Wizard: Beginning with a Wizard's Right Eye

I don't think it will be able to continue. The plot is completely unclear, and the beginning feels like it skips dozens of chapters. Writing web novels like this is just self-indulgent.

A preface explaining the protagonist's past would be much better! The first few chapters were completely confusing.

The previous writing was too messy, with a bunch of fancy names. I can't even remember who the main character is. I only remember the perverted mentor because it's made up of two simple words.

I read over ten chapters and was completely baffled. The cheat codes, abilities, and timelines were all a jumbled mess. The battles were equally confusing; I didn't even understand how that indiscriminately killing first-tier characters fell to the protagonist. The entire plot consisted of the protagonist spouting nonsense, then a series of cutscenes like a game: start…end…and then the next story.

It's clear the author wanted to write a protagonist with overwhelming intelligence, but lacked the writing skills, only managing to create a protagonist who is overly clever.

Upon closer inspection, it doesn't seem as chaotic or incoherent as some people have described. The characters' actions are understandable through careful reading of the context. The details might be lacking, but that's not a major issue. The main problem lies in the overall framework. The characters' thoughts and actions in this world have a chaotic, low-intelligence AI feel.

Several parts are illogical. For example, the average age of the training camp participants and the landlady witch is stated to be 13.4 Years old. Leaving aside fighting skills and physical abilities, the fact that a 13.4-Year-old can communicate normally with all sorts of people without being rejected in that context is illogical, even today.

The opening plot is confusing. 🤫 The wizarding organization wants to capture that dark wizard, so why do they need to find the protagonist? Is it because they're not strong enough that they need to find the protagonist? Why can't they just call for reinforcements to make the protagonist betray them? 😅 The protagonist is just a weakling. What use is a first-level wizard apprentice? Is the only way to make the first-level dark wizard seem useless so the protagonist can kill him?

Having reached Chapter 4, I'm still quite confused. After reading the author's posts, it's clear they intend to write a good chapter. I'd like to mention some of the problems I've encountered. You said that it would take hundreds of words to explain everything, but some things can be roughly explained by adding a few words or mentioning a sentence.

Can't the protagonist get stronger outside of class? He's like an idiot, only practicing the corresponding skills in his class and spending the rest of his time showing off.