titles are the most important. If I look at it according to my many years of reading experience, the synopsis + the title of the book is very similar to the work of a newcomer, which is unfinished and less than 1 million words, and feels like an old book from 15 years ago (xx Soldier King). *Chapter 1 and 2: First of all, maybe there are too many settings. It is dazzling to see so many forces, people, and proper nouns. That's not to say that it can't be done, but my impression is that the writing is very confusing. *Complaint 1: Why are there so many (him, them,) in Chapter 1 and 2? There are so many him in one paragraph in Chapter 2... *Complaint 2: The name of the force is too embarrassing, Tyrant Angel Õ_Õ