Let You Survive in the Last Days, You Built a City

It's so funny, the sweet male protagonist is so clueless, I couldn't finish the three chapters. Sit back and wait for Shennong to tell you.

The third golden chapter was poorly written. I didn't see the end of the world at all. I just watched the protagonist being a licker. It's understandable that many authors are virgins, but rather than start licking women fiercely in the first three chapters, I just want to see if you can write a good start in the first three chapters.

I haven't read the book, but can you use some logic in the apocalyptic literature and directly ban nuclear bombs and technology? I really can't stand this unreasonable law. This ban on electricity is even more outrageous. All animal brain nerves rely on bioelectrical conduction. If you ban this thing, the earth will directly become a Death Star, okay?

It's too procrastinating. It's only been six or seven chapters and the protagonist is like a fool who doesn't know that the apocalypse is coming. The attribute panel will appear in front of you tomorrow. No wonder the results are so bad. There is a reason.

Comrade, continue. I'm waiting for the sequel. We are both writers, so let's encourage each other.