
Xianxia: From the Start, I Solve an Ancient Go Puzzle
仙侠:开局破解千古棋局
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 745k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Stats
359Chapters
32Recommendations
5Fans
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It's so incongruous for a male prince to refer to himself as "this palace" (本宫).
I feel that the plot of your book flows quite smoothly, but the problem lies in your writing style. First, the scene descriptions are too chaotic in the first three chapters, making it difficult for readers to immerse themselves in the story. Second, the dialogue is a bit awkward.
260,000 words and it's still not published? It's been sent out.
I think, and this is just my personal opinion, that the protagonist shouldn't be deliberately suppressed. For example, the text explains that players who transmigrate into the game can directly become disciples, but the author creates difficulties, making him an outer disciple. This is just for the reader's perspective; it's an unnecessary conflict. You could modify the plot.
Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง