Girl, Let Me Check It Out

The writing is quite good, but the male protagonist is a bit hypocritical and makes me uncomfortable to watch. Personally, I still prefer Shura Field and Master Duan Shui is as scumbag. After all, every inch of harem is worth an inch of blood, half an inch of white silk and half an inch of heart. There is always a price to pay for having a harem.

These are the tickets. They are all given to you. There is not a drop left.

This kind of love that requires sacrificing oneself from time to time is too heavy, and this kind of love that leaves the other person without saying goodbye is too heavy. In what age do people still think that sacrificing themselves will definitely make the other person's life better? Love depends on two people supporting each other and understanding each other. I think the heroine and the hero saying goodbye to each other before leaving is more empathetic than the behavior of saying goodbye without saying goodbye, which touches oneself, and the behavior of touching oneself and making another person sad.

Ah! Let me say a few words. It's not a disparagement, it's just that I personally don't like this kind of book that is full of tactics. The main reason is that the plot is too tactful. I feel that this book is the method of high-dimensional martial arts. High-dimensional martial arts are more enjoyable. Anyone who doesn't accept it will be killed. Anyone who doesn't accept it will be killed. This type of book.

After reading it from the beginning, it really got better and better as it was written. The first few chapters were a little awkward and made me feel numb, but the rest of it basically didn't get any more annoying. There are two problems. The first is that the male protagonist's plans have put him in danger several times. Although the male protagonist in this article is not a strategist who often makes clever plans, but he has a big picture image, so naturally he must know that he must have a backup plan in everything. However, accidents happened in the three plans in the book. If it were not for God's will, they would inevitably not end well. This will give readers the feeling that it is not the male protagonist's fault but the author's. Second, it is obvious that the author wants to create three-dimensional characters for each heroine, and it is quite effective. There is a small suggestion: when writing the two sides of the character, do not separate them too seriously. For example, Yun Jiang, who is usually a cute and lovable little master, "suddenly becomes indifferent" when it comes to her parents. A person who has tragic memories but still maintains innocence is her indelible charm, but this pain will be interspersed in her innocence and spread out in an unconcealed way, rather than a sudden change like switching forms. Please refer to it and add more updates.

Collect the entire harem? I only love this one

The romance is well written, but your main plot is really slow. Before, I thought it was the protagonist who came to rebel, but it turned out to be the end of the world, helping others to rise to power. Judging from the protagonist's current abilities, he can't do anything if he doesn't eat soft rice. Today the heroine will help, and tomorrow the heroine will help. More than three hundred chapters have passed and the power has not been established, and the villains are more powerful than the last. This book is really confusing to read. The summary is that the emotional scene was well written, but it was overdone. The main line is far behind.

Lao Da, Los Angeles has already been burned by you at four o'clock in the morning.

The writing is beautiful, quite up to my level back then, not bad!

You are still young, so you might as well bite the bullet and work harder to write 4,000 words. After all, you are writing a book online, but 4,000 words seems a bit effortless, and readers will not feel comfortable reading it. It is better to just write 6,000 words, which is very standard. But since we have already written 6,000 words, why not do another 4,000, or directly go up to 10,000, which will not be the same level as before. Since your hand speed is not that bad, it shows that you are working very hard! But it's already 10,000 words. If you don't add 10,000 more and code the meaning of 20,000 words, that would be great! Since you already have 20,000 yuan, do you still care about that? It's not that bad at all, right? That's right, listen to me, code 100,000 words today! The man who makes the online book writing pyramid.

There are only a few chapters left until the latest chapter. I'm a little tired from watching, so I'll take care of myself first. Overall, it was good, but the pace was a bit flat (the only ups and downs were when the prince who killed the prince was imprisoned, which was well written, but it still felt a bit awkward and lacked preparation for the people to ask for orders). In addition, I don't like Fang Tang's plot very much. It's not that the characterization is not good, it's just that I don't like the character of this empress (future empress). It's just because I have too many tastes. (The bigger hidden reason may be that I want to see the protagonist reorganize the world instead of being a framer of a rubbish dynasty. Not to mention that the prototype of this dynasty is my least favorite Jin Dynasty). Also, the biggest threat from the beginning has been the barbarians, but the sudden appearance of the end of the world (the end of civilization?) Is a bit confusing, and to be honest, the logical relationship between saving the world and supporting the queen is too forced. (Mainly because I haven't made it clear whether the end of the world is caused by a toy, a natural disaster or a man-made disaster? Or is it luck and cause and effect? It's all about the Riddler...) PS: I just made some complaints after reading it. The book is generally good, especially the emotional descriptions are very delicate.

Why was my post deleted? I've read more than ten chapters, but there's nothing bad about it. There are only one or two places where I feel like the description was too strong. Hahahahaha. This is a very good start. It's very interesting. Check out the follow-up and continue to express your thoughts below this post.

Those female protagonists are quite good, but they do these things just because of the male protagonist, which feels like a failure. I think they should have their own independent personalities and ideals, not because of the male protagonist.

Please, author, follow me quickly 😭😭😭

As long as Lao Da doesn't die, I don't expect it to be finished 😭

Let's see if there is any chance of you being resurrected. Wait and see.

How is the author's postgraduate entrance examination? Will there be any updates?

Lao Da is expected to be resurrected in early April🙂🙂

Are there any more before the Chinese New Year? Boss🙂😍