A Superman in Marvel

I saw comments saying the writing was terrible, and I was wondering how bad it could be. But after reading one chapter, I was speechless. The author skillfully uses concise writing, realistic descriptions, and simple imagery. I vaguely remember the last time I saw writing like this was when I was in sixth grade.

Surprisingly, it felt pretty good. Is there anything wrong with earning money through one's own abilities? Absolutely nothing wrong with it.

I just saw the latest version, and it's awful. The beginning was alright, but unfortunately, it started going awry after it was released. It's now a harem anime/novel hybrid, combining harem elements from both the novel and the anime, just mindless fun. I reckon it's starting to fall apart; the novel has already become nonsensical.

This is purely a self-indulgent, feel-good story. I didn't use my brain and found it quite enjoyable.

I stop reading any anime that features Japanese soldiers; I have a strong aversion to anime featuring Japanese soldiers.

Charging for saving lives. Saving an airplane for free? Saving an insurance company for free? Even Superman is afraid of capital. 😂

I've written quite a bit, but my writing hasn't improved at all. There's no specific psychological or action description; I just use surprise and joy to gloss over things, like a diary entry. I'm quite disappointed; I thought it would get a little better.

A paid Superman? That's incredibly generous! Would he become president or Superman?

Well, the author's writing style made me feel like I was reading an account book or a diary.

The character of Superman is great, but the writing is the worst I've ever seen.